- Thread starter MoistSponge
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One so far, though it reaches fruition far more quickly than normal, and we have yet to see the offspring (though we're told she'll reach adulthood much more quickly than normal as well).
- Mar 11, 2020
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NOOOO dont take our beloved habits for the "nuns". Please let it still be the church of the Master.
If you "the dev" want catsuit , leather and bondage then just make a new bdsm club in town.
Just let us have our church with slutty nuns!
PS: Sister Anne is my most beloved female LI of any VN!
If you "the dev" want catsuit , leather and bondage then just make a new bdsm club in town.
Just let us have our church with slutty nuns!
PS: Sister Anne is my most beloved female LI of any VN!
- Mar 8, 2018
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- May 28, 2018
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- Jun 22, 2021
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Is it me or is this game damn long? 
it feels like its taking him forever to finish this.
it feels like its taking him forever to finish this.
- Aug 20, 2022
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Well, yes and no . . . Ever notice how it's always British (specifically English I think?) writers who mix up "were" and "where"?
- Apr 17, 2021
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I'd like it if you'd compile a list of devs and where they're from, then cross reference that.
People suck at English, much more often if they don't speak it natively. It just doesn't bother English speakers because we're used to people learning the language and making mistakes.
boring update..
smh.
Like can we just move the plot ? When we gone meet out daughter? when are we gonna get back to trying to bang every girl in the game? Like fuck the mc and his morals when is this man gonna get some character development? He is to passive STILL. We have a mission to do. When we gone fuck the best girl in the game sister anne? why am i still seeing roy? yes he isn't no threat but what's the point in him?
This update was a bunch of nonsense walking simulator mostly with nothing happening. 1 boobjob sex scene... OK.
Like the plot needs to move. This game is a guilty pleasure of mine and been following it forever but holy fuck lol.
smh.
Like can we just move the plot ? When we gone meet out daughter? when are we gonna get back to trying to bang every girl in the game? Like fuck the mc and his morals when is this man gonna get some character development? He is to passive STILL. We have a mission to do. When we gone fuck the best girl in the game sister anne? why am i still seeing roy? yes he isn't no threat but what's the point in him?
This update was a bunch of nonsense walking simulator mostly with nothing happening. 1 boobjob sex scene... OK.
Like the plot needs to move. This game is a guilty pleasure of mine and been following it forever but holy fuck lol.
- Jun 17, 2020
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Wait...am I forgetting something? When was Val introduced? I don't remember anything about that or finding out she was at the lake cabin
gonna wait till at least five updates or a big update hits this was 5 minutes skipping from the last update.
- Oct 31, 2018
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Not skipping makes it around 15 so not that much difference.
man this dev is a great writer simply drags you in with the drama and leaves you wanting more almost forgot it was a porn game lol. I am loving the character development and the set up in the last chapter AMAZING
- May 2, 2021
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I really wanted to get into this game because I really liked the premise. Guy has a couple of hot aliens throw him into a world of super busty milfs and their daughters, looking to fuck his brains out. But then I quickly learn that the guy is just not that interested in most of these many enhanced babes. I keep checking back to see if they have won him over yet. I'm guessing they are starting to get there?
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Man this dev needs an editor so bad. Hell I would do it for them. "We also added a new spelling check" I kind of doubt there's a "we," because all of these mistakes are emblematic of one person who typed fast and hasn't yet read over their work. It definitely doesn't read like something that has had two+ pairs of eyes on it. Which is disappointing, because I really like this wacky story, and I want it to be less full of easy to fix errors.
Examples of the mistakes from a single scene (the baptism/initiation):
"To become a devoted sister tot eh Master" - lots of scrambled errors like this, presumably from fast typing and not reading it back
"Master will stand roughly where Master is stood now" - lots of awkward phrasing like this
"re emerging as your Masters cum slut" - no dashes or possessive apostrophes, this is nitpicky and isn't that big a deal
But the larger mistakes that really take the reader out of the story:
Characters are constantly misplaced, either in dialogue or actual models. It would say Sister Karen when Irina was talking, Sister Emma and Sister Karen when Daisy was talking, and Sister Jasmin's model would randomly take Brittany's place during the "baptism."
Also this is more of a personal preference thing, but for an erotic VN, it's weird that scenes like that have him repeatedly simply place his dick and finish, a decidedly unsexy route, rather than blowjobs, sex, or something similar. I think if you're making a sexy story, and the story is getting in the way of the sexy, then what's the point? The author is certainly aware of this, the MC notes "I feel like a conveyor belt worker. Nun, cock in, cum, next nun, insert, cum, next nun..." but I just can't figure out what purpose it serves besides, at best, setting up some future story beat.
Examples of the mistakes from a single scene (the baptism/initiation):
"To become a devoted sister tot eh Master" - lots of scrambled errors like this, presumably from fast typing and not reading it back
"Master will stand roughly where Master is stood now" - lots of awkward phrasing like this
"re emerging as your Masters cum slut" - no dashes or possessive apostrophes, this is nitpicky and isn't that big a deal
But the larger mistakes that really take the reader out of the story:
Characters are constantly misplaced, either in dialogue or actual models. It would say Sister Karen when Irina was talking, Sister Emma and Sister Karen when Daisy was talking, and Sister Jasmin's model would randomly take Brittany's place during the "baptism."
Also this is more of a personal preference thing, but for an erotic VN, it's weird that scenes like that have him repeatedly simply place his dick and finish, a decidedly unsexy route, rather than blowjobs, sex, or something similar. I think if you're making a sexy story, and the story is getting in the way of the sexy, then what's the point? The author is certainly aware of this, the MC notes "I feel like a conveyor belt worker. Nun, cock in, cum, next nun, insert, cum, next nun..." but I just can't figure out what purpose it serves besides, at best, setting up some future story beat.