For me and for a lot of other people it's ok. I don't have different monitors and GPUs to check it before release, so I didn't think about it. It just makes it darker for you. So most probably, you need to increase brightness or smth.1. Do I really have to adjust the brightness on my screen to get better visual colors? I see vast amount of images too tinted to see the image clearer.
I will not do it so dark anymore. But, again, on my side, I can see everything.
Sorry, but porn movie is the best choice for you in that case. I'll be keeping this style of narration the entire game.2. Too much monologue. Just get to the point. I'm finding myself reading detail after detail a chore. No need to go beyond than 2 metaphors/similes to describe the smell, taste, and touch the MC is experiencing. I (would) like the visual description be kept at 1 sentence, well at none at all and let the image speak for itself.
You are the first one, who didn't like the writing. And a lot of my supporters like it.
All these feelings, smells, sounds - you can not make an image describing it by itself. And it adds to immersion.