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- Jan 16, 2019
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yup same problem with Angelica's temptation the new version by developer saruh the game makes the best friend into a complete scumbag and yet in game all women seem to think he is great but the other thing it deliberately makes the MC's husband into an utter coward loser with no redeeming quality and the Intro story of the game is borderline cruelty. i can tolerate ntr but not bullying or borderline cruelty. and that is exactly what these ntr devs have to get right.
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I like NTR, but... MC in a family of psychopaths, his girlfriend being a total slut. Not sure this is a good start.
- Aug 1, 2017
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So Bully was done by Jobeo and the game was taken down but he got with F95 staff and mods to figure out what specifically got the game banned (spoiler, it was forcing an abortion and keeping it in a glass jar, yuck) and has ANOTHER game out in .2 right now called Reparations, same vein less... bannable content. The more you know!
Maybe a little revenge in the story,,Like the son pays the whole football team to screw them all night log. turn them into mind less dolls..
- Dec 3, 2019
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I like your game, but... The story seems to be too short. I think you should fill in Chapter 1 + 5 more. The dialog boxes of mom and girl can be more rich to express their thoughts.
I think the quarterback should be a strong bully rather than a bad bastard. He will take over all the girls instead of hurting them. The quarterback should take the love of all the girls, make them pregnant and build their own family, rather than be ruthless like livestock. In this process, it does not conflict with humiliating MC.
Mom, sisters and girlfriends should focus on the quarterback rather than be gang raped by many people in the process. Maybe we can add some female members of her, let the quarterback occupy aunt, or girlfriend's mother and other women related to MC.
Chapters 1-5 look a lot but the story is too little... But I like it very much.
I think the quarterback should be a strong bully rather than a bad bastard. He will take over all the girls instead of hurting them. The quarterback should take the love of all the girls, make them pregnant and build their own family, rather than be ruthless like livestock. In this process, it does not conflict with humiliating MC.
Mom, sisters and girlfriends should focus on the quarterback rather than be gang raped by many people in the process. Maybe we can add some female members of her, let the quarterback occupy aunt, or girlfriend's mother and other women related to MC.
Chapters 1-5 look a lot but the story is too little... But I like it very much.
- Jul 14, 2018
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The story itself continous, i hope the game does to, part 6 & 7 should be out if i read correctly
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I get what you say and that happen a lot in NTR threads but this is not the case, this game lack a lot of things and people say it, someones with constructives comments and other just with hate comments. I like NTR and to me this game started really bad, the ratings show that, a lot of them are from people who love NTR and they gave him really constructives advices and the Dev just desappered because he don't like it people talking "bad" about his game. Thats happen a lot and to all the devs, if you can take well the criticism that means this is not the work for you.
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Heh heh heh!! The NTR haters out there must be shaking with rage - I love it!! LOL!!! Me? I'm just a fucking perv that likes porn... I dont care who fucks who! I like this dev - maybe I might have to fit him into my Patreon budget... 
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I don't mind NTR and can even enjoy it when the corruption makes sense and the character's fall from grace is something I can see happening because the inaction of the MC or because of circumstance beyond your control.
But the whole: "Chad shows up and fucks anything with a pulse as he is so manly and such a physical specimen that every woman within a one mile radius turns into a cock zombie" deal that some of these games adapt-- you might as well not have the MC or a story at all.
My advice is either make the Quarterback have more to him and the way he gets these women more plausible. Make him cunning. Have him trick the MC in some way. Anything other than being Chad Bigdickerson.
Good luck!
But the whole: "Chad shows up and fucks anything with a pulse as he is so manly and such a physical specimen that every woman within a one mile radius turns into a cock zombie" deal that some of these games adapt-- you might as well not have the MC or a story at all.
My advice is either make the Quarterback have more to him and the way he gets these women more plausible. Make him cunning. Have him trick the MC in some way. Anything other than being Chad Bigdickerson.
Good luck!
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No, that's the whole point of this VN. As the description states, the plot revolves entirely around this so the MC can do nothing as the Quarterback has his way with MC's mother, sister and girlfriend.
I wouldn't mind the NTR if it would lead to MC trying to get rid of the black guy and win his family over. Are you planning something like that in the future? And what is the opinion of the MC? Does he like watching or is he angry about this happening?