Pizznazz

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Really liking the game so far. Although, I really like the bestiality scenes with Rocket the most. Hope we can finally get some puppies soon, and it's a shame that Rocket didn't have his balls grow back from eating so much alien slime. I was hoping for that, poor pupper. :(
Well, he still ate enough to ensure that he got his pecker up for Zoe to suck ;)

Pretty much the whole stage 2 part before you get the nest but zoe is at 10/10 corruption already.
The whole progression seems to be completely linear, which makes sense for some parts where the family stories interlace (e.g. Bro+Gran), but is completely unnecessary at others.
That early stage is fairly linear yes, but largely because I intended at as a sort of introduction (also limited by my rudimentary programming ability). The next lot of character updates will be much more choice oriented.
 

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I'm not really sure where the current patch ends. I'm at the part immediately after you get the wombbrood thing in you, and after that i'm clueless. The only thing I can find to do is give Rocket some slime, everyone else doesn't have the interact option anymore.
 
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Oh Shit! I remember seeing this as v0.1.2 on TFGamesite ages ago! I liked it then, really glad to see a comeback.

I think I'm at the end of the current content, is there anywhere else to put surveillance other than the bathroom and zoe's bedroom?

I'm not really sure where the current patch ends. I'm at the part immediately after you get the wombbrood thing in you, and after that i'm clueless. The only thing I can find to do is give Rocket some slime, everyone else doesn't have the interact option anymore.
Have you tried looking if you can do anything on the laptop, such as buy things for Joan?

EDIT: Ok I looked in the html file, and you cannot
 
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I'm not really sure where the current patch ends. I'm at the part immediately after you get the wombbrood thing in you, and after that i'm clueless. The only thing I can find to do is give Rocket some slime, everyone else doesn't have the interact option anymore.
here is some info for you
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Toadsith

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Just started playing the game today and love the writing!

Reading through everybody's comments made me realize I hadn't reached the end of the current update. The interactions with Rocket seemed to be repeating, so I just stopped doing them, but now realize I need to do more with the beastie. A mild hint might help players repeat that scene enough times to get far enough. Currently a lot of days end with me going "I guess that's all I can do today?" but I'm now realizing that currently all of the scenes seem to be interlinked so I can't just focus on corrupting the Grandma, or the Mother alone—I need to corrupt every creature in the house simultaneously. Maybe each day can start with the alien giving a little nod towards who is being neglected in the corruption?

Anyway: great writing and premise. It feels a bit linear where I'm at, but I'm assuming as the world expands, more agency will be given to the player. Many have already said it, but this is in a really good place for a Ver. 0.3 update. Keep up the good work! You've def got a new fan :D
 
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I can only give one tip aside from not letting this project die:


Please consider letting Zoe keep at least a part of her personality. The interplay between the worm and Zoe is not only funny at times, but it makes the entire proceedings have a wholesome touch to it that is really enjoyable (as wholesome as these shennanigans can get obviously)
 
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Karnewarrior

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while the content is "Required" you don't have to read it
True, but in my experience (and I assume other peoples' experience as well), not only is it unimmersive to have to skip text and scenes you're not into, but those scenes usually get called out later as well. So even if I skip the dog-dickings, later on I might get smacked in the face with a reminder that, to Zoe, Rocket is 100% a viable sexual partner... Such as what happens when her hormones get upgraded. And skipping scenes piecemeal is definitely not worth it.

I dunno how it broke the code, though. As far as I can tell right now Rockets scenes are totally self-contained outside of that one hormone-upgrade scene and being needed to unlock the wombworm.

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Also on the question of bestiality. I am aware that is a massive no-no for some people, but as I'm currently doing this for free, I'm going to write what I want to write. Sorry to be blunt, but best to lay my cards out right away. I will definitely consider making it optional, but as it stands at the moment, it makes sense that Zoe needs to placate Rocket. She can't have an inquisitive dog sniffing around her nest now, can she?
Sure, girl, write what you want. It being optional would be a big help for widening appeal beyond people cool with the knot though. An option to pacify him by attaching a lesser mindworm to him, slipping slime into his food dish and getting him off your back that way... hucking the little bastard into the furnace like Dio

I can see the logic behind getting him out of the way, I just would hate to have to drop what's looking like a pretty good game because one of my anti-fetishes is mandatory. I guess it all depends on how much that complicates future scenes though. It's probably not worth it if it means changing nearly every scene, but that raises the question of how much the dog is supposed to get involved to begin with, which might not be planned right now.
 
