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Neat update. Short and sweet, admittedly with a bitter leaf added to that cocktail ...
Holy moly! Susi's back, and with a vengeance.
Bully for Susi actually - adds grit, ginger and danger to the oyster of girl paradise that the MC was starting to live in (with the threat of the MC's father strangely suspended). Sex-n-love harem harmony is fine and dandy, but the suspense & hazard needed a bit of upping again at that point. Just a pity it was only Leah stripped & bowed at the vengeful mercy of Mistress Bullwhip in the MC's contorted nightmare (I bet he got a boner from it). A parade of all the young pasha's beauties would have been a fine sight ...
Never mind, you can't expect too much from a fantasy within a fantasy within a fantasy ...
So Hailey is quite a sweetie after all. Maybe the MC should say a polite, tearful farewell to all the other girls and shack up with her alone ...? But then, to go straight from booze and synthetics straight to roll-your-own-and-keep-it-in-the-family wouldn't make much sense, I guess. Nicotine and tar on the lungs - not to be recommended as a life change.
(On the serious side, there are a lot of little typos in the update, but that doesn't seriously clog the plot or the progress. The demands of speed can be unforgiving.)
Holy moly! Susi's back, and with a vengeance.
Bully for Susi actually - adds grit, ginger and danger to the oyster of girl paradise that the MC was starting to live in (with the threat of the MC's father strangely suspended). Sex-n-love harem harmony is fine and dandy, but the suspense & hazard needed a bit of upping again at that point. Just a pity it was only Leah stripped & bowed at the vengeful mercy of Mistress Bullwhip in the MC's contorted nightmare (I bet he got a boner from it). A parade of all the young pasha's beauties would have been a fine sight ...
Never mind, you can't expect too much from a fantasy within a fantasy within a fantasy ...
So Hailey is quite a sweetie after all. Maybe the MC should say a polite, tearful farewell to all the other girls and shack up with her alone ...? But then, to go straight from booze and synthetics straight to roll-your-own-and-keep-it-in-the-family wouldn't make much sense, I guess. Nicotine and tar on the lungs - not to be recommended as a life change.
(On the serious side, there are a lot of little typos in the update, but that doesn't seriously clog the plot or the progress. The demands of speed can be unforgiving.)
I will say this about Susan: no one has come close to guessing what is going on yet.
It's not what you think.
What - you mean The Susan's working as an agent for that strangely absent Jealous God, the MC's father?!
She IS his dad?!?!?!?! - Susin Vader?!?!
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btw: Cute little touch that this update starts with a sight of the lower half of a nubile female body in skimpy underwear draped apparently asleep (or as good as) on the couch - and that this is not commented on, or the character identified, in the text track.
I thought it was Hailey for a mo (as she is defo "Underwear Girl", her fave attire), but what was she doing on the party group scene? She hadn't gone along.
So then we find out whose nubile body that was. ... Good co-operation between graphic artist and writer, when not everything is spelt out that you see, or read, in the other medium. The best Graphic/Visual Novels don't simply say everything twice, so to speak. Space for the viewer-reader to think and imagine and breathe.
I thought it was Hailey for a mo (as she is defo "Underwear Girl", her fave attire), but what was she doing on the party group scene? She hadn't gone along.
So then we find out whose nubile body that was. ... Good co-operation between graphic artist and writer, when not everything is spelt out that you see, or read, in the other medium. The best Graphic/Visual Novels don't simply say everything twice, so to speak. Space for the viewer-reader to think and imagine and breathe.
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One of the reasons I'm being sympathetic towards susan is because i remember how some people was treating Hailey when she first appeared.
Oh she's a lazy drunk, She's a spy sent by dad, She just trying to ruin our harem. Hailey was bashed by some people and you can go back a couple of pages around the update where she appeared and see it.
It turned out Hailey was just a broken woman who just wanted some comfort. Then you had Alice, who was already against her from the jump with leah not far behind being aggressive in the beginning(yes i know the reason was because of her sister drinking but she over did it imo).
Plus Hailey's the best girl.
Oh she's a lazy drunk, She's a spy sent by dad, She just trying to ruin our harem. Hailey was bashed by some people and you can go back a couple of pages around the update where she appeared and see it.
It turned out Hailey was just a broken woman who just wanted some comfort. Then you had Alice, who was already against her from the jump with leah not far behind being aggressive in the beginning(yes i know the reason was because of her sister drinking but she over did it imo).
Plus Hailey's the best girl.
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It's not like it was supposed to be a mystery. Melody had passed out the night before in her underwear (previous update).
Here's my thought on how Susan could plausibly be a cop now:
Susan was a cop before she was a professor. She had the training and experience in the past, maybe even worked as an assistant or trainee but ended up teaching instead.
I personally don't want her to be part of the harem, but if her story ends with her in a better place than where we met her, I'd be happy. We will see where all this goes in the next update.
Susan was a cop before she was a professor. She had the training and experience in the past, maybe even worked as an assistant or trainee but ended up teaching instead.
I personally don't want her to be part of the harem, but if her story ends with her in a better place than where we met her, I'd be happy. We will see where all this goes in the next update.
Yeah if you want it in those most basic of terms, one of those is technically correct. But it's everything that comes after that which is incorrect about the theories
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It has to be something with the Dean then... Or with the school itself.
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Previously i already said it, Hailey and Susan are mostly the same. Its just Hailey WAS and Susan IS. Hailey told us she was wild during her student years, during the story of her past i was catching myself with idea that she describes Susan. Word to word. But Hailey recieves love, when Susan only hatred. Everyone describing Susan as a lowless whore, a slut and so on and so on. Replay Haileys story, she WAS a slut, almost a whore. Imagine she fucked one brother, than married another. She told us she love(!) the taste of cum(???) and missed it (?????), she loved recieving it a lot during studenthood, even during this update she tells us that she had a lot of practive, as she had more years compared to other MCs girls. (this point is debatable, yes). Give Susan 10 years and you'll see Hailey. Broken woman, with broken life. Imagine that she never found happyness, has no family and strugles to keep up to her previous mistakes. Its Hailey we see now.
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I agree with the fired bit. I don't like her character but I didn't really want her to be fired. Just wish you had the ability to tell her no and continue. But there is always an argument for choices and against, choices brings in a complexity that usually breaks the game's story line and becomes much less than what it could be.
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For the sake of argument, let's say that they would've gotten video evidence of the things she was doing. They could've gone to her and said "Look, we've got video evidence of you doing these things, maybe you could stop doing this? If not, we will take it to the dean," or they could've gone to the dean with the evidence and asked that he get her to to stop doing these things, and if she refuses to change her ways, maybe she could end up losing her job. The player isn't given any choice to resolve this without getting her fired, though.
A more clever way might've been to find ways to get under her skin, and keep poking away at her and eventually break her down and maybe make her into an ally somehow. There was no choice, and no chance at redemption for Susan, at least at the time. I'm thinking that will probably change in coming updates to the game.
Also, due process? You're not usually given any due process when you're fired from a job. XD
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Yes, there are two versions available for download. “Regular” and “Gallery Unlocked”. Although I don’t know why the gallery unlocked version would treat all text as read. Because there is only one difference between the two versions and that is that the variable lock is removed for viewing images in the gallery. It should in no way impact unseen text.