RomanHume

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I think the radio chatter is helpful for world building. I personally like it and I appreciated the scene. The scene itself hearkens back to older movies from the 80's and 90's where there would be scenes like that during the first act to help ease the audience into the setting. In more modern movies those scenes tend to be considered wasteful as they don't progress the story or any character development. Those same modern movies always seemed rushed to me without scenes like this to let the movie breath a little.

I hear you on condensing the chatter so the scene doesn't drag and only about 1% of your audience would even notice. Using Actual without a ship title still bothers me but I'm sure I'll get over it. Technically there are two Actuals in that scene alone. The captain of the Intrepid is Intrepid Actual and Chris is Vanguard Actual. Any other ship in the hangar bay also has an Actual and any ship just flying by on the same radio frequency, or landed on the nearby planet or flying through the atmosphere, would also have an Actual. Just saying Actual on an open frequency has the potential to cause a lot of confusion. But then again having everyone strip down during a forced landing makes me see the benefits of completely disregarding proper protocols so it's all good.
You clearly just don't understand space.

Everything is different...in space!

I'm just going to pretend they are using some sort of short range laser based communication that can't be intercepted by any other vessels thus making the communication only two way. Then on a given line there can be only two actuals...not that I know a damned thing about actuals.

Honestly though, you seem to know a lot about it and I respect that. Having you here to validate at least how close the author came adds credibility to the story and shows that research went into the writing. Cheers mate!
 
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NotSoAcending

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The compressed version is borked for me. The translucent hud overlay such as when you are entering your first and last name is an opaque black box instead. The navigation area at the bottom of the display is covered by an opaque black box as well. The imagemap items are black boxes when you are clicking to interact with them in the scene. I ended up and going back to the original dl to play without these issues.

Here's my crunched version.

Image/audio/video quality is reduced to make shit smaller. You've been warned so no bitching.

Heavy Five [Ch. 1] [Nottravis] - Original Size: 877MB

Download PC (79MB): - - -

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Steve Carter

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You clearly just don't understand space.

Everything is different...in space!

I'm just going to pretend they are using some sort of short range laser based communication that can't be intercepted by any other vessels thus making the communication only two way. Then on a given line there can be only two actuals...not that I know a damned thing about actuals.

Honestly though, you seem to know a lot about it and I respect that. Having you here to validate at least how close the author came adds credibility to the story and shows that research went into the writing. Cheers mate!
If someone can pull a George Lucas and convince the female cast that there's no underwear in space then I'll let you call whoever you want Actual.
 

RoadWulf

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is there a way to get every achievement? i got most of them but not the ones for annie
The only split is that you can't get the Annie "sexual act" and then Chadwick inviting to "train" you in one play through.

Though if you you get invited to a drink with Annie, and then take the space walk, the consequences of that sexual act play out anyway, so no big loss if you don't do it.
 

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Just checked this out. I am totally in for the second coming of Vasquez. Definitely one of the best first version releases I've played. The writing is surprisingly good, and clearly a lot of time and thought went into developing a universe with the planet, alien and crew information. The renders are very good, I'm a big fan of the varied and realistic body types. Very impressive, I'll definitely be following this, possibly even becoming a patron assuming future releases actually come and the quality stays high.
 

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This game seems to be quite interesting, my only problem is Chadwick reminds me of the current Chilean Interior and Public Security Minister Andrés Chadwick. :eek::ROFLMAO:
 
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How do you get each achievement? I've only managed to get the training one and the Sarah VR future play, since that's the most obvious ones.
 

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That's because she's a frackin Cylon.

So is it just me or does anyone else get a Boomer vibe from Battlestar Galactica from her.
Yeah was also thinking of Boomer. Let's see if her personality is as split too. She certainly is sending out some crazy vibes already. ;)

Female domination, no thanks I get enough of that from my wife.:sick:
Sounds like she is doing it wrong. Personally I get lots of Femdom from my wife too, and can't get enough of it. ;)
 

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Female domination, no thanks I get enough of that from my wife.:sick:
Fortunately you can play it without the Femdom stuff. Just put your foot down and kick some ass. I get the feeling that for as stern as Chris is, you may yet get the option to tame that beast if you play your cards right in future updates. (I have no inside knowledge on this, it's just the vibe I'm getting from the writing.)
 

WaltS

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This game seems to be quite interesting, my only problem is Chadwick reminds me of the current Chilean Interior and Public Security Minister Andrés Chadwick. :eek::ROFLMAO:
No way my dear Hercule,

that guy is fugly as heck... Don't know 'bout his character but just from googling his face - jech!

I'll take Chris any day of the week - and then again any day of the weekend as well ;-)
 

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Another sci-fi/space opera visual novel to add to my list along side . I like that it's a choice-based visual novel, not a sandbox and stats & money grinding game. Too many sandbox/grinding games lately or visual novels that were originally choice-based, but later turned into a sandbox/free-roaming game. A problem is the map movement part, if you don't go in a certain order talking to the girls & looking around the ship, the main story automatically starts back in the flight deck even if you didn't talk to Annie or Sarah yet. Or that you might miss scenes like Annie's cup & invite if you don't talk to her first before the others. The small talk with Sarah seems to repeats itself if you talk to her again even after you accept her invite. Will Chris route be femdom-only or will there other routes with her that develop later on? When i see Annie's model i think of Alina (from ), but Annie has a taller look & more matured body than Alina.

