VN Ren'Py Abandoned Inevitable Relations [v0.1b] [KinneyX23]

[HBKTheIcon69]

Sweet!

About time there was a game that came out with a full out lesbian route...those are very hard to come across

 

[Robert Monotoli]

@KinneyX23 First of all, great job on beta even if it is still incomplete and needs some more polishes. Having played that, I think the premise looks very interesting with these changes made for the beta version compared to the version before. I think it has a very promising potential to be a great game if you work hard enough on it. I wish you the best on developing this game.

Since we can now play Eva as the MC, I have a question. Can we expect a Charlie-Eva relationship? I fancy brothers-sister incest, you know. And, optionally, can we expect to be able to establish a sort of triangle between Charlie, Eva, and Bethany if we so desired?

Also I really liked how Bethany looked in that prologue. She is cute as fuck when she was younger. I suggest considering a prequel to this game using that prologue as a foundation after Inevitable Relations is completed at some point. You can consider the prologue a sort of preview for that prequel if it ever comes to that point.

There is one interesting possibility I have thought about how the prologue and Inevitable Relations can be tied together. My thinking is that if Bethany and her sister Izzy or her brother Leo had engaged in some sort of fling in the past when they were younger. If that brief "experiment" had ended with some regrets, then that in turn can partly explain Bethany's decision to send her son Charlie to her brother Leo's place, to keep him and Eva apart. Anyway, something to think about a possible expansion on that plot surrounding Charlie's "exile".

One small complaint I do have, though, is that there is almost lack of bushes on the pussy, though that is not essential for the story. Bald pussy is fine but I think it is way too common and I would suggest adding some bushes to make it more varied. I am a fan of well-trimmed bushes so I would very much appreciate if you ever decide to do that. It is your game, though, so whatever you want to do there.

That is all I can think of at the moment. Again, great job on beta so far and I wish you the good luck on developing it along. I will be keeping eyes on this.

 

[Higurashika]

For me this game is all about family members. So for me it would be not a good variant to have romances on the side.

 

[Avaron1974]

I was quite happy keeping Beth with Alex, they are a great couple.

Then Sara turned up.

So, okay, now I have to get Beth with Sara.

Then Erin turned up.

You're making this hard for me.

All that's left is to get Eva with Izzy, they looked cute together. Charlie can have his internet porn and fantasies.

 

[KinneyX23]

I was quite happy keeping Beth with Alex, they are a great couple.

That you can do.

Then Sara turned up.

So, okay, now I have to get Beth with Sara.

Then Erin turned up.

Actually neither of these two romances are planned right now ...

You're making this hard for me.

All that's left is to get Eva with Izzy, they looked cute together. Charlie can have his internet porn and fantasies.

Hehe, I like that idea.

 

[Avaron1974]

Actually neither of these two romances are planned right now ...

I can live with that, makes it easier for me to keep Beth and Alex together.

I got to flirt with Sara in Eva's route so got my Sara dose.

 

[Higurashika]

I don't feel anything towards Alex. She is nice but i don't see Beth with her.

 

[KinneyX23]

@KinneyX23 First of all, great job on beta even if it is still incomplete and needs some more polishes. Having played that, I think the premise looks very interesting with these changes made for the beta version compared to the version before. I think it has a very promising potential to be a great game if you work hard enough on it. I wish you the best on developing this game.

Thanks, I will. Or well I will try, but unfortunately I can only work on the game when I have the time, which is why the updates are often (or pretty much always) months apart.

Since we can now play Eva as the MC, I have a question. Can we expect a Charlie-Eva relationship? I fancy brothers-sister incest, you know. And, optionally, can we expect to be able to establish a sort of triangle between Charlie, Eva, and Bethany if we so desired?

Yes! If you play it right of course.

Also I really liked how Bethany looked in that prologue. She is cute as fuck when she was younger. I suggest considering a prequel to this game using that prologue as a foundation after Inevitable Relations is completed at some point. You can consider the prologue a sort of preview for that prequel if it ever comes to that point.

