that's the part that didnt make sense to me about going along with the blackmail because of the sextape cause of her fear not being able to be a teacher. Cause wouldnt modeling be in the same boat since the photoshot she did in the last update just was topless. Not like she was non lewd modeling jobs.
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That's very true, i didn't thought of her topless photos, but those could easily resurface from anyone that don't like her sending them to a school Erynn would apply to (and in modelling line of work there are so many people that hate each other due to the competition to land specific well paid spots)
So in any ways, she can start thinking about a different career for her life now, she has too many 100% blockers for a school teacher job now even without the sextape
Looks like Erynn has made a cascade of bad decisions in her life, and she's only in her mid-twenties.
This is what she uses as reasoning, aside from the general not wanting people to know about it or see it.
Yeah one of the plans is making the dad find out what his son is up to, and how he's putting daddies company in risk.
With that said even Erynn admits that the type of scorting she does can pass as a model job(she says something like that when asked "let's go to the police immediately"), it's something they do, attend events, not just photoshoots.
I can imagine being in school and someone telling me "look at these photos of miss Erynn", probably worst than the "events" she's forced to attend.
They try to cover the nipple at all times but students will have a field day sharing these.
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Is it only me, or main character is a punching bag?
If you can't fight, then run! He taking running classes, so he should know how to run, right?
Call cops, I don't know. Get a baseball bat and broke Lukas's leg
Do something
If you can't fight, then run! He taking running classes, so he should know how to run, right?
Call cops, I don't know. Get a baseball bat and broke Lukas's leg
Do something
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This story has realistic girls, and a wet noodle for MC.
we cant have everything
Ikr?
He literally loses pretty much every 1-on-1 fight unless he has help. He's a big, strong guy and gets taken down by runts like Lucas.
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I'm surprised at how Elena's path was handled this update. It had been a very slow and careful build up towards her and the main character getting closer while Layla starts to feel ever so slightly left out as the two start to develop their own inside jokes, and maybe starts to get a bit jealous of their obvious chemistry.
The scene at the beach in the last update had the main character question Elena about why she doesn't have a boyfriend, to which she said that she liked a guy but he was dating someone else already, and the main character then encouraged her to go after him anyways because she's amazing and the other girl couldn't possibly be as good as her. So one would expect to see something like the main character ask Layla who the guy it is that Elena likes, leaving Layla confused since there is no way Elena would've told her about that yet, and then we'd have Elena's secret slowly come to light as Layla and/or the main character figured out who she was talking about.
But there was nothing like that here. Instead, we got another moment where the main character acts like a total moron and blurts something out without thinking about what the consequences could be. Elena gets totally shafted by this move. He could've just went with the old "things are moving too fast" excuse, or something similar. But no. He just had to fuck it up as much as humanly possible. Elena now has to try to comfort her heartbroken best friend who will most likely start accusing her of trying to steal her boyfriend away.
On the plus side of things, this very unexpected development has me completely clueless as to what will happen next episode. Will we get yelled at by Alexis for making her kid sister cry? How will Layla and Elena works things out? Can we go get some advice from Melissa in hopes that we will also get to see her prance around in a bikini some more? Who knows, it's all a mystery now.
The rest of the routes I played were rather lame. I had a Tori only route, which basically doesn't exist for this update. And I don't mean that we don't see Tori, but that we don't see anything. It just ends right where the last update ends. There was a potential Tori scene on my Alexis route, but there's no solo route where we can just hang out at the beach on our own to run into her. I guess development time was spent on more important things, like another worthless voyeurism scene where two side characters nobody care about get busy.
My favourite moment of the update was the one where Iris wanted to play a game of marry/fuck/kill at the beach and they all agreed that they would kill Iris if given the choice. Maybe that'll help her clue in to the fact that nobody likes her, and she'll stop following us around and go back to prowling the schoolyards for underage kids to fuck like she did in the old days.
The scene at the beach in the last update had the main character question Elena about why she doesn't have a boyfriend, to which she said that she liked a guy but he was dating someone else already, and the main character then encouraged her to go after him anyways because she's amazing and the other girl couldn't possibly be as good as her. So one would expect to see something like the main character ask Layla who the guy it is that Elena likes, leaving Layla confused since there is no way Elena would've told her about that yet, and then we'd have Elena's secret slowly come to light as Layla and/or the main character figured out who she was talking about.
But there was nothing like that here. Instead, we got another moment where the main character acts like a total moron and blurts something out without thinking about what the consequences could be. Elena gets totally shafted by this move. He could've just went with the old "things are moving too fast" excuse, or something similar. But no. He just had to fuck it up as much as humanly possible. Elena now has to try to comfort her heartbroken best friend who will most likely start accusing her of trying to steal her boyfriend away.
On the plus side of things, this very unexpected development has me completely clueless as to what will happen next episode. Will we get yelled at by Alexis for making her kid sister cry? How will Layla and Elena works things out? Can we go get some advice from Melissa in hopes that we will also get to see her prance around in a bikini some more? Who knows, it's all a mystery now.
