- Oct 24, 2019
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Thank you very much for the information. Since I was wrong in assuming that the game's practically over, I have gone through and updated my review. We will see how this game turns out in the end.
- Dec 17, 2017
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Dude...I think you're missing a comma there.
- Jan 10, 2018
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Well consider it also as a strange twisted compliment. None of them would be so upset if they had not been pretty invested and happy with what you had been doing before it.
Though admittedly one advice a bit above here that said it might not have been so wise to have the episode before the endings started feel a bit depressing even if needed for story, might be a thing to keep in mind for any future projects. Just try to inject a ray of sunshine and hope next time before ending the update.
Concerning who and what you will decide to include in the endings in the end, remember you can never make everyone 100% happy, so first make sure you yourselves are happy and proud with it.
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- May 26, 2017
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Oh, come on! You're like The Last of Us 2 from adult VN world with this update. No one was expecting it, no one was wanting it, no one even dared to think that it might happen.
You've missed every possible target with it.
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Hey! Do not insult the developers!
Here the girls are beautiful, not angry and want to be with boys, and not become boys.
- Dec 13, 2018
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It would seem to me that it stems from the abruptness of this ending. Everything happens so quickly and then it jumps to several years later to recap the events of the last few years. There are also several story threads that have not been finished, like Alice trying to tempt Karina into some lesbian action, Leah trying to do something similar with Melody, how the MC/Hailey relationship will develop after their first time together, how the MC/Susan relationship will develop if the MC accepted her, finally getting to have sex with Karina if you didn't do so before going away on the trip, and a resolution to the break-in at Hailey's house. All of these story threads are unresolved as of this ending moment and it feels quite frustrating not to have seen these continue to play out.
Also, as I said in a previous post, when the MC and Alice are told they're being kicked out, it's surprising that neither of them consider moving in with their Aunt Hailey. She'd more than likely have been happy to have them considering how close they've become but also, given the recent break-in, she might be even happier to have them as she would feel safer with other people in the house. Had this happened, then perhaps more time could have been spent resolving those unfinished story threads before reaching the ending of this story.
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- Jan 10, 2018
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Likely all those points will be addressed but differently in each ending, based upon the ending you choose and that is the reason they chose to end the update as they did. Just it puts a lot of weight on the various endings and it made the last episode before the endings a bit of a downer admittedly.
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yeah i don't give a shit who doesn't like this game .. i myself enjoy it alot .... Dev. your doing a great job
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I don't understand VN writers urge(obsession?) to make sure there is a (usually happy) conclusion of every story element. Is it really such a bad thing to leave things open and have the reader use their imagination to fill in the blancs?
I would have been perfectly happy to have it end in a big scene after the beach and then showing a last screen with the father at the door, fade to black and the text "The end....?". Hell it also opens up opportunities for a spin off, for example how will the religious blond reconcile all the "improper"things she has done.
Maybe I am weird but I like stories that end on a cliffhanger leaving me with lots of questions.
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great game dev. but seriously, not going to live with the recently robbed lonely aunt seen like the biggest plot hole ever, like joel in tolu2 telling his name to strangers
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I agree. Ending the game on a cliffhanger is just cruel. Ending an episode on a cliffhanger is much better. Makes you wait, anticipate, speculate. And there may be some other ates out there too.
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George Lucas thought Jar Jar Binks was a good idea... creative artistic license does not guarantee favorable reception by an audience. Not trying to attack, meesa just trying to make a simple comparison.