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AtomicGoblin

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I dunno how it broke the code, though. As far as I can tell right now Rockets scenes are totally self-contained outside of that one hormone-upgrade scene and being needed to unlock the wombworm.
The reason had been that the changes with rocket hadn't been staying between versions when it had been completely optional so for the time being it is "required"
 

Pizznazz

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Just started playing the game today and love the writing!

Reading through everybody's comments made me realize I hadn't reached the end of the current update. The interactions with Rocket seemed to be repeating, so I just stopped doing them, but now realize I need to do more with the beastie. A mild hint might help players repeat that scene enough times to get far enough. Currently a lot of days end with me going "I guess that's all I can do today?" but I'm now realizing that currently all of the scenes seem to be interlinked so I can't just focus on corrupting the Grandma, or the Mother alone—I need to corrupt every creature in the house simultaneously. Maybe each day can start with the alien giving a little nod towards who is being neglected in the corruption?

Anyway: great writing and premise. It feels a bit linear where I'm at, but I'm assuming as the world expands, more agency will be given to the player. Many have already said it, but this is in a really good place for a Ver. 0.3 update. Keep up the good work! You've def got a new fan
Hey! Thank you for your kind words! :) I'm glad you've been enjoying it so far and I hope you managed to get through and find all the content. Yup, it fairly linear so far, but it's really a way to introduce the characters and the flaws Zoe can hope to exploit. I'm planning each character to have multiple corruption and transformation routes, with a variations within each.

Please consider letting Zoe keep at least a part of her personality. The interplay between the worm and Zoe is not only funny at times, but it makes the entire proceedings have a wholesome touch to it that is really enjoyable (as wholesome as these shennanigans can get obviously)
I hadn't planned to give Zoe a mind wipe. Her love, care and desire to heal the hurts of her family are key to her corruption. She might end up wanting to fuck and infest her family, but she still loves them just as much as she did before, only that love manifests in a slightly unconventional way ;)

Sure, girl, write what you want. It being optional would be a big help for widening appeal beyond people cool with the knot though. An option to pacify him by attaching a lesser mindworm to him, slipping slime into his food dish and getting him off your back that way... hucking the little bastard into the furnace like Dio
I take your point and will probably work your suggestions into future versions.

Oh Shit! I remember seeing this as v0.1.2 on TFGamesite ages ago! I liked it then, really glad to see a comeback.
It's great to be back!
 

Mercedes

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A very interesting story that captivates even without pictures.
However, I just got an error message.

Day 14 - At night - Grandmother's bedroom
Error: <<if>>: whitespace is not allowed between the "else" and "if" in <<elseif>> clause (# 3)
 
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MemesAreLife

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A very interesting story that captivates even without pictures.
However, I just got an error message.

Day 14 - At night - Grandmother's bedroom
Error: <<if>>: whitespace is not allowed between the "else" and "if" in <<elseif>> clause (# 3)
Thank you for reporting, will look into it asap
 

fenftw

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Nothing new to add, just wanted to show some support. Genuinely one of my favorite text games I have played (and I've played just about all of them), and its still pretty early in development! Really hope to see this continued <3
 
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Pizznazz

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Nothing new to add, just wanted to show some support. Genuinely one of my favorite text games I have played (and I've played just about all of them), and its still pretty early in development! Really hope to see this continued <3
Aw, thanks. That's so lovely of you to say. I got on with writing V0.3.2 today and I'm really excited take the character's stories forward. So yeah, watch this space! X
 

Splatter_1

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Question,,, So as of this update, How many Surveillance Organisms can you place? I have 1 in the nest and 1 in the main shower. But I have another one ready to be born but no option I find to place it anywhere....
 

AtomicGoblin

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Question,,, So as of this update, How many Surveillance Organisms can you place? I have 1 in the nest and 1 in the main shower. But I have another one ready to be born but no option I find to place it anywhere....
currently those 2 places are the only ones available
 
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