Yeah I agree with Nope on this. Best to keep the criticism accurate and without hyperbole or expansion into territory where it isn't really accurate. I understand that it's human nature to do this--in our minds, we aren't well-equipped to easily distinguish between different types of bad/unwanted things or to precisely delimit them. However, on the writer side, if we see something that we think is untrue, it irks us, and sticks in our minds, distracting from what needs to be said. For that reason it's best to keep our eyes on the prize: Yo Crush you are slow and it isn't a normal kind of slow.
Great advice was posted while I typed this too. We don't have to make paragraphs that are ready for prime time as soon as we type them. Sometimes writing needs to be incremental, and taking care of part of the incremental process can even help put us in the mood to write. And, the mood is crucial. The point is to evoke feeling, not to have every comma in the right place the first time.
Great advice was posted while I typed this too. We don't have to make paragraphs that are ready for prime time as soon as we type them. Sometimes writing needs to be incremental, and taking care of part of the incremental process can even help put us in the mood to write. And, the mood is crucial. The point is to evoke feeling, not to have every comma in the right place the first time.
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