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Thanks for the reply, and understood. I definitely thought it was a really good start overall. I think possibly the club scene just comes off as quite abrupt because it's a mid-action cut, i.e. after a decision point and girl reveal...it feels like it just stops rather a deliberate end point. And similarly with bowling again it stops mid conversation. But thanks for the explanation, I appreciate the pressure there must be behind the scenes. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, best of luck with the game.We removed Erin's next scene because the artist believed it looked bad and wanted to improve it just after the release when we were testing it out.
The club scene was cut short because We wanted to release the game as soon as possible and that scene was going to take a lot of time to make.
Tbh I myself didn't liked the ending