- Jul 5, 2021
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I enjoy a slowish burn to intercourse, but seeing more frequent intermediate steps along the way would be good - and not just stuff like petting and BJs or accidental nudity: Em furiously finger-banging herself and then hating herself for doing it because she doesn't want to be turned on by MC just yet, and MC hearing it going on from the next room but not being quite sure what it was (or even who it was if it was being done in the shower, for example), would be a great scene.Agree with almost everything here.
For the most part, MC's first time.
Let alone, there should be far more then just that.
But that's just my view.
Others seem to like "no actual intercourse"(not my thing but, to each is their own).
The story-line is 'why' i first checked this out.
Same reason i wait to see where it goes but, may or may not feel the same in the near future.
Foreplay is a good thing.