VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

[PeopleCallMeSmile]

In the episode 10 beach Elena already talks about "the guy she likes but can't say anything", she's in that situation that she wants it, but won't do it out of loyalty to Layla.
We on the other hand are forced to play oblivious dumbass... not great, i wish more devs would avoid this, scenes where a character is laying on pretty thick, but the MC remains an oblivious idiot and no good options are presented to the player.

Still, curious to see how things develop from here:
Does she talk to Layla?
Layla sees something and moves over?
Desire wins over loyalty?
Do we get to make the definitive choice?
Or even... tag team?

More or less the same for Alexis vs Erynn... what does it take to make Alexis give up?

Here's my theory, Layla will break with MC just to make Elena happy after some scenes like the bathroom one or something more awkward. Besides Layla can see what's going on with them at the camp if you choose to kiss Elena, and she has a weakness for her best friend so she'll probably let MC go for her.
Ugh, why Nyx didn't gave her a normal route.

 

[mnotwoke]

 

[Elduriel]

Nyx isn't that big on car safety is she? Where's the seat belt, huh?

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[Nurikabe]

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These two are fricken perfect. But I love them all, what can I say?!

Nyx isn't that big on car safety is she? Where's the seat belt, huh?

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I think that in every car scene in every VN. Hahahaha

 

[apn6527]

Will we ever get a solo scene with Adriana. I feel she looks really hot. Hoping for a scene in the next update.

 

[Arden4702]

In the episode 10 beach Elena already talks about "the guy she likes but can't say anything", she's in that situation that she wants it, but won't do it out of loyalty to Layla.
We on the other hand are forced to play oblivious dumbass... not great, i wish more devs would avoid this, scenes where a character is laying on pretty thick, but the MC remains an oblivious idiot and no good options are presented to the player.

Still, curious to see how things develop from here:
Does she talk to Layla?
Layla sees something and moves over?
Desire wins over loyalty?
Do we get to make the definitive choice?
Or even... tag team?

More or less the same for Alexis vs Erynn... what does it take to make Alexis give up?

This happens all the time IRL you meet a girls friend and cant do anything think most of you live in dream worlds. Seems to me Dev is trying to make a game realistic not a "porn game"

 

[Jack Townsend]

Word of advice to the developer. Don't tease us with things that you have no intention of giving us.

 

[TheRealJohnCena69]

This game is mostly focused on the Layla- and Erynn- (As in at least friends with Erynn) relationship paths. If you don't play those routes, there is not much content for you in this episode.

No way bruh. Literally the only 2 routes i dont play and its the major content for next episode... FFS. Been waiting so long for Val content fuck me

 

[AchedCroissant]

When did the last episode of Intertwined come out? Almost a year?

I mean a real episode not the remake

 

[Tremonia]

Word of advice to the developer. Don't tease us with things that you have no intention of giving us.

She doesn't read here. You've to say this to her on Patreon or Discord.

 

[Nurikabe]

Word of advice to the developer. Don't tease us with things that you have no intention of giving us.

And why not? What is wrong with teasing? Why does a story have to be boring without suggestion or surprise?

What stories and movies do you read that are so straight forward?

 

[Jack Townsend]

And why not? What is wrong with teasing? Why does a story have to be boring without suggestion or surprise?

What stories and movies do you read that are so straight forward?

I like teasing, suggestion, and surprise too. As long as they have deliveries and payoffs. This game has teased us with a number of things that have had little to no delivery or payoff. The developer shouldn't be teasing or suggesting things in the story. If she has no intention of creating deliveries and payoffs for those things.

 

[Nurikabe]

I like teasing, suggestion, and surprise too. As long as they have deliveries and payoffs. This game has teased us with a number of things that have had little to no delivery or payoff. The developer shouldn't be teasing or suggesting things in the story. If she has no intention of creating deliveries and payoffs for those things.

Again, I would ask, "Why not?" What is the rule that says that? There is no precedent in storytelling of any kind that supports that idea.

I get that you do not enjoy it. But that doesn't mean she shouldn't do it.

 

[NebulousShooter]

If there is no payoff, its filler.

 

[Tremonia]

I like teasing, suggestion, and surprise too. As long as they have deliveries and payoffs. This game has teased us with a number of things that have had little to no delivery or payoff. The developer shouldn't be teasing or suggesting things in the story. If she has no intention of creating deliveries and payoffs for those things.

