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Looking good
Good renders and the story is interesting
Good luck with the project dev, can't want for more updates and to see how the story unfolds
like getting our own gang of hero's and kicking that backstabber's arse and see her crash down into deep shit.(hope that wont make me evil)
Good renders and the story is interesting
Good luck with the project dev, can't want for more updates and to see how the story unfolds
like getting our own gang of hero's and kicking that backstabber's arse and see her crash down into deep shit.(hope that wont make me evil)
The nefarious, malevolent, demonic entity which blushes sold me 
Cute grills and interesting story also help
Cute grills and interesting story also help
I think the dev is from Turkey, because during sex with Kaya, she screams as "mükemmel" which means excellent in Turkish (the dev probably forgot to translate this word into English), or this character (Kaya) is from Turkey since Kaya means "rock" in Turkish, though it is a given male name.
Normally while playing I don't read all of the lines but this time I enjoyed reading all of them (though there were some serious grammatical errors) I liked the plot so far, I actually like the concept of strong main character from the beginning with the adding theme of revenge (such as Legend of Shield Hero anime).
Please keep going and update regularly. If you are from Turkey then you are probably one of the first game dev on this web site from there and my first message on this forum goes to this game.
Normally while playing I don't read all of the lines but this time I enjoyed reading all of them (though there were some serious grammatical errors) I liked the plot so far, I actually like the concept of strong main character from the beginning with the adding theme of revenge (such as Legend of Shield Hero anime).
Please keep going and update regularly. If you are from Turkey then you are probably one of the first game dev on this web site from there
and my first message on this forum goes to this game.
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Well so far its a nice little intro
The story could be interesting but its too soon to actually form a opinion on it
The super powers bit could become quite a nice touch
But for now ill keep a eye on it
And maybe after a update or two more i can rate it
The story could be interesting but its too soon to actually form a opinion on it
The super powers bit could become quite a nice touch
But for now ill keep a eye on it
And maybe after a update or two more i can rate it
Between 1 to 10 where 10 is perfect english and 1 is slamming your dick against the keyboard and calling it english, the game is like a 5. Its awkward but doable.
that should not be possible seeing the summary and what's been translated of arifureta
Ntr planned or not ??
If yes, i am out of here !!
If yes, i am out of here !!
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I'm not a fan of it as well, but must you really bring that up?
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Man.....this game has such potential. Renders, characters, plot and animations are good, but the english is really bad, both spelling and grammar. Sure, english isn't my native language either, but I have no idea what some characters are even talking about or what they're trying to say. The script itself lacks alot of emotion, just bad writing in general (probably due to the lack of english). I mean, their son tried to kill himself and ended up in a coma for 2 weeks and the mother's response is "Get well son".....really!? The older sister tells you to "fuck off", but as soon as you have a power she's soooo caring all of the sudden....really bruh!? What can I say about dad....ugh.......enough said. Atleast he seems to care.....kinda. The little sister is adorable....and she's not fat....The MC should really defend her at the dinner table....villain or not. Give her the damn apple.
All jokes aside.....
This game could be amazing, so much potential, IF a proof-reader can help with the script, bringing emotions and feelings to the characters. IMO that's the only thing holding this game back so far.
I wish the dev good luck and all the best!
All jokes aside.....
This game could be amazing, so much potential, IF a proof-reader can help with the script, bringing emotions and feelings to the characters. IMO that's the only thing holding this game back so far.
I wish the dev good luck and all the best!
well i agree with you but the faults that you have spotted could be corrected later even trough the narrative, for exmple the elder sister shows care for the mc even before the power reveal (she advise him not to aggravate the bully and worries about him which makes her a tsudere basically).Man.....this game has such potential. Renders, characters, plot and animations are good, but the english is really bad, both spelling and grammar. Sure, english isn't my native language either, but I have no idea what some characters are even talking about or what they're trying to say. The script itself lacks alot of emotion, just bad writing in general (probably due to the lack of english). I mean, their son tried to kill himself and ended up in a coma for 2 weeks and the mother's response is "Get well son".....really!? The older sister tells you to "fuck off", but as soon as you have a power she's soooo caring all of the sudden....really bruh!? What can I say about dad....ugh.......enough said. Atleast he seems to care.....kinda. The little sister is adorable....and she's not fat....The MC should really defend her at the dinner table....villain or not. Give her the damn apple.
All jokes aside.....
This game could be amazing, so much potential, IF a proof-reader can help with the script, bringing emotions and feelings to the characters. IMO that's the only thing holding this game back so far.
I wish the dev good luck and all the best!
the mother and father are both disfuncinal as perants which you can see in the rection to the son and younger daughter and you could write it so that the mother is too concerned about her failed marriage to notice the kids or simply make her selfish with good intentions having her go trough a cheracter arc later.
now the father is ment to be absent (it is a porn game after all) and about the english i think you are right but i think that time can solve that problem.
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Alot of good points and I agree with some of them. Maybe we interpreted the story, the characters differently and you might have understood more than I did.
Just hope that the writing and english improve, so the dev can get support for this project. It's hard to get patreons and support with english this bad. Hate to see hard work and potential like this get wasted due to language issues.