- Sep 30, 2017
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Holy shit! Finally finished Christine, Jessica and Quinn stories and I actually have to agree - this game needs a major rework.
I let the content pile up for a while because it's pretty short taken piece by piece and I'm glad I did but damn, this writing is up there with the cringiest shit I've seen anywhere. It's like a simp author-inserting himself into a chad. He's ripped, has a huge dick and women flock to him without him trying but each and every one treats him like a doormat, pushes him around and the dumb fuck allows it all to happen because, despite all his attributes, he's pussy starved.
You can replace all his dialogue with "Yass Queen!" and it's the same shit. They all behave possessively and he acts like he has 0 agency to counter this.
I actually hope the dev goes through with a rebuild - this has no reason to be in Unity, it's a perfect Ren'Py game and changing the engine would cut the bugs and lag. Plus, any improvement to the story would raise the quality of this game beyond just beautiful renders in an incest setting