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RomanHume

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Another sci-fi/space opera visual novel to add to my list along side . I like that it's a choice-based visual novel, not a sandbox and stats & money grinding game. Too many sandbox/grinding games lately or visual novels that were originally choice-based, but later turned into a sandbox/free-roaming game. A problem is the map movement part, if you don't go in a certain order talking to the girls & looking around the ship, the main story automatically starts back in the flight deck even if you didn't talk to Annie or Sarah yet. Or that you might miss scenes like Annie's cup & invite if you don't talk to her first before the others. The small talk with Sarah seems to repeats itself if you talk to her again even after you accept her invite. Will Chris route be femdom-only or will there other routes with her that develop later on? When i see Annie's model i think of Alina (from ), but Annie has a taller look & more matured body than Alina.

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Of course it is! And I'm willing to bet that her cannon being named "Eric" is a reference to another game in which we all suffered terribly. :ROFLMAO:
 

Nottravis

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Morning Chaps.*

*lights a smoke and starts replying*

I was told chapter 2 will come out this sunday, is it true?
Afraid not. Chapter two is due at the end of this month.

Hmm well, player perspective might be something you could put up as a poll on your Patreon? So you would know if it would be worth the effort to have the MC fully rendered in such situations.
Not a bad idea actually. Thanks. I mean there are obviously some scenes where it's essential for the MC's bits and pieces to be in view. Others less so. But my guiding rule on images is that they have to conform to a) does it help the story b) is it sexy c) does it pass my (perhaps low) quality threshold. In the case we're talking about it failed c) and the clock was ticking...

Is there any guide or need for one, because I've read from page 5 to 8 and don't seem to see any mention of one.
No guide I'm afraid, but for this chapter you don't really need one. Well, I don't think so any way, but then I would :)

Following your development of this game I'm really glad how it turned out, the dialogue was great and characters diverse and interesting and most importantly MC wasn't a plank. The scenes in the ship had that comfy claustrophobic feel, also Chris turned out to be the goddess I imagined her to be the moment she brought interest to me to this game in the first place. Good job mate.
Thank you so much!
I'm glad you got to see it out in the wild after all of those months of me faffing around with it :)

I think the radio chatter is helpful for world building. I personally like it and I appreciated the scene. The scene itself hearkens back to older movies from the 80's and 90's where there would be scenes like that during the first act to help ease the audience into the setting. In more modern movies those scenes tend to be considered wasteful as they don't progress the story or any character development. Those same modern movies always seemed rushed to me without scenes like this to let the movie breath a little.

I hear you on condensing the chatter so the scene doesn't drag and only about 1% of your audience would even notice. Using Actual without a ship title still bothers me but I'm sure I'll get over it. Technically there are two Actuals in that scene alone. The captain of the Intrepid is Intrepid Actual and Chris is Vanguard Actual. Any other ship in the hangar bay also has an Actual and any ship just flying by on the same radio frequency, or landed on the nearby planet or flying through the atmosphere, would also have an Actual. Just saying Actual on an open frequency has the potential to cause a lot of confusion. But then again having everyone strip down during a forced landing makes me see the benefits of completely disregarding proper protocols so it's all good.
Thanks Steve. As I've said, I really had some doubts over both scenes. I mean -I- liked them but...well, you just never know what others will think until they see it of course.

in space noone can hear your panties fall....
*giggles*
Because in space, no one can hear you moan...

...except for the other people in the shuttle...

..they can probably hear it...cause the bulkheads are thin.
....and in the case of a "V" class also largely open plan... ;)


The only split is that you can't get the Annie "sexual act" and then Chadwick inviting to "train" you in one play through.

Though if you you get invited to a drink with Annie, and then take the space walk, the consequences of that sexual act play out anyway, so no big loss if you don't do it.
Absolutely. There's usually more than one route to be able to get to major scenes. A design choice on my part so that the player can play as feels right for them yet not be locked out of content purely because they didn't do X at time Y whilst holding a small fish or whatever. I don't want the player to feel they -have- to play in a certain way or do certain things to progress.

Now obviously there are some exceptions to that. Sarah being the most obvious case where, for example, if you go down the blackmail route with her you can't really expect her to ask you to play VR games with her etc. But by and large, it holds good your relationship status depending of course.

Just checked this out. I am totally in for the second coming of Vasquez. Definitely one of the best first version releases I've played. The writing is surprisingly good, and clearly a lot of time and thought went into developing a universe with the planet, alien and crew information. The renders are very good, I'm a big fan of the varied and realistic body types. Very impressive, I'll definitely be following this, possibly even becoming a patron assuming future releases actually come and the quality stays high.
Thank you so much :) I'm so pleased people are enjoying this and thank you for the kind words. As to future releases, chapter two is, in my opinion (bias alert!) much stronger than chapter one as I don't have to do so much introduction. Certainly I had a lot more fun writing it! As to the spoiler well....*wiggles eyebrows* Any comment on my part would ruin the first scene of the next chapter so I'd best keep quiet ;)

That's because she's a frackin Cylon.

So is it just me or does anyone else get a Boomer vibe from Battlestar Galactica from her.
Oh surely not. That would mean that Annie would end up shooting the main charac.....oh... ;)






* is almost always on GMT and therefore any lack of responses is probably due to being asleep whilst most of you are up :)
 
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