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No I think he has his brighness settings on the computer very high and due to this has everything really dark. A lot of people setup their monitor or nvidia color settings and due to this this game is to dark.while i understand folks concern about the darkness..i find your "does not want to co-operate" the most arrogant entitled comment i've ever seen on this forum..lol...it is his game..LOL...99% of us got it for free.we should co-operate with him in hopes we'll continue to get it
So yes this is his game I agree, but I think he needs to calibrate his screen.
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This is currently one of my favourite games. I love the way the MC is teetering on the brink of madness - just a little push and he'll be full-on batshit crazy. Great story, horny AF, great renders - although I agree with the monitor calibration comment (the dev needs to play around with the lighting and increase the overall contrast - we need to be able to see the greatness of the renders). All characters fleshed out very nicely except for the big sister - I expect that will come a bit later. All in all - terrific.
I totally disagree. Not moving the story forward is the whole idea when you're going for a slow build-up. Dream sequences are a great way to give us - the viewers - something to look at while we are waiting for the story to progress, otherwise we get situations where there is absolutely no sexual content until the 14th release, and people start wondering what this game is doing on a place like f95zone in the first place. I like a slow build-up of the main story, but I still want to be entertained in the meantime, and dream sequences and peeping/ peeking (without getting caught, as that would advance/ alter the story), are very good ways of letting us have our cake and eat it too.
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Slow build up is okay. Dreams sequence is no build up. Zero build up. Nada.
After watching a lot of porn, the settings (who they are and how they came to do that act (despite being family etc) are what makes a scene sexy for me. Dream has none of that because the setting is not "real", you know it is just in MCs head and at least for me, that makes it bland. Just people having sex with no setup. I would rather have more of that "slow" build up, rather than 0 build up. The next dream scene could have a mega orgy and it would do nothing for me. But if the story somehow organically evolved to said mega orgy, I would love the shit out of it.
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Dream sequence means the dev is out of ideas or is milking the game
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Loved the game , i said that again couple of months ago, the fetished that are already there and the ones that are hinted are my cup of tea, so i do enjoy and enjoyed every bit of the update.
I wish the dream seq was shorter though.
The bro-sis in bed dialogue and expressions were top notch!
Great job Dev, keep on being dirty , there is so much vanilla in VN we really need an exclusive non vanilla game and GM has allllll the damn potential to be among the best if not the best.
KEEP IT UP. CONGRATS.
I wish the dream seq was shorter though.
The bro-sis in bed dialogue and expressions were top notch!
Great job Dev, keep on being dirty , there is so much vanilla in VN we really need an exclusive non vanilla game and GM has allllll the damn potential to be among the best if not the best.
KEEP IT UP. CONGRATS.
I think dream sequences are an attempted solution at appeasing both people who want a slow build up and people who go "where are the sex scenes?!?"
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Would be better to just save those renders for actual story progression so we can get there faster. At least for me.
You won't get there. Femdom Norma can be only in dream.
https://f95zone.to/threads/gates-motel-v0-3-p_s_y_c_h_o.23302/post-2057275
How often have we seen the comment - "No sexual content yet. I'll try this again after one year, maybe two."? We need to see something, but not at the expense of the slow build-up.
The whole point of a dream sequence is that the person being dreamed about is unaware of the lustful feelings of the MC (dreamer). So in the main story, things have not progressed - that timeline is unchanged.
As far as saving the renders goes, it is possible that the dev uses these same renders in a future release, in the main story, which will give us a nice case of deja vu "wait, haven't I seen this scene before?"
However, all this is general discussion, not necessarily about this particular game, where, IMHO, they seem to have got it right. Remember, this MC is mentally fragile and unstable. His grasp on reality is somewhat tenuous. The scene in the car, the scene in his bedroom ... all seem to fit.
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Sure it might fit into the world, does not really account for any of the drawbacks I mentioned. Reusing renders might be the only thing, but that seems like stretching for positives. As for mc being mentally unstable, hallucinations do the work well. The dream sequence just felt very long and took a big part of the update. Ofc it is devs game and if he wants, he can make 100% of the game dream sequence.
Just stating I personally feel it is a waste of time and work. Considering quite a lot of people liked the comment, it seems I am not alone. It is feedback that dev might consider and dismiss at his will. You may think of it as general discussion, but it seems quite valid to me.
