Hey guys! This week I’ve been writing. I know it was disappointing to push back the release date for this episode, but I’m confident the improvements I’m making will be worth it.
This week I worked mainly on the opening two scenes of the episode. When you’re firing a rifle, tiny adjustments to your starting position can have a huge effect on where your shot ends up. I’m trying to do something similar with the improvements to this episode: making some subtle changes to everybody’s characterisation (the heroine and the bargirls) and some of their early interactions will make all the later scenes work better.
As well as improving the story, I’m also trying to sex the episode up a little bit (without jumping the shark). This week I added a new topless scene that I hope you will find quite…titillating.
Announcement on upcoming side quests
After this episode is released, I plan for the following three episodes to be side quests that will hopefully be released at a quick and satisfying pace. These are Booth Babe (unlocked in the last episode if you agree to help your Thai bar regulars at their conference), Big Mac (unlocked if you let Connor give your number to his friend, Mac) and White Russian (unlocked in the next episode).
An issue that Bread Pitt and Irioth raised is that it might feel like the heroine is just off doing side quests instead of advancing her main mission. So I’m now planning to include a short club shift with each side quest: this will give us the feeling that she’s working regularly in the club, and also allows us to do some more sexy barmaid stuff between side quests. (Also I find the switch between her real life and the club shifts subtly, inherently sexy for some reason, so I'm excited about getting to explore that a little.)
Okay, that's it for this week's report! I'm going to get right back onto writing tomorrow morning. Have an awesome week guys and hit me up on Discord or in DMs here if you have ideas, questions or worries, it really helps.
Hey guys! This week I’ve been writing. I know it was disappointing to push back the release date for this episode, but I’m confident the improvements I’m making will be worth it.
This week I worked mainly on the opening two scenes of the episode. When you’re firing a rifle, tiny adjustments to your starting position can have a huge effect on where your shot ends up. I’m trying to do something similar with the improvements to this episode: making some subtle changes to everybody’s characterisation (the heroine and the bargirls) and some of their early interactions will make all the later scenes work better.
As well as improving the story, I’m also trying to sex the episode up a little bit (without jumping the shark). This week I added a new topless scene that I hope you will find quite…titillating.
Announcement on upcoming side quests
After this episode is released, I plan for the following three episodes to be side quests that will hopefully be released at a quick and satisfying pace. These are Booth Babe (unlocked in the last episode if you agree to help your Thai bar regulars at their conference), Big Mac (unlocked if you let Connor give your number to his friend, Mac) and White Russian (unlocked in the next episode).
An issue that Bread Pitt and Irioth raised is that it might feel like the heroine is just off doing side quests instead of advancing her main mission. So I’m now planning to include a short club shift with each side quest: this will give us the feeling that she’s working regularly in the club, and also allows us to do some more sexy barmaid stuff between side quests. (Also I find the switch between her real life and the club shifts subtly, inherently sexy for some reason, so I'm excited about getting to explore that a little.)
Okay, that's it for this week's report! I'm going to get right back onto writing tomorrow morning. Have an awesome week guys and hit me up on Discord or in DMs here if you have ideas, questions or worries, it really helps.