So, I have a question. What is with all the urination? Women don't produce that much liquid when they cum. Their bladders are smaller on average than a man's and she would have had to consume an insane amount of fluid to produce that much in a series of orgasms. It would have been clearer as a result.
I still don't understand why women squirting is such a thing pushed in porn other than the acting is so bad that they had to come up with some kind of way to convince you that the women actually were able to orgasm (even if they didn't). No one really falls for that, do they?
I could understand for those who enjoy urination content in general (and it begs the question that the urination tag isn't on this VN actually), but in reality this isn't a real thing.
I would say this VN is almost 100% perfect except for that one thing. The writing and animation do amazingly well in conveying the build up and release of the womens' orgasms without the artificial visual aspect of squirting like I mentioned about porn above.