Konstantin
I had a look at the Glamour game, but I didn't get to play it. I don't know how to explain it, but, I couldn't write a script for Kate's story. To be sincere, I would need inspiration though, playing as FC is not a favorite for me. I have no problems with FC games, but this game was created for the character to become a slut. I will explain it. The DS proposal, in my point of view, was to make Kate reach her Glamour, An "innocent" girl who falls into a world of depravity. But that she would get the world in her hands, however, it is not basically so. Kate would have to get involved in some romances, because it seems that some people here want it or like it, I don't really feel anything, that is to say, I wouldn't care what I would write, in this case a novel where FC falls in love, create that love script, but that's not for me. I believe people want a little bit of that in Kate's story, I don't know, but a while ago I was disappointed with some people who wanted to turn the girls' boyfriend Max into a BBAS. I'll talk about it later.
I just played Kate's story at the time because of college, I have a school setting fetish, but at the time, I saw some comments saying that Kate's story was weak, especially her relationship with Julia. I thought it was nonsense DS to create a BDSM room in the basement where Kate would create her bedroom, seriously, it didn't make much sense, Julia was a very forced character in my opinion, I think her script would be a little slower, something around jokes that all the girls play with each other, "look at my titty" - balancing them (its a joke), but on the other hand, I don't see that your idea was bad, but as for Nick and Julia, I saw that it could be better, but I cannot criticize the DS.
Anyway, I can't write a script for you, so a plot, the script, all complete. I can just give you some personality ideas for some characters, or maybe, create some dialogue and you see what you can come up with best, something that you get some idea about. I wrote a little script on the BBAS, because it's a game that I have inspiration in writing, but those people seem to want to turn the game into a kind of "Max the boyfriend of the family", kind of nobody cared, I had said that Eric was important to the story, because the game needs to have an ending otherwise it would get boring, but those people never understood, to be honest, I don't even know what those people want, and I don't even know what people here want for Kate's story. Some want this and some want that. I remember I said there that the BBAS story would start to get monotonous when the MC would start fucking everyone, I wonder, how would that end? Max getting his sisters, aunt and mother pregnant?
But why am I saying this? most want an easy game, i.e. a fantasy story where the person assumes the character, enters the character, that's why games like Milfy City are successful, and what would be the end of that game? The magic dick MC would confront his mother's husband guy and then "kill him?" and the MC would save the whole family and happy ending. C'mon, C'mon, for a game like that, a surprising ending would only be imaginative. In glamour, there's a nice ending, but the problem is how the story would develop, until reaching that nice ending, but in some parts I could help but unfortunately not in everything.