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True!32,000 words in a chapter is a novel!
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Hmmm, regarding getting rid of Chris's hubby, I suddenly remember that Chris is actually quite righteous. She had a very good reason for what she did just before bootcamp, gets really pissed off when Kelly cheats during the fight, is quick to remind the MC and her crewmembers of army regulations and responsibilities (like after the drink with Annie). So unless her hubby does something that threatens/hurts/kills innocent people, she will NOT agree with the MC disposing of him.
So unless her hubby does become a threat, the only way to get rid of him would be to have Chris sign and turn in those divorce papers, before her husband wonders why she changed her mind and retracts his request and tries to get a better deal out of it.
So unless her hubby does become a threat, the only way to get rid of him would be to have Chris sign and turn in those divorce papers, before her husband wonders why she changed her mind and retracts his request and tries to get a better deal out of it.
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Accidents.Except when she has to cover up murders
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Sorry sorry! My bad! Nothing to see here guys, a particularly nasty screwdriver fell! Carry on!Accidents.
Since we're already at numbers, could you use SI units (except temperature, where Celsius would be nice), at least in brackets?32,000 words in a chapter is a novel!
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I really don't know what is the length of 5000 feets. Should I take Becca's feet for the standard measure?
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Oh! (Yes I know I said I was off to beddies an age ago but I've been enjoying a glass of white! - don't judge I got told off by a policeman this afternoon!)
Any thoughts on the Scarlet Pirate in Three? I'm polling over the next issue but would appreciate any feedback on it with it being a new thing. Feel free to PM if you'd prefer....
Any thoughts on the Scarlet Pirate in Three? I'm polling over the next issue but would appreciate any feedback on it with it being a new thing. Feel free to PM if you'd prefer....
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I went for units that would be easy to grasp. Same with say the flight dialogue which isn't strictly accurate. Sometimes you have to make a call on understandability rather than precision. I gather a lot of my stuff had to be googled as it is! *Haptics anyone?*
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You don't know the imperial units? What I roughly do with feet is to divide them by three. It's far from accurate, but it gives you a general idea without burdening the head with math.
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Also imperial units are used as standard in aviation globally.
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The more feet the less accurate it becomes so in space this gets kinda important, yes. But luckily we aren't the navigator of the ship, thank god! Anyway.. do we know WHY we are on that ship actually? For reals? Why there is a need for another LT.? I never get that partYou don't know the imperial units? What I roughly do with feet is to devide them by three. It's far from accurate, but it gives you a general idea without burdening the head with math.
Anyone please advise?I don't know what it is, but something tells me it is like Bloodheart by pusooy.
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The Scarlet Pirate was a welcome surprise in an already perfect chapter. Renders were great, we can see already the difference between your old and your new card, and the
) and I eagerly await to have a bottle of wine with Sarah
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The MC is a Brownjob not a glorious flying God, as Annie would say. The MC is SLF to be delivered to Ophion to fix their power problem. He's not crew - just a passenger.The more feet the less accurate it becomes so in space this gets kinda important, yes. But luckily we aren't the navigator of the ship, thank god! Anyway.. do we know WHY we are on that ship actually? For reals? Why there is a need for another LT.? I never get that part
But of course the Vannys crew are currently stuck down there with him....not that it should have been the MC in the first place of course....
Also, in your orders messages!
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No, it works. I must have been misclicking or something. I'm better at removing blouses
Yeah, i can see now that we are in deep shit just not fully realising it.