That's exactly what the Prologue is. I pulled it from the main game, but that doesn't mean that I'll stop working on it. But the Prologue never was any kind of main focus point. I work on it, when time Permits, when I'm out of ideas for the main game or when Daz is trying to piss me off with a certain scene for the main game or AbF.

There is one interesting possibility I have thought about how the prologue and Inevitable Relations can be tied together. My thinking is that if Bethany and her sister Izzy or her brother Leo had engaged in some sort of fling in the past when they were younger. If that brief "experiment" had ended with some regrets, then that in turn can partly explain Bethany's decision to send her son Charlie to her brother Leo's place, to keep him and Eva apart. Anyway, something to think about a possible expansion on that plot surrounding Charlie's "exile".

Thanks for the tip, but I already have a way of connecting both games, that I'm obvioulsy not gonna share here.

One small complaint I do have, though, is that there is almost lack of bushes on the pussy, though that is not essential for the story. Bald pussy is fine but I think it is way too common and I would suggest adding some bushes to make it more varied. I am a fan of well-trimmed bushes so I would very much appreciate if you ever decide to do that. It is your game, though, so whatever you want to do there.

Actually that's a great idea. My problem though is that I haven't found any asset regarding pubic hair that I like. And yes I know there are a couple out there, but none were really that convincing in terms of quality or looks to me. It's not like I don't want to include pubic hair btw, I really want to.

That is all I can think of at the moment. Again, great job on beta so far and I wish you the good luck on developing it along. I will be keeping eyes on this.

Again thank you very much for that.

I can live with that, makes it easier for me to keep Beth and Alex together.

I got to flirt with Sara in Eva's route so got my Sara dose.

Yeah the Eva path is actually the only planned path with any romance for Sara, so you're in luck.

I don't feel anything towards Alex. She is nice but i don't see Beth with her.

I can live with that, but maybe I'm able to change your mind soon.

 

[Avaron1974]

Yeah the Eva path is actually the only planned path with any romance for Sara, so you're in luck.

No problem at all, they looked quite good together from what I saw of it so i'm more than happy with that.

 

[Higurashika]

but maybe I'm able to change your mind soon

Dunno... <3 I mean Alex is not a blood related family. So i don't feel like i could be connected with her in incest route. But your story is awesome and i believe you could change my mind easily

 

[Robert Monotoli]

Thanks, I will. Or well I will try, but unfortunately I can only work on the game when I have the time, which is why the updates are often (or pretty much always) months apart.

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Actually that's a great idea. My problem though is that I haven't found any asset regarding pubic hair that I like. And yes I know there are a couple out there, but none were really that convincing in terms of quality or looks to me. It's not like I don't want to include pubic hair btw, I really want to.

First of all, thank you for the responses. I really appreciate that. Second, I can understand your issues with pubic hair. I recall someone complaining in a thread elsewhere about how bushes looked "painted". But I think there are still some decent pubic hair assets that I've seen in some games using DAZ for renders. Better than nothing, I suppose. And you can always do a remastered version in a far future if and when better assets for anything including pubic hair show up.

I wouldn't mind some well-trimmed pubic hair on the sister, Eva, but I don't know how the players would feel about that in general. After all, it seem to be more commonly found on MILFs. But I personally find brother-sister incest to be more intimate and I always felt that a well-trimmed pubic hair further adds to that intimacy in my opinion. A triangle bush pointing down to the vagina... how intimate can that get? I know, I'm that weird.

I should add that you may also want to consider accessories for the females such as necklaces and rings but they are not essential. It may not need to be always worn, can be reserved for special occasions only. Details is always nice to have, though.

Again, thank you for the response. I appreciate it. I am looking forward to the future development on this game. Good luck as always!

 

[Robert Monotoli]

Oh, I also forgot to ask another question. Since this game have romance tag, can we expect any romance in these incest relationships? I was not sure if romance tag applied to non-incest relationships only.

