- Jan 14, 2018
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I've seen some reviews/comments, and people are really harsh.
I mean the scenes need a little more build-up, but you can't say it's awful like that.
If the dev sees this, my two cents would be to work on the structure of the scenes. More explanations ( The family "night scene" need a rework because anybody could wake up from half of this. And it's true the boss wife episode need a bit of work on it. )
But I think it a very promising visual novel. Good luck.
I mean the scenes need a little more build-up, but you can't say it's awful like that.
If the dev sees this, my two cents would be to work on the structure of the scenes. More explanations ( The family "night scene" need a rework because anybody could wake up from half of this. And it's true the boss wife episode need a bit of work on it. )
But I think it a very promising visual novel. Good luck.