CamaroFan432

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Artwork looks good and tags are up my alley. But sadly I won't play it, because of the amount of depressing stuff in it. I'm myself fighting every f**king day with my own metal illness, so I don't need that in the VN I play. I play these to get away from depressing stuff and escape reality for at least a while.

I still wish you much success, dev.
 

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i'll give it a shot but it always sucks when a female character is killed cause then you know you wont end up with her. if it was a male friend the story would still have the dead friend as a plot line and no need to care about never adding them to harem.
 

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Jeezus....so many syndromes and disorders and whatnot in this game. A psychologists wet dream here. Why does every character have to have some kind of disorder? Is there not a single normal character?
There are no normal people on f95zone or related projects. We're all a degenerate family and we'd probably have a gangbang orgy if it wasn't for the confines of our cum crusted monitors...even worse.....on NNN.
 
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Mommysbuttslut

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That was surprisingly not depressing. Don't get me wrong it was still depressing but like maybe 20% as depressing as I was expecting it to be. Pretty good overall
 

JenMistress

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Well, this does seem to be quite the dark game, but a fun one, and interested in seeing where this goes from here with Ghost Girl. Thank you for this and totally looking forward for more!!!
 
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After the rescue, you ended up at the Institution for Abused Children and befriended its outcasts.
A day before leaving, your friend committed suicide...
Why are you still able to see her?

:unsure:why leave one relatively good game for this....
 

homor

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yep as expected...this was one big pile of nonsence. Sadly Mc cant die to get final ending for game :-(
 
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dinmor

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"he is at your mercy" > "first aid" > "if girl help, otherwise idk" wtf? :ROFLMAO: actually retarded lmfao
1) thats not what "administer first aid" as a choice indicates
2) mc is just told soldier is a man "he", so there should be no question there..?
 

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Finished this first chapter. Really, really good start. The dialogue is strange and probably not intentionally strange, but it works really well in the tone and setting, so it's not even a negative. Very much looking forward to future releases.
 

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Thanks everyone for commenting so actively! I am surprised to see that the reviews are relatively positive, I expected a lot worse cause the game is definitely weird - which is fully my intention, but you know, being weird and executing something weird well are really different things.

What happened on itch is a lot more what I expected:

User: wtf is this game? - Review: 1 star

xD

I'll go over everyone's comments and respond to them tomorrow, since I got a little sick from mixing this game and my work.

In the meantime - I would appreciate everyone's help with :


The poll is straightforward. Right now, I have 2 games:
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Some users might now that I worked on another game in the past - Chimera: Bloodlines.

If the results are skewed significantly into one direction - I will likely develop that one.

Thank you - as I'm trying to find my game development voice. It is a journey to figure out my style and what I do best.
 

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Im liking both but I think I preferred chimera hard to choose tho really
 

homor

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Thanks everyone for commenting so actively! I am surprised to see that the reviews are relatively positive, I expected a lot worse cause the game is definitely weird - which is fully my intention, but you know, being weird and executing something weird well are really different things.

What happened on itch is a lot more what I expected:

User: wtf is this game? - Review: 1 star

xD

I'll go over everyone's comments and respond to them tomorrow, since I got a little sick from mixing this game and my work.

In the meantime - I would appreciate everyone's help with :


The poll is straightforward. Right now, I have 2 games:
  • -
  • -
Some users might now that I worked on another game in the past - Chimera: Bloodlines.

If the results are skewed significantly into one direction - I will likely develop that one.

Thank you - as I'm trying to find my game development voice. It is a journey to figure out my style and what I do best.
that previouse game looks much better but honestly u think so much about support and what ppl want...even when this game is realy shit one, and not for me u will not succed by whoring yourself for content as polls and giving voting power over content to patrons...but it is your decision after all
 
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Alright, I have an urge to respond to messages, so whatever, writing my responses half-awake xD Sorry if I miss anyone, I'll get back to you. I appreciate all sorts of comments, positive or not.

Resending the poll so it doesn't get lost regarding what game is better - Chimera or I SCREAM:


Artwork looks good and tags are up my alley. But sadly I won't play it, because of the amount of depressing stuff in it. I'm myself fighting every f**king day with my own metal illness, so I don't need that in the VN I play. I play these to get away from depressing stuff and escape reality for at least a while.
This is a good feedback for me so I appreciate it in any case. It was one of my worries as I was developing this title, I initially wanted to make it a bit of a dark comedy like Barry, and then I realized it's primarily the dark xD Take it easy, feel better, and thanks!

i'll give it a shot but it always sucks when a female character is killed cause then you know you wont end up with her. if it was a male friend the story would still have the dead friend as a plot line and no need to care about never adding them to harem.
It's a story of post-humanism, you can see from the screens that she comes back pretty quickly. The whole game concept is inspired by Thus Spoke Zarathustra.

:unsure:why leave one relatively good game for this....
Check my poll in the above post for details xD But the one-word answer - scope. If I come back to Chimera, I'm gonna say to hell with it - and hire a 3D artist.

yep as expected...this was one big pile of nonsence. Sadly Mc cant die to get final ending for game :-(
Well, he dies in a way, but it would need more chapters to explain why.

Finished this first chapter. Really, really good start. The dialogue is strange and probably not intentionally strange, but it works really well in the tone and setting, so it's not even a negative. Very much looking forward to future releases.
Thank you for the breath of fresh air as I'm responding to the comments xD I really wanted to attempt something obscure, in a way to showcase the inner workings and inspirations I get from reading various existentialist works. Call it something like a short creative endeavor.

Looks interesting. I do like games making an effort(an actual effort) to create a context, tell a story.
It makes the whole experience so much more intersting, and, in this site's case, it's what differentiates the game from porn.
I'll probably leave this to ripen for a bit in by backlog, but it certainly has potential.
... or it could completely veer off the deep end, we will see.
Another breath of fresh air. I dislike a little that the porn medium is a bit too "talk fuck talk fuck" - and wanted to bring in a different angle..

Here, the angle is existentialism.

In the other game - it was action and morality.

Well, that's the nice thing about deving, you get to explore various things.

Right now, this feels like a student film.
Hehe, I know it's intended as a critique (unless I misunderstand), but it's a close take on the vibe I was going for.

The edge in this game comes off less "realistic abuse victim adapting to scary dystopian society" and more "SHUT UP MOM IM TRYING TO PLAY FORTNITE! *puts headset back on* *craaaawling iiiin my skiiinnn~*"

Anyway, best of luck dev, this one ain't for me.
I do like the comment, though. I feel like making it too realistic would turn it into a depression fest, that's why certain things are taken on a lighter take.

The entire cast need therapy. :HideThePain:
Along with the developer xD

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Alrighty, I'm gonna go back to bed, thanks all for providing feedback xD While it has more negative/neutral rather than positive sentiment, it still went better than I thought it would, so I appreciate everyone's words.

I'm gonna make a decision tomorrow about which one of the two games is better, and dedicate my efforts to one.
 
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