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PapaPhat

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I feel like this one needs a proof reader, grammar correction and someone to make the dialogue sound more organic and less like punctuated statements. The story in general is good, but the dialogue could be so much better.
I agree. The dialogue needs proofread with spelling and grammar correction including updates to sentence structure. Unfortunately, I see this kind of thing far too often in AVN and kinetic stories here... :rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:

Adventure ever on friend, Phat:devilish:(y)
 

PapaPhat

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Can someone upload ch7 to another link? I download from annonfiles but the archived is corrupted. Mega say not enough bandwidth, 2 other host download at 50 KB/s speed. Try torrent but its stalled at 0 seed, 0 leech :(
I'm willing to DL the Mega version and upload to a free to DL site that will allow the size but it will not be Torrent. It will be the full file in your preference of Win/Linux, Mac or Android. Just let me know. I can zip the walkthrough and gallery unlock mods in the same file if you like, again, just let me know. The Mega DL may take five minutes but the free upload may take several hours or you can enroll in Mega for 5 GBP per month... works out to about $6 and change in USD. It's worth it for me because I try a lot of titles from this site... A LOT of titles. Hahaha:ROFLMAO:

Oh... the free upload/DL site that I use is
It's a bit slow but highly reliable and free.

Adventure ever on my friend, Phat;)(y)
 
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Canto Forte

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Dev said this much:
no plans for NTR.
You control both characters, you decide who to have sex with
To be honest, I don't really know what you are talking about.
It's been three months where there were two protagonists,
the version that is now updated has had one protagonist only
ONE ENTIRE WAR RIDDEN YEAR.
So you probably just read the description,
which has not yet changed, have not played, but wrote your opinion.
It is almost always never a good idea.
In the process of development, the plot has changed,
now the game has a fully optional ntr situation with one of the girls
 
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Shawnchapp

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i'm a little confused here im in chapter 3 and pretty much all of the LIs sexy scenes have been of the Femdom nature.... is this how it for the rest of the game? Did the dev just forget to add the "femdom" tag or are you able to turn the tables later?
 

Shawnchapp

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You of all modders .. did not peek under the hood? There are choices.
The boss is try n a dominate, but MC can have his way.
i did look at the files for chapter 2/3 (but didn't want to read ahead for spoilers)

all the script revealed up to the point is one "route" femdomish route no other option besides skipping all the sexy scenes

so instead of spoiling the rest of the story for myself by read all the script files just wanted a quick answer as to if i should just give up on those LIs now or not
 

Canto Forte

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MC can and will grow bolder and make meaningful choices ahead.
Yup, Amanda couch is kind a femdom-ish at first.
MC will meet other controling wench and he can either play ball or not.
These are the higher ups, MC does get a say down the line of their ... entanglement.
 

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Shawnchapp

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MC can and will grow bolder and make meaningful choices ahead.
Yup, Amanda couch is kind a femdom-ish at first.
MC will meet other controling wench and he can either play ball or not.
These are the higher ups, MC does get a say down the line of their ... entanglement.

ah ok thanks for the info
 

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longjohngold

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Needs the completed tag now I guess... was a bit disappointed the bad guy ending was just a bad ending.
 

desmosome

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Play stupid games, win stupid prizes, I guess. Bad ending for being a shitty undercover cop who doesn't have any allies in the department makes sense. It's just not very satisfying as a porn game. I guess we just assumed there would be a gang route where we switch sides. Oh well.

But the bad end was so unsatisfying. At that point, why not just let James bang Zoe at the end? People would rather die than see NTR I guess lol.
 

L0b0ts

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It sounds good. (y) (y) (y)

Something which is NOT

1) a just turned 19 years old dude banging his steplandlady, his loveydovey little steproommate, his moody older steproommate and his nympho stepaunt;
2) a honey select harem with gigantic tits and lolis;
3) a story where goblins/orcs keep raping women;
3) a russian-made Big Brother clone;
4) a machine-translated jap RPG where a female MC is raped and humiliated over and over and over;
4) a furry gay content story;
5) anything with a female MC being sexually assaulted over and over;
6) crap which predates real porn content;
7) a story where a horsedick teen is inseminating the whole town

is more than welcome. ALWAYS
You have just written of 99% of f95 zone games. :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
 

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Arcturius

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first of all thank you for your mod and your work LaikDink

starting chapter 2 the walkthrough stops. I restarted again but after chapter 1 nothing is highlighted
 
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