The rest of the routes I played were rather lame. I had a Tori only route, which basically doesn't exist for this update. And I don't mean that we don't see Tori, but that we don't see anything. It just ends right where the last update ends. There was a potential Tori scene on my Alexis route, but there's no solo route where we can just hang out at the beach on our own to run into her. I guess development time was spent on more important things, like another worthless voyeurism scene where two side characters nobody care about get busy.
My favourite moment of the update was the one where Iris wanted to play a game of marry/fuck/kill at the beach and they all agreed that they would kill Iris if given the choice. Maybe that'll help her clue in to the fact that nobody likes her, and she'll stop following us around and go back to prowling the schoolyards for underage kids to fuck like she did in the old days.
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Nice read bro.
Finding Mc stupid and lame.
Elena maybe in the future could have a path without Layla drama.
But nyx need to drink salty tears from us to keep her youth, so unlikely.
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Could be worse. He could be like in Hard to love or in Roommates. Those two are stupider and lamer than this guy by an order of magnitude. Especially HTL has dozens of pages of rants how weak, stupid, ineffective, whiny and dislikeable the MC is.
At least this MC is stupid only occasionally, otherwise most of the time he is tolerable and the girls make up for him.
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Aha this is fun.
In roommates he is fucking rich as case in point the game is silly from the premise gets a pass!
Hard to love is a twisted cest fantasy from a female dev that willingly neutered the father to make girls look cooler.
Try triplexXx that Mc is a certified low iq jarhead that hurt my soul to this day following his rocky balboa journey "talks like that" like swimming into broken glass to bonk his sculpted by God daughter.
Random useless information: Bella is likely used because of the meaning. Katie is one of the most popular names in the U.S. and happens to be my favorite name. 2+2=4.
Names are nothing compared to the much overused idea of the dead father, the impotent husband, or the BBC.
The Elena and MC dialogues are really bad, the scene at the beach where the MC is not even able to guess or imagine that Elena is talking about him regarding the "she liked a guy but he was dating someone else " really made me wonder if the MC wasn't replaced by that moronic Zach character.
That or the whole Layla relationship that the MC continue to drag along despite (according to the choices i did for the MC) he's majorly interested in Elena, and the MC waits until the very last moment of that "relationship" so he can hurt and break Layla heart when telling her he's attracted to Elena instead of breaking up way earlier like any relatively decent man would have done to not hurt Layla too much.. that felt like drama added on purpose by the dev for no other reason that to make more drama.
I just don't like that MC at all, i found his characterisation not only all over the place, sometime completely stupid at figuring out things right in front of him , sometime being a complete creep, sometime having dialogue as if he had that long experience of life (despite he's only 18) etc...
Some AVN manage to make a MC interesting or at least likeable, but Intertwined does not do that for me. Sure there are AVN with (much) worse MC but i usually drop them quickly.
It's good that Intertwined has interesting and well developed characters for the LIs, women and some of the side characters are interesting, it's what keep me reading.
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While I like this VN...this is called...incredibly bad writing and pointless drama for the fucking sake of drama.
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I honestly couldn't take much of that shit before I quit and deleted it. The only reason I started to play it cause of the hot (but seriously crazy) OFC that then gives MC his daughter and disappears for no reason. The furthest I got was at the very start, the first night in pool house where the MC's sister ambushes and molests him. The characters are all so crazy and weird and the MC so weak and castrated. Made a BIT more sense when I realized dev was Japanese since their culture is so different and thus Western-looking characters with completely different backgrounds and culture threw me off. And the MC is supposed to be a cop, but acts like a weak indecisive pussy constantly crying and moaning.
But then came the killer. The one that made me throw up in my mouth and delete that garbage in less time than it takes someone to fart. I met Nanami. And wished I had never heard of that POS game in my life. I need to get my brain bleached.
Wait... GIRLS? Plural? I thought he had only one kid?
Roommates... yeah, exactly, his money gives him immunity. I've played the game to the end of current patch and there were so many cases where I was banging my head against my keyboard, holy shit. From rampant feminism and misandry to the fact MC sexually harasses his secretary from day one with unsolicited sexual comments, to females that suddenly multiply like rabbits out of nowhere and are all randy for him like rabbits, to other male characters that are all portrayed as sleazes or assholes without exception... plus so much other shit. Suddenly we go from a limited cast of 3 females to like 20. Are there really no men employed at that place except the builder? Every woman I know of that works in a female-dominated office complains about that fact and wants more men in the office, lol, but in this game it's estrogen overload. And then comes the newest arrival from UK who tells you plainly that she wants to be dominated.. I mean... what the fuck is that about?!
I liked Kari, but even after she went all "my ovaries are popping, I WANT A BABY WITH YOU!!!" crazy she still didn't feel like anything except a roommate, certainly not a lover or future wife with them having ZERO romantic or even affectionate interaction even when dating. Almost no sex scenes even when they woke up together, no cuddling, no kissing, no regular affection, etc. - all the stuff that you see in Intertwined organically. The only good thing except Kari were the tits of her smaller (but older iirc) sister, lmao.