Hola! No puedo explicar en español, lo siento para la Google vomitar
So the screen goes black like its going to load a transition or whatever and I'm sitting here waiting. Please don't ask a person to click to advance a dialog that is invisible. any black or blank screen should advance itself, because it looks like a loading screen.
The map could use some prettying up. I'm not convinced the town in this story should be at the scale of the current one i mean that's a huge city yet the places you visit, and the story seem more of a small town thing.
I can't wait for the jobs system to get some more love. It could use some color, maybe color code the katana job icon to match Luna's shade of purple. And here is an idea for you: A Katana(or any type really) job that also requires the player characters weapon type, So you have a 2 person job to take care of this cute dryad chick who will use her root tentacles to put the Player and Luna together in an amusing way before joining the guild
and well, you could either have gone to see it yourself, or perhaps just have a memory scene as the 2+ girls tell you about how the group of slime monsters outnumbered them.
But with that 'little' rant aside i think this game is very well put together! I mean the writing and the girls are solid, But what impresses me: The main menu looks great. The UI used for inventory, girls, quests also amazing. And the individual girl cards are amazing++ that's a great effect. Day/night cycle UI looks great, But I appreciate the time progression bar showing some things can take less than 1/4 of a day.
So yes I'm a little excited I can't wait for the next releases!