VN Ren'Py Abandoned George and the Medical Degree [v0.0.8] [ZL-Games]

Mormont

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tlhansen said:
You all are being far to kind to this game demo.

Pro: The girls look good.

Cons:
  • The English is painful to read. Get someone who knows the language to rewrite everything.
  • Timed pauses for scene advancement. This is annoying, I never know if I am supposed to click or wait.
  • Inner dialog is denoted using "quotes". This is confusing initially. In English grammar ""' are used to denote something that has been spoken. Sam said, "Let's go to the store". Italics is the standard for inner dialog.
  • This is not an exhaustive list
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I've read worse the way you're making it out sounds much worse not everyone on here has the perfect English grammar you have to take in those that don't count English as their first language on here. This seems more like nitpicking the dev will get better in time, not every game can be perfect you know.
 
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Soooo.... I ask ... This game is about wandering in an empty school, with only one classroom (empty) and a gym (take a guess ... also empty!) No students ... no teachers ... And totally locked up!... Ok... Due to lack of content, I think I'll try to play it again in version 0.0.25 or 0.0.26
Anyway.... Good luck... and good bye.
 
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fuckyouassholes said:
ZL-Games i remember you from the Giorgia game

how are you doing ?

did your experience in the previous game help you learn anything ?

please let me know whats up :)
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Hi, good. Thank you.
Except for my terrible English, I've made some progress in terms of game development. I learned how to implement certain functions and how to divide the work areas. I hope you've seen this as well.
Thank you for your advice, which I always try to include in the game.
 
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Hi, good. Thank you.
Except for my terrible English, I've made some progress in terms of game development. I learned how to implement certain functions and how to divide the work areas. I hope you've seen this as well.
Thank you for your advice, which I always try to include in the game.
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you are most welcome

keep up the good work, this game looks nice and girls are quite sexy.

i wish you the best !
 
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George: Wow... This is the famous university.
Me: Famous? it looks old and abandoned. Must be bad writing and/or dev(s) have no tas~ *click
George: It seems abandoned to me. Bla, bla, bla~
Me: Nevermind, best game ever! (lol sorry ZL-Games)
 
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introvtx said:
George: Wow... This is the famous university.
Me: Famous? it looks old and abandoned. Must be bad writing and/or dev(s) have no tas~ *click
George: It seems abandoned to me. Bla, bla, bla~
Me: Nevermind, best game ever! (lol sorry ZL-Games)
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Hi, that of the famous university was an irony. :D
 
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Pool - Waiting times for dialogues
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Here you can decide whether to cancel the wait during the dialogues.

Thank you :)
 
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Work status update V0.0.5
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Hi, guys,
Today I completed the second episode of Mery.
In this event I implemented multiple choices that will lead to two different endings. I don't want to anticipate much, but my work continues.
Thanks for your support.
 
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Version 0.0.4 available for patrons 15$ or more
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Tonight i will release on patreon version 0.0.5.
 
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Hi guys, I'd like to ask you something. what in thinking about the game? You like it? Are there things that are missing? Thank you
 
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