VN Ren'Py Heart Of Passion [v0.1.0 bugfixed] [Caylake]

[TheimmortalP]

Pro:
The dialogue is hilariously awful, and I love it.

Con: You have to see a 70 year old man have sex. Its gross.

 

[TheimmortalP]

If you crash while entering options, extract the crash fix file to the game/folder.

Thanks.

 

[Look-see]

Pro:
The dialogue is hilariously awful, and I love it.

Con: You have to see a 70 year old man have sex. Its gross.

so im guessing its not avoidable? guess i'll pass on the game for now. thats something id rather avoid.

 

[TheimmortalP]

so im guessing its not avoidable? guess i'll pass on the game for now. thats something id rather avoid.

There's choices, but I'm pretty sure that they literally change nothing, and no, the scene isn't avoidable.

 

[Look-see]

There's choices, but I'm pretty sure that they literally change nothing, and no, the scene isn't avoidable.

well i decided to bite the bullet on this one and decided to just zoom through it.

cant change the MC's name so that a big negative.

but yeah the MC in general sucks. dude doesnt even get the choice to avoid the landlords plaything. like yeah you get the initial choice to go against her. but then he just crumbles when she offers her used panties or even when she talks to him. why the hell would i willingly make the MC show any interest in her. we already saw her get railed by the landlord.

the renders are nice sure but thats about the only good thing going for this game. at least in my opinion.

 

[Swiver]

Checked out the manga you're basing this on, looks good. I do prefer VN and Renpy so thanks for for bringing us something good from a different medium.

 

[TheDisgracedOne]

Damn bro i can't believe that you will make an adaptation to one of the greatest pornhwa ever, but it's a shame you didn't take inspiration from the manhwa chara design as it is one of the best in the market, wait and see for more updates !


If you don't know the manhwa the starting is gonna be full of NTR, but at some point the MC will have a traumatic event that will make him flip up, and at this point he become one of the greatest pussy destroyer of the manhwa, also even if FMC had a boyfriend she is still a virgin, and will only have a relationship with MC (and it will evolve to be a loving one) so MC and FMC relationship is gonna be non NTR even if it is not strictly vanilla.

 

[CortoMaltese]

Interesting characters and storyline. I'm excited to see how they develop in the future!

 

[xXwankerXx]

Garbage.

Both from the game description and from these few preview renders you could immediately feel that this was going to be a game with NTR.

Besides watching these few preview renders and reading this game description that MC's best friend Olivia treats him differently at school and outside of school I can only guess that at school she keeps up with those who bully MC and in addition it seems that she is in some more intimate relationship with one of these bullies and probably does not even admit that she knows him, let alone that she is MC friend

in my opinion it is a false friendship because no one you can call your best friend would behave like that

Ok, so after forcing myself to play through this so far garbage of a 'story', I can tell you bois this shit's based on a korean cuckhwa turned into a pornhwa later on called

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. It's painfully obvious to anyone who read that crap that there are a lot of resemblances between that pornhwa and this game's story, and I honestly don't know how good an idea that is, since most of the time, korean authors ain't exactly known for the quality of their stories and most of them are obsessed with cucking their MCs and having lots of pointless sex scenes with random idiots and dumb bitches.

While most readers thought that story was complete garbage (understandably why) and one big fuck and cuck fest with a fat old fart fucking attractive bitches left and right in a lot of chapters, even MC's mom, the MC there, Pyo (IIRC, it's been a looong time since I last read it) was a pussy getting beat up and humiliated by the main douche and his douchey friends only in the beginning, just like the idiotic would-be MC in the game was. Do keep this in mind tho that Pyo eventually turns from a complete spineless idiotic simp for the old fart's narcissistic cunt of a daughter into the equivalent of Goku in that fictional world, dude even grows a big boi pair of balls and a magical MC dick and starts fucking those idiots up real bad and fucking the shit outta bitches that wouldn't even look his way, even the landlord's daughter, his so-called "friend", so there might be some hope left for this story too, but in the pornhwa, that was a work in progress, a looong progress... don't know if fans here will have that much patience with the game like the readers did with the pornhwa, if the dev did things like that korean author did with their pornhwa.

