VN Ren'Py Innocent Witches [v0.11 Alpha] [Sad Crab]

[deskitteh]

I won't lie, I can't even be bothered to play this version.
Until I glance at this thread and see maybe a happy comment or two a page, I wouldn't be able to say that I'd be terribly excited to begin with. I want so badly for this game to succeed. I really do. I love its art and humor so much.

Devs, I'm not here to clown on you. You don't know how much I want to express that I want this game to succeed. I was in love since well over what looks like two years ago now. That being said, I can't express valid criticism more than others have. Joe, I can't come back and play this version. There isn't anything new to look forward to if I play. There isn't anything that I personally wanted.

It really bites, guys. I'll wait patiently until next patch. Maybe I'll play then.

 

[Madeni]

So... uh... I'm around an hour into the game, just met the girls, and so far I must say that even though the art is stellar, the writing is quite, boring ?
I don't know how to put it. When I play the Avatar Trainer game, I never want to skip dialogue (especially in book 4) because it's all so funny, kinky or emotional.

But here it's all quite flat ? I skip most of it it seems
It feels like I'm doing pointless grindy tasks with some not even having a little sexy thing as a reward
And the pace is also veeeeeerrry slow. I'm at chapter 3, and nothing sexual has happened yet ? (I saw an optional Minerva scene, but that's it)
And the main character is a wimp ? Not exactly the kind of character I picture in those trainer fetishes
Does it get better as it goes ?

EDIT
2h, still nothing, and I've even started skipping everything with CTRL and only reading when Luna is involved (but even then there's nothing that gets my attention)
It's all so bland... Witch Trainer works because Genie is a manipulative asshole that disrespects the girls or takes advantage of them at every turn.
In this game the protagonist feels like he's doing his taxes. That's how bland he is.

 

[Raoul9753]

So... uh... I'm around an hour into the game, just met the girls, and so far I must say that even though the art is stellar, the writing is quite, boring ?
I don't know how to put it. When I play the Avatar Trainer game, I never want to skip dialogue (especially in book 4) because it's all so funny, kinky or emotional.

But here it's all quite flat ? I skip most of it it seems
It feels like I'm doing pointless grindy tasks with some not even having a little sexy thing as a reward
And the pace is also veeeeeerrry slow. I'm at chapter 3, and nothing sexual has happened yet ? (I saw an optional Minerva scene, but that's it)
And the main character is a wimp ? Not exactly the kind of character I picture in those trainer fetishes
Does it get better as it goes ?

EDIT
2h, still nothing, and I've even started skipping everything with CTRL and only reading when Luna is involved (but even then there's nothing that gets my attention)
It's all so bland... Witch Trainer works because Genie is a manipulative asshole that disrespects the girls or takes advantage of them at every turn.
In this game the protagonist feels like he's doing his taxes. That's how bland he is.

Yeah, that wont change.
I honestly dont think they wanted to make a porn game, and they really in love their own story.
I think they rewrote the whole thing like twice by now, basically holding everything for about a year while they tried to... well, improve the story.
Honestly I think they only made it a porn game in the first place because they knew that would bring in the supporters, and looking at their patreon page, it worked.

Though honestly, I am tuned out of this for long, I normaly wait like 6 month, get the latest version and gallery unlock and look if we finaly got as much as a blowjob from hermione... but yeah, no. They dont want to "rush" the porn content, as they say...

 

[Madeni]

Yeah, that wont change.
I honestly dont think they wanted to make a porn game, and they really in love their own story.
I think they rewrote the whole thing like twice by now, basically holding everything for about a year while they tried to... well, improve the story.
Honestly I think they only made it a porn game in the first place because they knew that would bring in the supporters, and looking at their patreon page, it worked.

Though honestly, I am tuned out of this for long, I normaly wait like 6 month, get the latest version and gallery unlock and look if we finaly got as much as a blowjob from hermione... but yeah, no. They dont want to "rush" the porn content, as they say...

What a shame.

By the way, I'm stuck at the swimsuit quest. Do you know how to pass it ?

It's asking me to copy the girls' swisuits, which I did, but it doesn't validate the quest


I just want to get to the start of the porn scenes already, it's been 3h and still nothing but mediocre dialogue
EDIT: Welp... it's bugged. I already have all the swimsuits from Griffindor and can't get others from there even on monday, and I already got the scene where Hermione says her special swimsuit has been stollen, but I can't progress the quest and the hat tells me a I don't have it


EDIT2: Ooooookay, I'm done.
This game is such a waste of talented artists

 

[Raoul9753]

EDIT2: Ooooookay, I'm done.
This game is such a waste of talented artists

I agree.
Honestly, if you are not totaly in love with the Story they make, this game is a waste of time, because you cant skip through it, since they have enough "Attention Checks" in the game to make sure you get stuck if you skip the wrong part...

If you are looking for a porn game, get something else, and get back to this game every few patches, just to download the current Patch. Theres a Cheat file on Page 584 that unlocks everything. The little porn content that is in the game is actually quite nice...

 

[Khan]

What a shame.

By the way, I'm stuck at the swimsuit quest. Do you know how to pass it ?