A number of things with little to no delivery of payoff? Okay. Give us five examples. I try to understand what you mean but I fail at the moment.

 

[NebulousShooter]

I try to understand what you mean but I fail at the moment.

I find that hard to believe, for someone that has been in this thread for so long, so I'm going to assume you are purposely disingenuous. There is no way you havent noticed, or knew already that Nyx likes to tease and fuck with incest fans, because 'she finds it amusing'and after the bulshit dream swerve she pulled with Melissa, unless the game lasts 10 more years there won't be a proper payoff there either. Just flirting and fantasy, waste of the best character model she ever created...

These are the most obvious ones, there are plenty more plots that have gone nowhere, or the barely moved since being introduced, we are coming on to v11 and if this update Elena's route doesn't properly start I will probably just drop this game and I rarely drop games.

 

[Tremonia]

There is no way you havent noticed, or knew already that Nyx likes to tease and fuck with incest fans, because 'she finds it amusing'and after the bulshit dream swerve she pulled with Melissa, unless the game lasts 10 more years there won't be a proper payoff there either.

That's all? That's what he calls "teasing" and "suggestions"? Well... I don't know what to say about it. If I would say it's somewhat fragile one could be offended from it. So, Nyx is teasing all the gay content lovers because there's only one pic with Darryl's dick in it and no action?

 

[Jack Townsend]

A number of things with little to no delivery of payoff? Okay. Give us five examples. I try to understand what you mean but I fail at the moment.

One is the relationship with Melissa. They've teased it, but so far haven't delivered. Second, I feel like they've teased the possibility of potential relationships with Adrianna Moore and Naomi Davis. The game even has an approval points system for both of them. So far, the game hasn't delivered on either of these. Finally, I feel like the game teased a potential relationship with Jasmine, but never followed through on it. Couldn't get to five, but I'm sure there are one or two others that I missed.

 

[Nurikabe]

I find that hard to believe, for someone that has been in this thread for so long, so I'm going to assume you are purposely disingenuous. There is no way you havent noticed, or knew already that Nyx likes to tease and fuck with incest fans, because 'she finds it amusing'and after the bulshit dream swerve she pulled with Melissa, unless the game lasts 10 more years there won't be a proper payoff there either. Just flirting and fantasy, waste of the best character model she ever created...

These are the most obvious ones, there are plenty more plots that have gone nowhere, or the barely moved since being introduced, we are coming on to v11 and if this update Elena's route doesn't properly start I will probably just drop this game and I rarely drop games.

I understand that you are frustrated. But dude, it doesn't matter. The game isn't about you. It isn't your story. Nobody is hoping you will stick around. The success of this story or the author is not incumbent upon you liking everything about it. It isn't incumbent on you at all. This thread means nothing to the author, the story, or the future of anything relevant in life.

There are so many stories available here. Most of them have things I cannot stand about them. Stories I have given four or five stars yet they aren't perfect. I vote by writing a review, contributing on Patreon, buying the game on Steam, or making my voice heard in a forum that makes a difference. This thread is not one of them.

If the author wants to mock the incest crowd, that is her prerogative. This is her story. If she wants to tease and never offer a sex scene for Elena, Valeria, or anyone, it is her story and her right to choose in whatever way she chooses. Become a voting member if you want to influence that.

If you can't stand the story, move on. No reason to announce it. The author will not see it or care. It is one thing to share things you like and dislike in these forums. It is entirely another thing to think that it matters to anyone outside this group. Or even in this group. We all have opinions. None of them matter. If you want your opinion to count for anything, share it in a forum and in a way that makes a difference.

 

[NebulousShooter]

That's all? That's what he calls "teasing" and "suggestions"? Well... I don't know what to say about it. If I would say it's somewhat fragile one could be offended from it. So, Nyx is teasing all the gay content lovers because there's only one pic with Darryl's dick in it and no action?

I'm going to assume you are purposely disingenuous.

Thanks for proving my point.

There are multiple scenes with the mom, even more so before the rework, there were choices and variables changes tied to spying on her, looking at her naked.
The most important thing is you can probably still find Nyx's quotes were she admits that she did it on purpuse to fuck with incest fans, so your comparison as dumb as it is, is moot from the get go.