Dracconis69
Thanks for reporting the typos you found, darkhound1 is very interested in fixing them.
However, he can't use a picture to find the error in 10,000 lines of text.
He needs you to type it out incorrectly so that he can do a search, then tell him what's wrong. I also add how it should be so he can just copy and paste the corrected version.
This is how I reported the error. Obviously, the little things about commas don't matter too much, but I figure that if he's correcting things anyway, go ahead, and if he doesn't care, he can just ignore it.
PC: *chuckles* I don't remember exactly for how long he was staring at her chest, before he found his voice.
PC: But Annabelle didn't seem to mind or at least didn't show it.
"Amy" not "PC," "for exactly" not "exactly for," no comma after chest, comma or ellipses after "didn't seem to mind" since the pause adds to the humor
Should be:
Amy: *chuckles* I don't remember for exactly how long he was staring at her chest before he found his voice.
Amy: But Annabelle didn't seem to mind... or at least didn't show it.