I wouldn't mind having Charlie take Eva out for a nice dinner at a fancy restaurant in the evening. Maybe go adventurous after that and have a sex on the beach. Ha!

Charlie might not be a romantic in his heart from the beginning but I bet you could set up an option to have Eva turn him into one.

Honestly, though, I always liked romantic path especially for incest games. I hope that does happen in here. If not, that is OK. Not a game-breaker for me if it doesn't.

 

[KinneyX23]

First of all, thank you for the responses. I really appreciate that. Second, I can understand your issues with pubic hair. I recall someone complaining in a thread elsewhere about how bushes looked "painted". But I think there are still some decent pubic hair assets that I've seen in some games using DAZ for renders. Better than nothing, I suppose. And you can always do a remastered version in a far future if and when better assets for anything including pubic hair show up.

Yeah that's pretty much the problem. I'm open to the idea of having pubic hair on some characters, but I don't really like any of the ones that I've found and tested so far. I'm not gonna give up though.

I wouldn't mind some well-trimmed pubic hair on the sister, Eva, but I don't know how the players would feel about that in general. After all, it seem to be more commonly found on MILFs. But I personally find brother-sister incest to be more intimate and I always felt that a well-trimmed pubic hair further adds to that intimacy in my opinion. A triangle bush pointing down to the vagina... how intimate can that get? I know, I'm that weird.

Hey it's okay, aren't we all a bit weird.
Kidding aside though, I can promise you that Eva won't get any pubic hair. I know she might look more realistic and Maybe it would really suit her, but just nope. I'm aware that's not what some of you wanna hear, but Eva is simply perfect in my mind. I'm open for changes to any character, even Beth, but Eva will always be off limits. Even giving her the ponytail for her storyline felt strange and kinda wrong, so I'm not gonna go through that again. ^^

But see, we're all a bit weird, like I said above.

I should add that you may also want to consider accessories for the females such as necklaces and rings but they are not essential. It may not need to be always worn, can be reserved for special occasions only. Details is always nice to have, though.

Yeah, gonna happen.

Again, thank you for the response. I appreciate it. I am looking forward to the future development on this game. Good luck as always!

No Problem at all, that's why I'm here.

Oh, I also forgot to ask another question. Since this game have romance tag, can we expect any romance in these incest relationships? I was not sure if romance tag applied to non-incest relationships only.

Yup ...

I wouldn't mind having Charlie take Eva out for a nice dinner at a fancy restaurant in the evening. Maybe go adventurous after that and have a sex on the beach. Ha!

Charlie might not be a romantic in his heart from the beginning but I bet you could set up an option to have Eva turn him into one.

Nice idea, but I'm pretty sure Eva wouldn't like that.
And just to be clear I'm not talking about the relationship in general, that's all I'm gonna say here.

Honestly, though, I always liked romantic path especially for incest games. I hope that does happen in here. If not, that is OK. Not a game-breaker for me if it doesn't.

I feel the same way, so no worries.

 

[sdibolcrif]

Haven't actually gotten around to playing this yet (should have time this weekend), but I just need to say...

@KinneyX23 between your username and your avatar you're automatically one of my favorite people on this site

 

[KinneyX23]

@sdibolcrif
I'd really like to know what you think, after you've actually played it.

As for the username and avatar ...
Well X23 is one of my favorite Marvel characters and what's not to love about Stana Katic.

 

[botc76]

How long will it take to get from the beta to the regular version?

 

[KinneyX23]

If everything goes according to plan (which it is at the moment) then somewhere around the end of the month.

 

[KinneyX23]

OP updated with the 0.1a release.
Be Aware it's a small update, mainly focused on eliminating bugs that were in the 0.099beta.

 

[ThunderRob]

so happy when my favorite tough cop lesbian is updated!

 

[KinneyX23]

Couldn't agree more, apart from the fact that she's not a lesbian.