1 I wasn't really meaning to many lines I mean like in the first chapter there is free roaming going from room to room great, then in chapter 2 and 3 you don't get that same option it's just a series of clicking choices. Why.
2 I got the sparring and VR and beer invites that's not a problem.
3 Really? Withholding info from a higher ranking officer that's important to his and the crews safety?
4 No. Sarah is a drinker because of her looks. And someone has to be a gamer for the story to work so annie is the logical option.
I am absolutely fine with you and your opinions, but when making a review, you really need to say what you mean.
You never mentioned the removal of "movement options" which is totally valid. Put that in the review.
You mentioned needs more mini games, were you expecting them in a visual novel?, or did you have a patreon copy with the rock paper scissors content?
Your dislike of Becca is perfectly fine, not everyone likes mascots.
Your opinion on the power situation may be right or wrong. That would have been fine discussion material in the thread, but since there is no "reveal" on the truth, you can't know and thus shouldn't be in the review.
You used logical fallacies to come to your answer. Please read up on them. These will help you throughout life.
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I think Notty would agree Ch 1 was small and even 2 was. This was her first venture into game making and having a lesser rig, thus what was made was what was put out. However it is a lot better than most games that came out with their 0.01 content that is basically a tech demo.
Complaining a visual novel requires a lot of clicking and reading though. I don't think you understand what one is.
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Complaining that character roles are mixed up. Sarah (blonde) always acts like Sarah and Annie (Asian) always acts like Annie, I assume you mean that the stereotype in your head for how you think a blonde and asian should be didn't pan out. Asians can be drunkards too, if you ever were in Japan, South Korea, or China, walk down a major street in the evening, you will find dudes plastered and laying in the middle of the side walk. Drinking culture is a huge thing in Asia, Blondes playing video games, yeah, well pretty much everyone is a gamer now with mobile games, and shit look at twitch or mixer, etc. Tons of men and women of all colors/shapes/sizes/nationalities/etc to choose from, even those rare elusive blondes. All I'm saying is stereotypes aren't the greatest thing to run with.
Seriously some of your thoughts are valid to put in the review, just do it well.
