DO WHATEVER YOU LIKE JUST TAG CORRECTLY YOU KNOW HOW MANY PEOPLE GOT SCARED CUZ YOU WRONG TAG ? its not fixed yet so is not a mistake you know what ? i done bye byeThat's the best reasoned comment. Thank you. English will be corrected soon. For the next episode I need a proofreader and if anybody know someone who can help with that, write me in privat. I'd appreciate it.
My PC can create one animation for several days. I have a goal, to buy more powerful components for fast rendering.
But for now, I don't have the means to do that. I'll not remove any scenes or animations in order to speed up the work and release an update earlier. Today, many people are sacrificing interesting details for a novel just to upload it quickly and make more money. For me, these details are as important as history. I really just want to make an amazing novel and share it with you. Even if I spend a lot of time on this.
I'm laughing when I read some of the comments, where you're discussing Mon. Whatever your emotions, my story has been able to evoke them. You hate her so much, despise her, call her a whore. Honestly, I'm glad, because my new product has been able to evoke feelings and emotions in you. And that's really cool.
Have a nice sunny day, all of you!
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Not going to get into a NTR/not NTR row since the mods have already warned about it BUT, at this point in the game there is no relationship with ANYONE. I'm actually not a fan of NTR since I tend to be a jealous fuck. Might Mon be a LI? Yes of course. Does the MC and her have any kind of relationship beyond travelling on the same train together at the time of the aforementioned scene? No, it does not appear to be so (can't say definitively since the scene is without further context). I get that some people don't like seeing any of the women in these games getting with anyone but the MC but can we please stop watering down what the tags mean. As of the release of 0.1.0 there is no NTR in this game so it shouldn't be labelled as such. Maybe we should ask for a different tag to cover situations like this but trying to stretch definitions into situations which are not accurate is not the way to do it.
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this is a common thing in most VN and what I mean is... we as readers/players are getting more information from the story than the MC, we can see things what MC can't and because of it... some players may be deeply involved into the story. It's a good thing if you know how to work with your audience but... in some cases it may backfire really quickly. Just keep that in mind and you'll be fine.I'm laughing when I read some of the comments, where you're discussing Mon. Whatever your emotions, my story has been able to evoke them. You hate her so much, despise her, call her a whore. Honestly, I'm glad, because my new product has been able to evoke feelings and emotions in you. And that's really cool.
Have a nice sunny day, all of you!
There is nothing to be proud of honestly. After all, to awaken the emotions you have named is very simple. It’s enough to hit a man on the street and he will hate you and want to hit you back. Or you can come to the city center and put a huge pile of shit there, someone will look at you with disgust, someone will laugh and shoot this on camera. Or you can show how the girl you liked is fucking with some motherfucker. By any of these actions you will awaken negative emotions in people, but what's the value of all this?I'm laughing when I read some of the comments, where you're discussing Mon. Whatever your emotions, my story has been able to evoke them. You hate her so much, despise her, call her a whore. Honestly, I'm glad, because my new product has been able to evoke feelings and emotions in you. And that's really cool.
Have a nice sunny day, all of you!
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yes, ofc it evoke feelings in us, just like we watch on TV that there was a mass shooting in the US and the guy killed 60 people for no reason, it evokes feelings of anger, disbelief, sadness, disgust... is this a good feeling? no man, it's fucking not... just like your last scene with Monica...That's the best reasoned comment. Thank you. English will be corrected soon. For the next episode I need a proofreader and if anybody know someone who can help with that, write me in privat. I'd appreciate it.
My PC can create one animation for several days. I have a goal, to buy more powerful components for fast rendering.
But for now, I don't have the means to do that. I'll not remove any scenes or animations in order to speed up the work and release an update earlier. Today, many people are sacrificing interesting details for a novel just to upload it quickly and make more money. For me, these details are as important as history. I really just want to make an amazing novel and share it with you. Even if I spend a lot of time on this.
I'm laughing when I read some of the comments, where you're discussing Mon. Whatever your emotions, my story has been able to evoke them. You hate her so much, despise her, call her a whore. Honestly, I'm glad, because my new product has been able to evoke feelings and emotions in you. And that's really cool.
Have a nice sunny day, all of you!
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It's just a game. All of this is fictional. If you want to compare it to real life, ok. In real life, you don't date girls and they all fuck only with you. They didn't have boyfriends before and after you. This is stupid. In the next episode, you'll see the continuation of this scene, and you'll understand why I don't call it NTR. I've already added an option to skip the scene if you're a NTR hater. This will be available in version 0.1.1, after the proofreader will get some work done.
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ofc they had boyfriends before me, but she didn't showed me a video of her having sex with her ex while he is cumming on her face right?
The other thing is, i had a few virgin GF, i never told them how many women did i slept with, even when they insisted that i tell them...
Also, i had a few experienced GF that for sure i don't want to know how many guys they had
That shit would haunt me whenever i look at her/them...
The other thing is, i had a few virgin GF, i never told them how many women did i slept with, even when they insisted that i tell them...
Also, i had a few experienced GF that for sure i don't want to know how many guys they had
That shit would haunt me whenever i look at her/them...
No need to speak for everyone. Someone still believes in monogamy.