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It is funny reading all the reviews and opinions after the new release. Opinions are like assholes, everyone has one, and everyone else's stinks I love where this game is going and keep up the good work P_S_Y_C_H_O It is your game, and your story, take constructive criticism but realize everyone has their own agenda. So, I have an offer, and a piece of constructive criticism.
Offer: I have seen several people say stuff about the wording and choices. While I have noticed it, I let it go because I a not very pedantic and it does not detract from the story on my side. I am used to dealing with people who don't speak English as a first language in my job. If you need help, and want someone to review, I can help. While American, I grew up overseas and can review both US or International English. I love this game and if I can help you put it over the top, I'd be willing to do that.
Constructive Criticism: There have now been 2 scenes where the MC has been asleep. Both of them flowed in and out of the sleep state as part of the narative, and I was not sure if the MC was awake or asleep. Yes it maybe just me, but something that might help, would be putting a button/text at the bottom of the screen (next to skip, auto, prefs) that says something like "wake up". Even if you want to troll and have it never do anything, but light up when you are asleep, this will help people understand the MC is asleep and process it accordingly. If your intent was to make the content jarring, like give the player WTF moments, then mission accomplished. I had to do a second play through just to understand what I just saw, in regards to the other characters, etc. One simple item (the little button) could make it so we know it is the imagination of the MC, and not "really" happening in terms of the actual story line. It really happens at most for people who are dissecting the characters (MC and NPC) choices and how they behave in the game.
Again - Loved the update, love the story, and keep it up. I cannot wait to see how to write these characters in the coming releases.
I love where this game is going and keep up the good work P_S_Y_C_H_O It is your game, and your story, take constructive criticism but realize everyone has their own agenda. So, I have an offer, and a piece of constructive criticism.Offer: I have seen several people say stuff about the wording and choices. While I have noticed it, I let it go because I a not very pedantic and it does not detract from the story on my side. I am used to dealing with people who don't speak English as a first language in my job. If you need help, and want someone to review, I can help. While American, I grew up overseas and can review both US or International English. I love this game and if I can help you put it over the top, I'd be willing to do that.
Constructive Criticism: There have now been 2 scenes where the MC has been asleep. Both of them flowed in and out of the sleep state as part of the narative, and I was not sure if the MC was awake or asleep. Yes it maybe just me, but something that might help, would be putting a button/text at the bottom of the screen (next to skip, auto, prefs) that says something like "wake up". Even if you want to troll and have it never do anything, but light up when you are asleep, this will help people understand the MC is asleep and process it accordingly. If your intent was to make the content jarring, like give the player WTF moments, then mission accomplished. I had to do a second play through just to understand what I just saw, in regards to the other characters, etc. One simple item (the little button) could make it so we know it is the imagination of the MC, and not "really" happening in terms of the actual story line. It really happens at most for people who are dissecting the characters (MC and NPC) choices and how they behave in the game.
Again - Loved the update, love the story, and keep it up. I cannot wait to see how to write these characters in the coming releases.
I second that offer - my English is good; I can help proofread. Not that the English in this game is terrible - just offering to help to make it even better.
If you go for that 'wake up' button idea, please consider making it optional in the preferences. I actually enjoyed asking myself "Is he dreaming this?" Fits in well with the mental illness premise too - most mentally ill people don't know they are crazy - they just have trouble determining what is real and what isn't.
If you go for that 'wake up' button idea, please consider making it optional in the preferences. I actually enjoyed asking myself "Is he dreaming this?" Fits in well with the mental illness premise too - most mentally ill people don't know they are crazy - they just have trouble determining what is real and what isn't.
It's a 'waste' for you the same way, as if it was about avoidable shemale content, if you're not into it. I'm gonna make a lot of stuff that some people will have to avoid or skip. All this shit will be a waste of time and work for them. You can't please everyone at the same time, because people are different.
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i dont have anything new to say about the dreams discussion (except that it feels like half the game so far are dreams ) but my other gripe is all the MC narration and inner monologues. the car ride was not only boring but even got annoying. i want to get introduced and know about characters by talking TO THEM, not some guy blabbing for 10 minutes, describing everything. of course you cant really tell more personal details by dialogue because it will sound awkward but the narration needs toning down.
) but my other gripe is all the MC narration and inner monologues. the car ride was not only boring but even got annoying. i want to get introduced and know about characters by talking TO THEM, not some guy blabbing for 10 minutes, describing everything. of course you cant really tell more personal details by dialogue because it will sound awkward but the narration needs toning down.