Personally I'll never understand the Steph slander. In fact my stance seems to be the polar opposite of the thread where I prefer her much more over that insufferable harlot Kylee. Kylee has such an annoying tsundere bitchy disposition that its a bit unfathomable to me that ppl like her the most. There's no connection, no sensuality, no love at all...just carnal quickies with no emotional payoff at all. I seriously don't get it. Must be the character archetype. I had a similar viscerally negative reaction to the sister in Monkey Business. Anyone else?
Sounds like you should give my Re-Write a go! the link to it is available on this front page below the main download links!
I've attempted to make the characters more fleshed out and realised, with Stephanie being more relatable (and dare I say likeable?.. at times anyway.) with some humour thrown in here and there!
Kylee, while of course still maintaining that air of being in control and (seemingly aloof) nature, also has been written to have a very light hearted and fun interaction with the MC with more hints of how she actually feels sprinkled in along the way.
Every character has had an overall "upgrade", Amelie is way more motherly, Davie is even more authoritarian etc etc
Mia has been turned into even more of what I thought she seemed to be to me, a bit of an airhead. She's the butt of a lot of jokes from the MC, with Kylee trying to defend her half-heartedly (but not really sounding convincing about it).
Lauren is a full on cougar now, she is far saucier in this Re-Write and I made use of some of the sound files for the H-Scenes I came across that were missing audio. I get the vibe she isn't really well-liked in the community, but I thought I'd at least make her more convincing as the lonely, thirsty ex-housewife.
Could be worth taking a look! I'm currently finishing up Chapter 3 and will be working on Chapter 4 in the coming weeks!
A small sample of the breakfast scene in Chapter 3!: