With this episode basically being a setup for the next few future episodes, or even the whole game.
Since the characters start refering to each other by different names that are mentioned once, would prefer for the dialogue box to do smth like MC name // MC undercover alias, since i forget who is who with the new names.
The alco/porno-holic friend was an interesting idea to explore, but i feel it got ended quite quickly and abruptly, few words and bam, the friend "got" the girl.
Installing those cameras on a diner..... like who wouldn't think that some funky stuff is happening since they installed pretty much some kind of military-grade equipment.
Hard to judge this chapter since it is definetly more of a part of a bigger story arc.
With them only talking about going to america all i can see is this.