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Looking at replies in other games from profiles like skeltom or evolutionkills...
I'm really sad about you.. (honestly)
When was the last time you wrote something nice for a game?
We are living in the era of fanboys.. (if you are not another dev behind the username)
How can anyone bother with a game that isn't good (in your opinion) and write with so much ''passion'' ?
I'm really sad about you.. (honestly)
When was the last time you wrote something nice for a game?
We are living in the era of fanboys.. (if you are not another dev behind the username)
How can anyone bother with a game that isn't good (in your opinion) and write with so much ''passion'' ?
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I write plenty of nice things for games if I feel it's worth it. I'm not sure what you think a fanboy is but it isn't someone who writes something that's not nice. If your looking for everyone that plays your game to shower you with admiration your going to be disappointed.
It's also not just me with a negative reaction to this project. It clearly needs work in may areas in my opinion and pretending otherwise just to be "nice" doesn't help anyone. If you are going to get flustered by every piece of criticism then making and releasing content to the public may not be a wise choice for you.
- Sep 21, 2018
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We both know what a fanboy is... don't play dumb...
I've spent already enough time about this..
In the anonymity of the internet everyone writes whatever..
Whatever.. do your thing..
Just so you know I am very happy because I released it.. everything else is a bonus for me. I know when someone makes a good point about the game and you don't. I wasn't born yesterday.
- Oct 9, 2017
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This isn't going anywhere but sounds to me like your in denial. The main problem is that your ignoring any kind of feedback that even remotely paints the project in a bad light. You don't have to be born yesterday to see a good point, you only have to read the room. Your game needs work, that's just how it is. The sooner you can accept that the sooner you can start to improve your skills.
I mean that in a motivational way but something tells me you'll just write that off as me being mean as well.
I mean that in a motivational way but something tells me you'll just write that off as me being mean as well.
Not completely related to the game, but anyone knows if the game has a filter for honey select lookin games ?
Yeah my bad, I meant the website. There really needs to be a filter to separate regular renp'y games from those that use honey select assets.
- Jan 3, 2021
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Sure, I'll bite.
Here's my impression of Cozy Café. TL;DR - It's pretty fantastic. Solid A or A-
Here's my impression of Maids and Maidens. TL;DR - It's above average, but could till use some work. Solid C+ or B-
Here's my impression of My Innocent Pleasure. TL;DR - It's a dumpster fire. F-
You can also see me defending the cast of Pale Carnations from those tossing the word 'whore' around as if pejoratives were live grenades.
Not every game is going to be an absolute banger, most of them fall into the very boring middle ground of mediocrity. The games that do stand out are the ones at either end of the spectrum, those being the exceptionally good and the astonishingly bad. This game caught my attention because it fell into the later category, as demonstrated by my previous post.
You are not a skilled writer. You do not have an eye for framing your shots or posing your figures. Your characters designs consist of malformed and grossly disproportioned body parts and broken skeletons. If you had just used the default character cards in HoneySelect and taken screen captures of them (with the game's UI included), it would be a step in improving the game's visuals. It wouldn't have fixed the deficient writing or the dumb idea to split the game into two separate development paths, but hey, baby steps.
Again, the amount of effort here that was spent to make something somehow look worse than it started is what grabbed my attention. The art major in me demanded commentary.
So you have a choice here. You can go back to the drawing board and actually try to improve yourself, or you can wallow in self-denial and never get any better. You do what you want, I'm not your dad. But you can't be upset at the crowd when the resounding consensus is that you just made a dud. Learning you're not good at something isn't fun, but you'll never improve without acknowledging your deficiencies.
Or just pull a Count Adhemar, charging headlong into denial.
- Sep 21, 2018
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-If that's the case, then I'll just keep an eye out for the more obvious mistakes. So far that's a really clunky line of dialogue that...
- Can't draw? There are plenty of 3D options available, from hi-res ray-traced lighting in Daz3D that would make a RTX4090 weep, to..
- Maybe start with the description? Cause it's all nonsensical bullshit. Those graphics aren't 'next generation' anything, let alone...
-Is this game supposed to be a parody or dark comedy? Maybe some lite body horror? If not, then why else does everyone look so off and...
-That faux lo-fi pixel art kinda irks me. It's super low-res pixelated line art combined with an anachronisticly high density color...
-Ugh. If the devs can't even be bothered to format the text so it doesn't wrap around the edges, why should anyone care enough to fork...
- Honestly? I'd prefer just text and dialogue (assuming the dev didn't offload their creative writing work to a bot as well).
- I know enough to be cogent of what I don't know. But I can say this for sure; I sure as fuck can at least write better than you can (as...
Every (-) is a post in a different game..
I can continue all day
You aren't my daddy but I'm yours
Go back to your mancave now..
- Can't draw? There are plenty of 3D options available, from hi-res ray-traced lighting in Daz3D that would make a RTX4090 weep, to..
