Ren'Py Abandoned Heavy Five [Ch.2RS] [Nottravis]

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frap said:
You misunderstand, Notty. If you provide enough content for months, or even a year, I'll keep charging away it until I've seen it all. This is not a bad thing, unless the game sucks. There have been (more than) a few that I played through to one ending (or even not that far) and then deleted due to any of:

  • Boring or non-existent plot
  • Ridiculous renders
  • "18-year-old" characters that could walk into any middle school and not seem out of place
  • Sloppy writing (by the way, folks, "could've" or "could have," not "could of" - "I saw" not "I seen" - there's more, of course)*
* I DO make exceptions for writers whose first language is not English, and I further make exceptions for things said in character voice, as long as it fits the character. For instance: dumb-as-a-post character says "I seen 'er over there." Okay. Lawyer character says "The first time I seen it I..." not okay.

One thing I will add here - Notty's characters all have their own voice, and I expect that will only amplify as time goes on. No cookie-cutter universe where everyone's speech patterns and diction are identical here.


BTW - finally realized what I needed to do for the bad ending. Hi, Eric! Can we be friends? No? Oh well.
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Improper English has caused me to to stop playing so many of these games within the first 10 minutes
Nottravis said:
My fault for showing Becca getting spanked...
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Uhhhhh WHAT????? I just caught up and I didn't see that......shit, now I gotta go back and look for it. Ugh
 
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4.10 star(s) 68 Votes