Ok i wanna say i am loving the game, Akane is awesome and all. But i have to say a couple of things in the negative.
1. You need to work more on the dialogue, i can tell you guys aren't natural English speakers which is why the dialogue comes off a lot of times as wooden/awkward.
2. You have to be a bit more subtle. Like i understand you wanted to dispel some doubt about the girls being virgins, because that's super important to a lot of people which is perfectly fine i like that as well, but it almost feels like 4th wall breaking. I was waiting for one of the girls to gram the camera look us through the computer screen and say "Hey i am a virgin, did you know that i am a virgin? My pussy has never experienced a dick, because i am a V-I-R-G-I-N."
I only say this because there were a couple of moments in the game where stuff like this took me out of the game for a moment, because the dialogue didn't feel natural and it was obvious it was inserted there for us players to read it, not because the character would actually think or say that normally.
Anyway this comes off negative, but it's really not, overall i LOVED the update, i love the characters, but you need to relax more guys. We don't have to hear every girl say that she is literally a virgin, we can pretty much assume that by ourselves. And if they do, you can make it more natural, like when they first have sex with MC, then it would be a lot more natural then when they are just humping lol.
Anyway, as promised i will sub to patreon, take care keep up the good work.
