She's been losing that uptightness for quite a while now, no? This was her first orgasm, like ever, so I see it as Autumn "wanting more", which allows things to be stretched a bit. She's doing these things in large part because she believes an orgasm is possible.I get your defense. I'm saying she did a 180 way to fast to be honest. An uptight religious girl who yes...sucked your dick in private...going to I don't give a fuck about what her sister says or what my family thinks about my slutty ways is a pretty crazy leap. I'm not against it...just happened really fucking fast for her backstory to be honest. What do I know though? It's your story...I just wasn't expecting her to be that way so fast is all.
And she's a far way away from where she was at the beginning of her story. About half way through her current story, she was making excuses to do lewd things with you. Now she doesn't want to make those excuses as much. I just don't understand how this could be described as fast under any definition of the word, especially when compared to other main characters in the story. It's taken her quite a long time to get here, and she's only willing to go as far as half of what the other main characters do (like sex and other things where she doesn't attempt to hide) and in twice the length of other main characters. This also fits the theme of her story at this moment which is her becoming more independent, among other things.
Characters in HH have character growth, but Autumn's has always been designed to take a more traditional route, with inspiration from religious logic in the sex sense (anal before sex, for example). This means she will be designed to take longer than other characters to get to the same point. (like with exhibitionism)
If you have any suggestions for how to make the pacing better, please let me know. So far I've only heard "It's fast" a few times, and with the things I mentioned above, I just can't see that.
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