I'll give you an example from "Game of Thrones". Your favorite character is killed, or he betrayed someone, or did something bad. You won't like it, but you keep watching the serial.ofc they had boyfriends before me, but she didn't showed me a video of her having sex with her ex while he is cumming on her face right?
The other thing is, i had a few virgin GF, i never told them how many women did i slept with, even when they insisted that i tell them...
Also, i had a few experienced GF that for sure i don't want to know how many guys they had
That shit would haunt me whenever i look at her/them...
Man do you game you way just put the damm tag so people don't have to get a nasty surprise, the problem neve was if you can do a NTR game or not its cuz you "surprised" everyone if people want to change your game they are wrong obviously they can just do the usual procedure and tag it as ignored thread but if you don't tag correctly many people will play the game like me and get very bad for some time, its like this same thing happen with other people try to tell a trans girl she will never be a girl and you will see if she won't maybe even kill herself, theres people who are really sensitive do you know why movies are Rated ?
"What the eye doesn't see, the heart doesn't grieve over."
Theres no way to compare a game to IRL, since everyone who would expect the girl to never cheat IRL are delusional
my father said to me when i was 18 "if you ever get engaged to a woman you need to live on a rented house so you leave when she displease you its her problem how she afford the rent if she don't want to leave, put your own house on you mother or little brother name and be smart don't have kids girls are all sluts be always ready to leave her and don't kill her when she cheat on you is not worth it being arrested cuz of some loose pussy, don't hit her either just go home take your things change you number phone all she want is you to hit her so she become the victim and still fuck your like"
so yep a game its the only way to really low my guard but then i got trolled by the dev
Theres no way to compare a game to IRL, since everyone who would expect the girl to never cheat IRL are delusional
my father said to me when i was 18 "if you ever get engaged to a woman you need to live on a rented house so you leave when she displease you its her problem how she afford the rent if she don't want to leave, put your own house on you mother or little brother name and be smart don't have kids girls are all sluts be always ready to leave her and don't kill her when she cheat on you is not worth it being arrested cuz of some loose pussy, don't hit her either just go home take your things change you number phone all she want is you to hit her so she become the victim and still fuck your like"
so yep a game its the only way to really low my guard but then i got trolled by the dev
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Can't wait for the next version
I hate to break it to you... but all those incest games where you bang the mom...
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Nah not true, I stopped watching The Walking Dead after they killed my boy Big Tiny. Show was never the same smh.
Well that's a little exaggerated ... some remarks that were made involving her are sarcasm at best. Fans are disappointed in her character for the last scene because it was implied she is a future LI and at the end of 0.1 u see her fucking MC's asshole "dad" that probably didn't give a flying fuck about his son's disappearance.
Hard to believe a sexy woman like her would fuck a stupid jack-back bitch douche like MC's supposed father for other reasons than money.
Plus she basically throws herself at the MC and they kiss if u play cocky so people started suspecting she an escort/prostitute/slut.No point in arguing further or trying "to throw her under the bus"
she's just a character and it's up to the dev to explain her actions and avoid confusion regarding the script. Anyway, the game seems promising and the dev look like he has much to offer to his fans.Best of luck to you with the project !!
Ok. Finally read through this mess of a thread lol. Another case of the same kids hanging around bullying a new dev. Why are you guys here jabbering on for 13 pages if that scene was a deal breaker for you? Stick to the safe spaces of WVM and BaDIK if any kind of nuance to a story scares you so much.
Tags have meaning. NTR tag is a specific fetish that requires conscious decision on the dev's part to create. The Spellbook, Tyrant, thug hero, etc. These games base the primary fetish of the game or route on NTR.
A female, or even a potential LI, fucking some other guy can actually be just a plot device if that is what the dev intended, especially if the MC has no relationship with this girl at that time. Maybe she is an actual hooker who you can bang or even love later. Maybe she is some spy working for dad that you can dominate and make your sex slave or some shit. All these scenarios are compatible with non-NTR. It's only the pure virgin maiden harem seeking insecures that would throw a fit over some pixels. Its just unbelievable. Same thing going on to a lesser extent in Amoir Tech thread.
Look at Rob. He shares the same proclivities to all of you spamming the thread, but he left like one comment and moved on. Be like Rob Thundercock. Let the dev make the damn game he wants.
Tags have meaning. NTR tag is a specific fetish that requires conscious decision on the dev's part to create. The Spellbook, Tyrant, thug hero, etc. These games base the primary fetish of the game or route on NTR.
A female, or even a potential LI, fucking some other guy can actually be just a plot device if that is what the dev intended, especially if the MC has no relationship with this girl at that time. Maybe she is an actual hooker who you can bang or even love later. Maybe she is some spy working for dad that you can dominate and make your sex slave or some shit. All these scenarios are compatible with non-NTR. It's only the pure virgin maiden harem seeking insecures that would throw a fit over some pixels. Its just unbelievable. Same thing going on to a lesser extent in Amoir Tech thread.
Look at Rob. He shares the same proclivities to all of you spamming the thread, but he left like one comment and moved on. Be like Rob Thundercock. Let the dev make the damn game he wants.
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you dont need to change it but if it explains well then it was story driven etc.. your the maker so you should tell the game like it was suppose to. And keep true to your own vision.
BaDIK is a shitty minigame game btw
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