VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

[ModiThorrson]

It does admittedly feel pretty weird to have these college girls fighting over a high school senior and the way he asked her that question was pretty weird. Am I missing the storyline reasons why it was necessary to have the mc 3 years younger?

Age gaps are fairly common, hell my first gf was 21 when i was 16. If you add in the whole childhood friend angle and iris essentially teaching the MC how NOT to be a complete tool to women, and it's not terribly surprising that an athletic, attractive(from the right angle) young guy is pulling older women.

 

[Dessolos]

It does admittedly feel pretty weird to have these college girls fighting over a high school senior and the way he asked her that question was pretty weird. Am I missing the storyline reasons why it was necessary to have the mc 3 years younger?

i'm like the age gap personally because it makes the relationship feel a bit cutier and more wholesome to me knowing that bit of their past. That and it's kind of nice seeing not everyone in the same age group as well but I don't really see a story reason for it other than to separate girls in to different groups. College , High School , Long Distance

 

[Xiba21]

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i didnt break any of the rules what was the point linking them to me

 

[flaviopaganini]

i didnt break any of the rules what was the point linking them to me

Why is Punctuation Important?

Punctuation is very important in writing because it helps the reader understand what is being said. It works like traffic signs, telling us when to stop, when to pause, and how to understand the tone of the sentence.

For example, without punctuation, a sentence can be confusing or have more than one meaning. Take this sentence: "Let’s eat children." It sounds like the children are going to be eaten! But if we add a comma, it’s clear: "Let’s eat, children." Now, it means we’re inviting the children to eat.

Punctuation also shows emotions and intentions. An exclamation mark (!) shows excitement or surprise, while a question mark (?) shows a question. These signs help the reader understand the tone and feeling of the text.

This is why it’s important to use punctuation correctly. A well-punctuated text is easier to read and understand, which makes all the difference in written communication.

 

[ModiThorrson]

Why is Punctuation Important?

Punctuation is very important in writing because it helps the reader understand what is being said. It works like traffic signs, telling us when to stop, when to pause, and how to understand the tone of the sentence.

For example, without punctuation, a sentence can be confusing or have more than one meaning. Take this sentence: "Let’s eat children." It sounds like the children are going to be eaten! But if we add a comma, it’s clear: "Let’s eat, children." Now, it means we’re inviting the children to eat.

Punctuation also shows emotions and intentions. An exclamation mark (!) shows excitement or surprise, while a question mark (?) shows a question. These signs help the reader understand the tone and feeling of the text.

This is why it’s important to use punctuation correctly. A well-punctuated text is easier to read and understand, which makes all the difference in written communication.

*drops a childs shoe* oh uhh...yeah meal time, right.

 

[Tremonia]

i didnt break any of the rules what was the point linking them to me

flaviopaganini gave you a hint, but the main problem is your text was just a vomit of letters. You know, there's no problem when someone can't use english properly because it's not their native language. But you didn't even tried to be understandable. It's also extremely rude for anyone who doesn't fully understand English. It is simply a matter of respect towards the reader to deliver a readable and understandable text. Quite apart from that, it's also not English if you rape the language as you have done.

 

[Xiba21]

flaviopaganini gave you a hint, but the main problem is your text was just a vomit of letters. You know, there's no problem when someone can't use english properly because it's not their native language. But you didn't even tried to be understandable. It's also extremely rude for anyone who doesn't fully understand English. It is simply a matter of respect towards the reader to deliver a readable and understandable text. Quite apart from that, it's also not English if you rape the language as you have done.

im lazy when i type you dont see me correcting you now do you example i will do just that right now only once you typed english you should of typed English let me do me you do you

 

[cxx]

It does admittedly feel pretty weird to have these college girls fighting over a high school senior and the way he asked her that question was pretty weird. Am I missing the storyline reasons why it was necessary to have the mc 3 years younger?

others besides lexi, iris and erynn are sameish age as mc. main reason is that nyx likes to play with a fire and they spent time together as a kids.

 

[Tremonia]

Why do I always make the mistake and debate with idiots instead of just putting them on the ignore list?

 

[cxx]

Why do I always make the mistake and debate with idiots instead of just putting them on the ignore list?

good question, you must ponder it next 3 days.

 

[Tremonia]

good question, you must ponder it next 3 days.

Nah. I simply corrected the mistake and added the jumping jack to the list. By tomorrow I'll have forgotten that the soup sparrow even exists.

 

[Elduriel]

im lazy when i type you dont see me correcting you now do you example i will do just that right now only once you typed english you should of typed English let me do me you do you

boy you getting on a lot of ignore lists with that kinda attitude here, including mine. Learn a little humility, might do you some good in the future

 

[Xiba21]

boy you getting on a lot of ignore lists with that kinda attitude here, including mine. Learn a little humility, might do you some good in the future

dont take the high and might road with me my very first comment here wasnt mean or hurtful at all neither was my 2nd comment which was a reply to the reply i received my 3rd comment however is the one you replied to with this

 

[Dessolos]

im lazy when i type you dont see me correcting you now do you example i will do just that right now only once you typed english you should of typed English let me do me you do you

im lazy as hell when I type to but you know what at least I the common curiosity to make random paragraphs so it's easier on the eyes unlike you. Even if I forget to correct some of my mistakes

 

[Xiba21]

im lazy as hell when I type to but you know what at least I the common curiosity to make random paragraphs so it's easier on the eyes unlike you. Even if I forget to correct some of my mistakes

guess im lazier than you and tbh idc you either read it or you dont doesnt matter to me

 

[Dessolos]

guess im lazier than you and tbh idc you either read it or you dont doesnt matter to me

yeah I read it but was very very very hard to read. Which is why I only quoted you and only responded on one thing you said.

 

[Xiba21]

yeah I read it but was very very very hard to read. Which is why I only quoted you and only responded on one thing you said.

not to sound mean just being blunt but go five head when trying to read my stuff if its long or take your time and read slower

 

[Dessolos]

go five head

don't even know what this means but either way others pointed out why it was hard to read and wasn't just me. That's the last I will say cause this is a pointless conversation and off topic enough as it is.

now back onto ontopic stuff

That shower scene with Erynn was beautiful and really romantic if you pick the bad option. Which is funny to me it's the bad option that makes you lose points since how it really shows how much the MC cares for Erynn , I pick it everytime I rewatch that scene.

 

[xapican]

An exclamation mark (!) shows excitement or surprise, while a question mark (?) shows a question. These signs help the reader understand the tone and feeling of the text.

Flavio..............(..¡..) (...¿...) are these sign of sarkasm ?

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Ignoring all that drivel above.

Even though I didn't want to do it I liked that I couldn't go the fuckboy route with erynn and pretend that she was lying when she caught mc and Alexis after mc unsuccessfully tried to bang erynn.