It's asking me to copy the girls' swisuits, which I did, but it doesn't validate the quest
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I just want to get to the start of the porn scenes already, it's been 3h and still nothing but mediocre dialogue
EDIT: Welp... it's bugged. I already have all the swimsuits from Griffindor and can't get others from there even on monday, and I already got the scene where Hermione says her special swimsuit has been stollen, but I can't progress the quest and the hat tells me a I don't have it


EDIT2: Ooooookay, I'm done.
This game is such a waste of talented artists

You played old plot, thats why its confused for players, at this moment we are remade it to remove unnecessary text, add actions and ero content (which is what we are doing at the moment in a new story that you could launch)
Although the game is written in great detail how to solve riddles, you can always use Wikipedia where there is a passage or ask for help in our discord

 

[Khan]

Yeah, that wont change.
I honestly dont think they wanted to make a porn game, and they really in love their own story.
I think they rewrote the whole thing like twice by now, basically holding everything for about a year while they tried to... well, improve the story.
Honestly I think they only made it a porn game in the first place because they knew that would bring in the supporters, and looking at their patreon page, it worked.

Though honestly, I am tuned out of this for long, I normaly wait like 6 month, get the latest version and gallery unlock and look if we finaly got as much as a blowjob from hermione... but yeah, no. They dont want to "rush" the porn content, as they say...

This is already changing, don't mislead people. The first act in the new plot is much faster to play and contains a lot of erotic and porn elements.
We didn't rewrite everything twice, you are mistaken. The text is being rewritten for the first time right now, before that it was just a simplification of the text.
And we never called our game a porn game
I also want to note that in the game there is slow corruption (not like the main character of the game is already sucking your dick in 2 clicks) We have slow corruption of characters. To get to bed, you will have to try.

 

[Madeni]

You played old plot, thats why its confused for players, at this moment we are remade it to remove unnecessary text, add actions and ero content (which is what we are doing at the moment in a new story that you could launch)
Although the game is written in great detail how to solve riddles, you can always use Wikipedia where there is a passage or ask for help in our discord

I will give New Plot a try then

 

[Khan]

In general, I want to suggest to all those who are bored and undecided not to play our game until the old plot is redone because you will not like it at the moment (or a limited number of people)

 

[whatchadoin]

In general, I want to suggest to all those who are bored and undecided not to play our game until the old plot is redone because you will not like it at the moment (or a limited number of people)

Agreed. Last time I played it it was a grinding simulator, but surely there might be some audience for that kind. Good luck anyway art looks nice.

 

[z26108zrt]

Ths I like this painting style

 

[Gewehr4330]

You have a great game, you are doing everything perfectly and correctly, because getting everything at once will not be interesting. You are from Russia? You have an excellent translation of anecdotes and phrases, just amazing. Thank you for such an interesting game.

In general, I want to suggest to all those who are bored and undecided not to play our game until the old plot is redone because you will not like it at the moment (or a limited number of people)

 

[Khan]

You have a great game, you are doing everything perfectly and correctly, because getting everything at once will not be interesting. You are from Russia? You have an excellent translation of anecdotes and phrases, just amazing. Thank you for such an interesting game.

We all live in different countries, some in Denmark, some in Lithuania, etc. Just 80% of us are Russian speakers

 

[zomkung]

We all live in different countries, some in Denmark, some in Lithuania, etc. Just 80% of us are Russian speakers

An American old man also thanks your game.

 

[Rezol]

I also want to note that in the game there is slow corruption (not like the main character of the game is already sucking your dick in 2 clicks) We have slow corruption of characters. To get to bed, you will have to try.

Don't see any problem with slow corruption, but it's slow in-game, in real life it's speed is pretty much non-existent. I honestly loved all the sexy scenes with Hermione in 0,6 and was getting ready to support the game financially when the next update builds up on that... but instead we now even farther away from Hermione than we ever were - maybe years away. Before that I was waiting for each update with great hope, now I barely come into this thread.

Also, previous rewrite was more than just simpifying and shortening the text - at the vey least it also changed MC from a pathetic drunk idiot into a somewhat smart and charismatic person you can and want to root for. I hope it stays this way in the third version, but I fear the worst.

Still wish you all the best, though. When it actually does something sexy with the main girl, Innocent Witches tends to become my favourite on this site. Just wish it would happen more then once every few years.

 

[NoLiveToGain]

Has anyone been able to open all the scenes? Can you give it to me?

 

[DanielJ04]

Has anyone been able to open all the scenes? Can you give it to me?

https://f95zone.to/threads/innocent-witches-v0-8-beta-sad-crab.330/post-6978279
maybe you can try the very special option on this forum which general known as the "search" feature (JKD, take a look at this post)

 

[Zickazz2311]

I basically hijacked the already in-game full unlocker that is used for dev purposes and put it in a file, just dump it within the game folder, it will automatically unlock all scenes and all options within scenes.

My browser only opens your file like a new page.. Anyway to fix this?

 

[Rizo]

I held of on playing this for ages, finally got around to playing it. Started with the new plot that someone suggested but the only scene I got was the one with the professor mcgonagall in the prologue I think it was. Then I did the other shit it said to do and then all of a sudden it's jumping me forward chapter and I have to pick a waifu who has been kidnapped. Am I missing something or do I have to go back and play from the start with the "old" plot for the scene that are in OP like the thicc one bending over the table etc.? Art is nice though.

 

[sugablodi]

I basically hijacked the already in-game full unlocker that is used for dev purposes and put it in a file, just dump it within the game folder, it will automatically unlock all scenes and all options within scenes.

i cant download it, how is it?