- Maybe start with the description? Cause it's all nonsensical bullshit. Those graphics aren't 'next generation' anything, let alone...
-Is this game supposed to be a parody or dark comedy? Maybe some lite body horror? If not, then why else does everyone look so off and...
-That faux lo-fi pixel art kinda irks me. It's super low-res pixelated line art combined with an anachronisticly high density color...
-Ugh. If the devs can't even be bothered to format the text so it doesn't wrap around the edges, why should anyone care enough to fork...
- Honestly? I'd prefer just text and dialogue (assuming the dev didn't offload their creative writing work to a bot as well).
- I know enough to be cogent of what I don't know. But I can say this for sure; I sure as fuck can at least write better than you can (as...
Every (-) is a post in a different game..
I can continue all day
You aren't my daddy but I'm yours
Go back to your mancave now..
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Dev, I'll be honest. I'm not a fan of Honey Select games. The above-mentioned Maids and Maidens being an exception. (Story started off strong but once B plot was revealed I lost interest) But even bad games are worth tabbing through to get to the porn
Your game would at least get a 2 stars if the sex scenes were decent. But you've gone and apparently locked all the uh....good stuff behind a paywall. And good is doing some heavy lifting. And the sex scenes aren't good. The Renders aren't good. And at least in the 0.1 version, the choices were utterly meaningless
Just based on your weird interactions in this topic, its no wonder your writing in-game is borderline nonsensical. I get that English isnt everyone's first language and its a fucking hard language to learn. But it doesnt appear that you've ever held a real conversation in English.
I wish you luck in future endeavors but this game is DOA. Might as well finish it though. A crappy game is one thing. An abandoned game is worse.
Your game would at least get a 2 stars if the sex scenes were decent. But you've gone and apparently locked all the uh....good stuff behind a paywall. And good is doing some heavy lifting. And the sex scenes aren't good. The Renders aren't good. And at least in the 0.1 version, the choices were utterly meaningless
Just based on your weird interactions in this topic, its no wonder your writing in-game is borderline nonsensical. I get that English isnt everyone's first language and its a fucking hard language to learn. But it doesnt appear that you've ever held a real conversation in English.
I wish you luck in future endeavors but this game is DOA. Might as well finish it though. A crappy game is one thing. An abandoned game is worse.
Amazing thread.
To the dev: in all honesty you need to grow up. If you cannot take criticism then you should not to get into content creation.
- Dev asks for honest feedback.
- People give their honest feedback.
- Dev cries about getting the honest feedback he asked for and proceeds to
- try and insult everyone who gave him said feedback
- play the victim card and claims everyone is so mean to him!
To the dev: in all honesty you need to grow up. If you cannot take criticism then you should not to get into content creation.
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It's an honor for me 2dcius that you are an older member than me in this forum and your first message is about my game.
Thank you very much.
- Jan 3, 2021
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-If that's the case, then I'll just keep an eye out for the more obvious mistakes. So far that's a really clunky line of dialogue that...
- Can't draw? There are plenty of 3D options available, from hi-res ray-traced lighting in Daz3D that would make a RTX4090 weep, to..
- Maybe start with the description? Cause it's all nonsensical bullshit. Those graphics aren't 'next generation' anything, let alone...
-Is this game supposed to be a parody or dark comedy? Maybe some lite body horror? If not, then why else does everyone look so off and...
-That faux lo-fi pixel art kinda irks me. It's super low-res pixelated line art combined with an anachronisticly high density color...
-Ugh. If the devs can't even be bothered to format the text so it doesn't wrap around the edges, why should anyone care enough to fork...
- Honestly? I'd prefer just text and dialogue (assuming the dev didn't offload their creative writing work to a bot as well).
- I know enough to be cogent of what I don't know. But I can say this for sure; I sure as fuck can at least write better than you can (as...
Every (-) is a post in a different game..
I can continue all day
You aren't my daddy but I'm yours
Go back to your mancave now..
I literally can not roast you any harder than you've roasted yourself in your own thread. Bravo.
And joke's on you, I'm a Xennial, not a Zoomer. So if you're my dad, that makes you a BOOMER.
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I wanted to like this but ugh there's just so many things wrong with it as it stands but then with the choice to release a demo with no choices (which is just dumb as hell). Well, it's hard to overlook the problems with the project in light of that.
Like, I chose Jenna-Natalie just to see what all is in this demo version and it's about 30 seconds worth of content, maybe closer to 45 seconds depending on how fast you read, it literally goes like this
Walk into the room with the girls.
Leave to go to another room with 3rd girl.
Girl lays down
Screen darkens and "indistinct" voices say something.
END.
Like, I chose Jenna-Natalie just to see what all is in this demo version and it's about 30 seconds worth of content, maybe closer to 45 seconds depending on how fast you read, it literally goes like this
Walk into the room with the girls.
Leave to go to another room with 3rd girl.
Girl lays down
Screen darkens and "indistinct" voices say something.
END.