Personally, I'm not very optimistic about the future of this game after seeing what happened in its first release, but maybe the dev understands that the cultural differences between the korean world in the manhwa I mentioned and the american (??) counterpart in their game might upset and/or confuse a lot of players and will turn things down a few notches in some situations, but the bottom line is that we should expect to see a very slow build up for the MC and his character growth and a very fast one for the other characters, especially for the douche Mike and the ladlord, but I also think that if the MC will indeed become a Pyo 2.0 at some point, then tolerating all the pointless fuckery, humiliation scenes and cuckery thrown at him will be worth the wait, cuz the guy becomes a legit badass in the pornhwa.

Take what I said in this post with a grain of salt, not as something guaranteed to happen, after all the dev's in the pilot seat running the show, which means the story can become just as good, even better, or worse than the one in the korean pornhwa it's based on. We'll just have to wait patiently and see how it goes.

 

[xXwankerXx]

sub/loser MC, his childhood friend Olivia is two-faced manipulative bitch. How you can even call shit like her a friend? And he still simping her like an idiot Yea, MC destiny is to be a cuck. Another pathetic illusion of man

Gotta love the disturbingly high amount of stupidity of a fictional guy's delusional way of seeing the world in their own way, not how it really is, and his incapacity to process the informantion that's being given and shown to him, right ??

Classic beta cuck way of 'thinking' on this MC. And he wonders why his 'amazing' definitely-not-friend pretends she don't know him in public.

Yea, MC destiny is to be a cuck. Another pathetic illusion of man

Another spineless MC,sigh. Hard pass.

Nothing exactly shocking or new under the sun for porn game standards tho.

Tom got his rifle and went to school

And the rest is details, y'all. The most important thing worth mentioning is, he got his own Wrong Turn-type of disturbing happy ending, while the rest of the characters got the same treatment all characters in this franchise got there.

the fact that our so called childhood best friend has been OK with bad shit happening to MC, because she's a shallow cunt in public. Would be the end of any friendship with her.

That's genetics for you. Trashy ppl like her asshole of a dad will give birth to other trashy ppl like her, and the cycle repeats itself. Can't argue with science, but you can definitely stay away from worthless trash like those pixelated cunts.

The interactions between the characters are stiff and occasionally lack coherence

Then there is the weird story ... the start feels so off and the dialog is confusing as fuck - and the whole landlord and resident construct is also weird as fuck. Then the the girl is just forcing you into a HJ out of nowhere.

Sorry, but besides the solid renders this is a mess.

Like other users have already mentioned, the story's a Queen Bee/Landlord's Lil Girl knock-off. A few things sounding weird, not making sense, or anything like that is to be expected. The least the dev should do is try to westernize it so it won't sound too weird or nonsensical to most of their fans and potential new patrons.

He thinks his landlord is like a slave plantation owner because he fucks a waitress? What in the world? Is this guy delusional or am I missing something?

Guy must've skipped classes when they taught them that dark part of history in school.

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You basically summed up most korean 'stories' in pornhwa there and why most MCs suck. Not only this, they also end up with other idiots' sloppy, used-up seconds as their cringe asf (s)appy endings lol. Poor idiots don't deserve no sympathy.

This is why you don't pay attention to most of that shit, just fap to the few good sex scenes and move on. Still don't think it's a good idea to copy-paste the whole thing, but if the dev don't wanna listen to what we say, it's their decision to make and their business they'll end up hurting in the long run. Too bad something like this will ruin it for most non NTR fans, the render quality is pretty good and the women are gorgeous tho.

Hard NTR manwas are brain dead and lack any character description or motivations apart from showing the nonsensical NTR cheating, abuse, rape and beatdown of girls who are either then portrayed as having acute prisoner syndrome where they come to like their blackmailer/rapist/beater or are simply brain dead and they just never can put together any thought whatsoever in a way that we could comprehend.

Facts. Some of them pornhwa writers must've been hurt real bad by attractive women like the ones in their stories IRL and are sharing all the 'feedback' in their stories lol.

Can't make an idiotic MC go from completely braindead, dickless absolute zero to supreme hero in porn games... things don't work like that and ppl don't have enough patience and money to put up with this nonsense, not even this whole shit being fiction makes it a good excuse to justify the obvious intention here.

Congrats for the great start. Seems to be quite promising.

It sure does have potential, a whole lot of it... for certain financial disaster, that is.

