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MisterNephilim

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As far as the flashbacks go, they are just introducing characters and how they know each other. Pretty similar to how Lost introduced everyone in that TV show
A bit late to the party, but I have 0 issues with Flashbacks, my problem goes when you go from Present to Flashback to 2nd Flashback. The less confusing way to do this is go from Present to past, then go back to the present for a little while, and then to a 2nd Past to introduce another stuff. Kill Bill does this if I recall it correctly.
 
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@thefattestcat thanks for trying the novel some answers with spoiler "spoiler including next update" not only for you but for others as I understand it can be very confusing(y):whistle::giggle:


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in the future I will try to explain the timelines(y)
if anyone has any further questions, please do not hesitate to ask.

Hi there, Namco15!;)
I hope you're doing well. I just wanted to drop you a line and say that I love the story and your rendering, but I have to admit that one thing that caught my attention is the variety of weird names of characters in the game.

Would it be possible to, perhaps, give the new characters a more memorable names? Something that stands out and makes it easier for us to remember.:)(y)

Thanks in advance for considering my humble suggestion.:ROFLMAO::love:
 
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Mmushy

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I'm rather disappointed Jattira got killed. As short as her scene was I liked her; cute, earnest and innocent
I forget, who's the purple hair girl?
 
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I like this game, at least I'm trying to like this game. It's difficult for me to follow the story because it's all flashbacks within flashbacks, and all the "new" content seems to be woven into the middle of the game rather than advancing the story. I'm playing the game and I don't even know what the "main" story I should be caring about is. Is it the effort to evacuate the solar system? Is it the mystery about why the MC's family was attacked when she was a kid? Is it the bitches who cut off the MC's arm? We had the story that green-eyed elves risk turning into monsters if they get too angry or die young, now it seems the MC's family not only has a high percentage of green-eyes, but a history of green-eyes semi-turning and somehow coming back from the experience.
And i'm sorry, but the elf names are so weird that they don't stick in my mind. You might think that the distinctive elvish names would help them stand out, but to me, they are just gibberish, and I can't keep relationships straight. Though I don't know that it matters much. The MC seems to want to bang anything that moves unless the dialogue specifically hardcodes the character as an immediate family member.
 

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constant flashbacks might be the worst possible story telling device, known to me.
It's not great. I've bitched about the narrative choices to Namco (on this thread somewhere) and there's no point in continuing to flog that horse. The decision was made, it is what it is, maybe it would be better if done a little differently or maybe not. But this is the story that Nam has blessed us with, and it's still a great fucking ripper of a yarn and the girls are just stupendously hot, so I've made peace with the fact that every few months I need to do a little homework and figure out what the fuck is happening.

Sometimes it helps to remember that as a teenager I cut grass in 100' heat and got stung by hornets and those green spiney caterpillars almost every day for like $10 an hour. If I'd sweat that hard for ten bucks, by god I can re-read my game notes to watch a hot elf eat out her sister.
 

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