VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hosting the Quarterback [Ch. 1-9] [kirsESS]

[Francis Fleshripper]

what a waste of time.

 

[Deleted member 14950]

Naah

 

[joe316]

Thankful to see everyone else agreeing this game is hot garbage.

 

[Aizen-Myoo]

There's definitely potential here, but it got to the NTR way too quick. There is zero emotional attachment to the MC's mother and sister.

 

[andupreda]

There was a game called Bully on this forum ... the creator i think got banned and thread removed (long story) ... this game is similar to that game and if continue on racism side i wont be surprised this game would be removed as well ... ( Are some chances the Bully creator to be same with this game) I like NTR games but this is not NTR this is bullying game and you have to be really crazy to enjoy something like this .

 

[Mathew joe]

Does this game have animated scenes and incest content?

 

[Deleted member 992182]

Well, if you are on this path, may I make some suggestions to avoid the pitfalls this game falls into?

1) Try not to have empty scenes that describe events not shown. This game has that quite often.
2) Tone down the bully/disrespect aspect of the antagonist and the women. This game made them so evil it stole any eroticism the author had created. There is no reason the women can't love the cuck but still be powerless in the face of the desired cock.
3) Use actual seduction, not just panties dropping for no reason. I get the whole "young stud entices MILF" angle, but at least make him work for it. Things are so much hotter when there is a descent into corruption, complete with the declarations of who has the best cock or who owns the pussy.
4) Scenes of undressing are also nice, especially from clothes a woman wasn't expecting to get naked from. Those games where the mom wears a black cocktail dress all the time are kinda lame.

Just some thoughts.

Yeah, finally tried this story and mine is...nothing like this haha

Like, it also involves a football player and that's literally all it has in common with this.

But I appreciate the legit suggestions and can assure you that we share very similar mentalities. I do pretty much everything you suggested.

I'm going to finish modeling soon and will begin renders after. I want my first title to be released in full so it'll be a few months.

 

[Elad8021]

Ok, WOW this game is probably my favorite now
just one thing missing in my opinion.
animations, if we get animations for this game it would be awesome

 

[mickster101]

Yeah, finally tried this story and mine is...nothing like this haha

Like, it also involves a football player and that's literally all it has in common with this.

But I appreciate the legit suggestions and can assure you that we share very similar mentalities. I do pretty much everything you suggested.

I'm going to finish modeling soon and will begin renders after. I want my first title to be released in full so it'll be a few months.

And I will look forward to it! If you have a way to support your work, let me know.

 

[xufu1994]

I like it

 

[jack brisen]

waste of time and waste of a download. wtf is the purpose of this game????

 

[Vonhaught]

waste of time

 

[MrWally]

The dev. should have taken more time to expand the dialogue and introduce the characters. Now there is hardly a story, just a sudden stray with us and fuck everybody… I could have been worse, but if he restarts with a good storyline it could be a million times better

 

[Vadasza]

Definitely not for me, but best wishes to the dev! They got 5 chapters for first release!

 

[jonatansavinon]

Never get why interracial is a thing, like a black american and a white american, are from different race just because their color.

But if a dude do this to me i will hate every other male in the world for god sake!

Edit:
Not my thing, but for some reasons all the games that people are creating have ntr or cheating.

- Build more the INTO the action. We like porn with a story behind.
- Don't make the NTR or bullying too strong, because it at some point can turn players against you the creator. It can too get boring fast.
- NTR is better when the MC can actually fight back (in my opinion), make the MC in some way try to do something similar to him and for it to fireback or just to success and have a more vengeful antagonist. Btw, u need to know where the story is going, will the MC 'win' or the antagonist? Both will 'lose'? Girl will take action and send both to hell? Believe me, sex is enjoyable but it get boring fast and more if u are a women.

NTR, in my opinion is not good at just porn, but with a story behind with twist, can be a good thing.

 

[Anubizz]

Generaly I dont mind NTR , good NTR like good girl gone bad make a story on why she become like that, But this just plain horrible regardless if its NTR or not, basically no story at all.

 

[xmilteach]

Thx..

 

[mammonite]

straight wtf is this

 

[Lemon Mint]

I don't mind the concept but yeah... Execution wasn't really there at all.

 

[thrillerbad]

my favorite