 

[xXwankerXx]

one of the greatest pornhwa ever

Our different tastes and preferences aside, I wouldn't exactly use a sentence like that to describe the overall quality of the Queen Bee pornhwa, but I'm pretty sure most non NTR fans the dev's trying to get to support them will have long left the thread if the story's just a simple copy-pasted version of that one's that doesn't bring anything original or creative to the table.

We'll see in the next updates if I'm right or wrong about this.

 

[xXwankerXx]

You have to see a 70 year old man have sex. Its gross.

so im guessing its not avoidable? guess i'll pass on the game for now. thats something id rather avoid.

There's choices, but I'm pretty sure that they literally change nothing, and no, the scene isn't avoidable.

I'm gonna have a good chuckle after reading ppl's reactions when they'll find out the ho that's getting her cheeks clapped daily by that disgusting mummy is supposed to be an LI. If I'm not mistaken, that's what she was in the manhwa. It'll be... glorious. Bet the mods will enjoy it even more than I will.

 

[Xeron_Xr]

Out of all the things in the world
i pray dev doesnt take the QB route

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Damn bro i can't believe that you will make an adaptation to one of the greatest pornhwa ever, but it's a shame you didn't take inspiration from the manhwa chara design as it is one of the best in the market, wait and see for more updates !


If you don't know the manhwa the starting is gonna be full of NTR, but at some point the MC will have a traumatic event that will make him flip up, and at this point he become one of the greatest pussy destroyer of the manhwa, also even if FMC had a boyfriend she is still a virgin, and will only have a relationship with MC (and it will evolve to be a loving one) so MC and FMC relationship is gonna be non NTR even if it is not strictly vanilla.

I don't know what makes you think that the description you've given of the game is going to excite most gamers. To me it seems more like it's going to have a very limited market.

There's choices, but I'm pretty sure that they literally change nothing, and no, the scene isn't avoidable.

And here is one more reason to confirm that I did well in not downloading the game.

 

[mommysboiii]

Checked out the manga you're basing this on, looks good. I do prefer VN and Renpy so thanks for for bringing us something good from a different medium.

Yeah but the problem is if I understand this right

- netorare people wont like this because mc turns into a GIGACHAD /HAREM manga god no real relationship( gf) with build up like a complet fuck fest

- non ntr player will not like it because it has (ntr) other people have sex than mc at the start of the early chapters..

Soo.... no idea which audiance will this be for

 

[CamaroFan432]

Yeah but the problem is if I understand this right

- netorare people wont like this because mc turns into a GIGACHAD /HAREM manga god no real relationship( gf) with build up like a complet fuck fest

- non ntr player will not like it because it has (ntr) other people have sex than mc at the start of the early chapters..

Soo.... no idea which audiance will this be for

It will be for the small percentage of people, who don't care about the story and are only in for the sex scenes and don't care who fucks who, as long as there is sex. So, if we're generous, maybe 6 people? I mean, they would be more successful, if they went to watch a porn vid at this point.

 

[Caylake]

I wrote a review for this game, you made a very good decision
I had a question
Is NTR avoidable (it doesn't happen) or skippable (it happens but we can skip it)? I hope it is avoidable and does not happen

NTR avoidable

 

[Maximilian87]

lol, the landlord fucking everything that moves, the game makes you watch it (cant skip), and you dare say is avoidable ? lmao
idgaf if those hoes are fucking him, but fuck if it is avoidable THEN WE DONT HAVE TO SEE THAT SHIT. and ffs give the MC a spine...
anyway im out, maybe will check this again in the future

 

[Nimbus Commando]

lol, the landlord fucking everything that moves, the game makes you watch it (cant skip), and you dare say is avoidable ? lmao
idgaf if those hoes are fucking him, but fuck if it is avoidable THEN WE DONT HAVE TO SEE THAT SHIT. and ffs give the MC a spine...
anyway im out, maybe will check this again in the future

Yeah, they love making pussy ass MCs and trying to add Voyeur shit and not call it NTR.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Guys, the landlord has only fucked Sarah so far, in the next updates you can prevent the landlord from fucking the mom, etc with the right choices
It was not avoidable in the manhwa (VN), it is avoidable in the game
If you hate mc, I agree that mc is a pussy now, but he has character development and he will become alpha as fuck

The fact that there's already a choice fork for "stand up to the bully" or "sit quietly" to me bodes well for future alternate paths.