Others Abandoned Glamour [v0.57] [Dark Silver]

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Krugger

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Konstantin said:
Krugger

Take a look at the Happy End game to start. Then, for example, I will send you a set of pictures with small explanations, and you will try to write dialogues for this set. And then decide for yourself whether we can work on the game together or not
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I took a look at that game you mentioned but I didn't download and play it. I have ideas for characters, I don't know if they would be good, writing a script for me is not that difficult, however, english is not my native languageand there would be characters of mine who would use certain slang in which I don't know much in the english vocabulary. Another thing is also time, because I don't have much, my life has turned into a ticking time bomb, I have a lot of problems and it keeps getting worse. I would like to do a little script here and see if you guys liked it. I thought about being a writer many years ago, but I gave up. I hate doing any kind of crap, I take things very seriously.

I understand why DS is slowly dropping Kate's story, there are characters that are a little difficult to write, I mean, to have good scripts. Julia for me is being a mystery, I find her script a little superficial of being a perverted sister from the beginning, but at the same time, I try to find a solution for the story to develop fluently, that everything happens in the right way. Maybe it's some of the factors that DS is giving more preference to Max's story, but I see that DS writes Max's story with a certain contempt, because I believe a little that he is forcing it, and as he does not have new ideas, he makes his paying public choose paths for him to follow in the project, but he keeps writing and since he gets things done within a month, he needs to think of something quickly.
 
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Krugger said:
An abbreviation of a small script I made just now, I don't know if you guys will like it.
( xxxx ) - the balloon represents thought.

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Teacher Adam: Kate Greenwood...
Teacher Adam: What did you do to receive a punishment?
Kate: Hey Mr. Adam

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Kate: I think I was a naughty student
Kate: Maybe I deserve to be punished...
< Kate remove your skirt >

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Teacher Adam: (My fucking god)
Teacher Adam: (how? it's been a while since I dont seen thighs so young in a long time)
Teacher Adam: (since I...)

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Kate: What was Mr. Adam? the cat got your tongue?
Kate: Do you think I'm pretty?

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Teacher Adam: Gorgeous..

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Kate: Just gorgeous Mr. Adam?
Kate: Don't you think I'm hot too?

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Teacher Adam: Yes, I do..
< Kate bends over the table >
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Kate: So Mr. Adam, I think it's time for you to punish me.
Kate: I assume you are in a hurry

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Teacher Adam: Y..yes

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Kate: Or do you have enough time to punish this naughty student
Kate: (Soon I'll be dominating Mr. Adam. I doubt he will resist)

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Teacher Adam: (I can't hold back, this little bitch is teasing me since arrived in this class)
Teacher Adam: (I can't, I can't.. you can't Aslan. I need to resist, how can I resist with this young ass?)
Teacher Adam: (I...)

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Kate: (Kate, it's time to tease him some more..)
Kate: Mr. Adam, touch, move your hand! Feel my soft skin, look how wet I am..

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Kate: (Yes Mr. Adam, keep going and don't stop..)

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Teacher Adam: (Since that time, I had stopped my addictions. The fate has once again brought me here)
Teacher Adam: (I usually don't believe in fates, but maybe in consequence, or not. Am I imagining?)

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Teacher Adam: (Your pussy's lips are soft and plump, typical of a young girl)
Teacher Adam: So, Mrs. Greenwood, what kind of punishment would you like to receive?

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Teacher Adam: Do you want pain or pleasure?

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Kate: Pleasure, Mr. Adam. Pleasure! Keep it up, massaging... please...
Teacher Adam: (Bitch, I can't wait to...)

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Angelina: (Mr. Adam.. and I thought you didn't like students...)

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Teacher Adam: WHAT THE FUCK?!
Kate: WHAT WAS THIS?!

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Teacher Adam: Mrs. Angelina when the door is closed you need to knock before entering
Angelina: Sorry, I thought there was no one
Kate: Did you photograph us?
Angelina: No, it was just a noise from my cellphone
Kate: You are lying, bitch! Give me your cellphone so I can see
Teacher Adam: Kate, language! don't call your classmate of bitch
Angeline: Sorry for interfering with you, I think I better go.
Kate: Angeline, I want you to erase.
Angeline: Okay... Kate... I do...

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Teacher Adam: I think we're done for today Mrs. Greenwood. Next time, go to the direction instead of me.
Teacher Adam: Are we understood?
Kate: Yes, Mr. Adam...
Teacher Adam: I'm going to tell Nicolas that you've had your… punishment...
Teacher Adam: You... can... get... dress up... and... go home.
Kate: Okay Mr. Adam. Thank you..
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Neato. Pass me the script if you'd like. I wouldn't mind a bit of cleanup work.
Does anybody know Adam's surname? Mr. Adam sounds a bit weird to my ears.
 
Krugger

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Squark said:
Neato. Pass me the script if you'd like. I wouldn't mind a bit of cleanup work.
Does anybody know Adam's surname? Mr. Adam sounds a bit weird to my ears.
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Yes, sounds weird. In some countries people are called by their surname name, already in others by the first. I will edit.
But since that wouldn't be his real name... At the time I didn't think of one, but Kate's I don't remember if I saw it at the beginning of the game but it matched a little. I did this little scene in less than 20 minutes, it's a quick scene.
 
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Hi everyone, could any of you confirm that 0.46.1 finishes with the "New World Order" and "College" finished ?
 
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Hello, i cant go further. Nicolas don't announce Max in college, but say to Ann that she would have to help Max (i complite this step before, but dont save lol)
Any ideas, what am I doing wrong
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The fact that so many people have problems with progression in this game shows that:

1) DS never does any testing
2) The game is a mess of things hurriedly cobbled together
3) The people that throw the most money at him month after month have more money than brains

I'm sure it shows more but I just don't know what.
 
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fdk123_ said:
Hello, i cant go further. Nicolas don't announce Max in college, but say to Ann that she would have to help Max (i complite this step before, but dont save. Any ideas, what am I doing wrong
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Try loading an earlier save of yours. At the beginning, complete the College Committee quest, and only then proceed to the College quest.
nikita22843 said:
What I need to do?
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Change the language in the game. Take a screenshot of the task and show it to us.
 
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Krugger said:
Konstantin is looking to produce a Fan Game, I (myself) wouldn't want to create a poor story with bad dialogue.
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Yes, I want to create a game with heroes and Glamour art. But the plot of the game will be similar to a Happy End. That is, an innocent girl comes to a big city and gradually becomes a whore and a submissive sex slave. My imagination is too poor for a detailed scenario. But this is about the kind of game I want to make based on Glamour

Krugger said:
my intention is not to make Kate a cheap whore but to make her enjoy pleasures and create school fetishes
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So this is the most important thing. Kate becomes a whore and a submissive sex slave because she gets pleasure from it. And various events lead her to this, for example, he notices how Angela sucks Oscar in the men's room, or how Sofia and Alice lick each other in the women's room. Or, for example, how one of the girls caresses another in the college shower

Actually, this is exactly what DS wanted to do in Glamour, but because of greed and laziness, he took a simpler and easier path
 
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