Alright, this was wonderful not gonna lie. One thing I liked was that trans women was handled pretty gracefully when talking about them, even though the protagonist isn't one herself. Love to see it, even if it did come off as Paige wanting to be with a trans woman for the novelty of it. I assume that isn't the case though since she's been what? friends? With Jen for a year now, I'd think she sees Jen as more than just a trans woman to bone. Especially since she was friends with her without knowing about Jen having a dick.
I'll admit though, I don't know how I feel about Ash going all heart-eyes when Jen came in her. I don't mind people that are into it, but the whole addiction to futa cum isn't really something I'm into. Then again, I'm generally not into games where the protagonist 'hypnotizes' women either so I suspect it's more the control element in general, rather than futa cum addiction, haha. But what do I know, for all I know Ash could've just really liked it even if I suspect that isn't the case.
It might also be good to mark the game as a kinetic novel, or at the very least say in the description that it's a more kinetic experience since there isn't really any meaningful decision making on the player side of thing, outside of generally choosing which daydreams Jen has. I did notice that there was potential for peeking on Alexis having consequences, but I feel like unless those things change the game drastically, then it's still more kinetic novel than an actual game. Don't get me wrong though, there's nothing wrong with kinetic novels at all. I just went into this game expecting to have more meaningful control over things than I did I suppose.
I guess that's a brief overview of what I'm thinking after having completed what's in the game so far.