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It´s actually pretty rare that they get shared. Funny you asked for this oneCould anyone upload the preview pictures of episode 11: First Time At A Photo Shoot?
https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-10-5-nyx.53676/post-9881293
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Scene 1: You forgot about most important thing here, which makes game good or bad here - human factor aka emotions. MC is just a man, Ethan made cry girl, his best friend/love from childhood in some dark alley, shouting at her, hitting her. He was bullying him all his childhood indirectly causing him to leave his home for few years. I think beating him to the ground is perfectly normal, reflex reaction when you are not really thinking at the moment just act. Of course it may lead him to some troubles but this is how human works, emotions are often overshadowing cool-headed thoughts.
Scene 2: Zach is just an easy to manipulate idiot, I can also imagine this kind of situation in real life pretty easily. I would say it wasn't some kind of big plan from Ethan, just coincidence that he knows Zach and Zach knows MC so good opportunity to have some fun. Zach was not planning any kind of revange himself, he is not capable of it. He was just pushed a little by Ethan, that's all.
I started this discussion (not first I presume) few days ago and most agreed that she is not. You can read some of post starting here.
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actually i had something similar, i was having a debate with one of my multiple personalities
on how great Andres the MC legal father trully is...
i mean the guy is well off for sure and he is marrying a 40 year old who used to fuck a ginger?
even worse she must be a serial cheater one kid has straight red hair and the other wavy dark hair...
since the mom is the same... the father most defenitily is not! chances of being the same father are ...
red hair is like 2%... 2 such drastically diferent hair colours? come on, get your mendelian genetics cap on ffs!
Anyway my rewrite in regards to Andres would not go that diferent then whats already stated except....
he was hitting on Emily best friend for several straight years until Mel caught them arguinging over Santi...
and that was when Mel would reveal Andres for the sleezebag that he is, since its hypocrisy on his part!
this way Andres is a creep i mean hitting on other girls? sure, but your wife´s best friend? how retard are you?
Mel would not tell prior because she did not want to make Emily choose beteween her husband and her best friend!
this is a logical sequence imho! this way Andres is actually quite nice,
the 40 year old over the hill hag should be thankfull of even having sex, him marrying her is like a blessing!
seriously if he is well off, he can get single mothers with 5-6 years old which means they are 25 not fucking 40!
or even better a woman without a kid that ranges from 27 to 32, not a 40 year old hag!
something something something 40 year old something something and if he is rich enough he can get a 18-23 year old easily!
So why is he marrying her? must be love... or else he totally aiming at nailing Nikki and Cara in a corruptiong path
i am pretty sure i have seen that script in a game in here... the hero MC marries the Milf to seduce the daughters...
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My magic 8 ball says:
MC's bio dad is like Johnny Appleseed. I wouldn't be surprised if every one of the girls who don't have a dad is his.
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I wouldnt be surprised if Nyx's non incest statement is just a hoax to cheat patreon and the game will have an ending where every girl will turn out to be related with MC....
...and maybe his mum as the only non relative...;-)...damn...how was it in the serie Shameless with the youngest child?
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Love Elena in this, but dios mío does it take “slow burn” to another level. Hoping that within another 5 chapters they might kiss.
She's giving him slight bedroom eyes she One Hundred Percent wants that D and this is even when I was back with Cara and she finds out about it and yet she still makes out with him later on she don't care if she has to step on a girl's toes to get him. She's gonna try and get him haha and honestly I'm all for it.
How do y'all think Erynn and MC's first proper full on sex scene is gonna go I'm hoping in epiosde 11 coming up they do some stuff like just oral really after they get back from her modelling gig. Then maybe in epiosde 12 they finally do the deed cause they clearly both want it and I'd even argue Erynn wants it even more then The MC Does. She's certainly hesitant about it but she clearly wants it even more then he does. Not too sure how it'll go but it will definitely be sweet I'd say there's no doubt about that.
How do y'all think Erynn and MC's first proper full on sex scene is gonna go I'm hoping in epiosde 11 coming up they do some stuff like just oral really after they get back from her modelling gig. Then maybe in epiosde 12 they finally do the deed cause they clearly both want it and I'd even argue Erynn wants it even more then The MC Does. She's certainly hesitant about it but she clearly wants it even more then he does. Not too sure how it'll go but it will definitely be sweet I'd say there's no doubt about that.
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she offers the MC a drink when they go out to celebrate not realising that shit was spiked
and she ends up "inadvertadly" rapind the MC...
if the MC is on any other LI path you can call her out on her date rape!
and this will be the sound track!
There's gotta be something in that modelling gig, it can't be simply go there do the job comeback, right?
From the pictures Erynn was happily doing her job and Ethan was nowhere to be seen... i'm thinking for the second part of the shoot they need a male model, but he hasn't shown up, the MC is asked to fill the role.
That could lead to some fun situations.
I think the hesitancy time has extended long enough, it's clear they both want it (as you say Erynn isn't even troubled by Nikki/Cara, Alexis on the other hand...), one of these 2 needs to say something and soon.
Let's see how it will play out...
That one... yeah, until the Layla situation is handled nothing is happening.
Layla is also suppoused to feature heavily in this next chapter so let's see.
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I have no really thoughts about that third scene, so I didn't want to waffle about that. My only thoughts after this scene was hope that MC will have proper attitude towards Zach and NYX will not force player to make peace with him becasue "he is old friend and made mistake and he is sorry" or other kind of shit.
Also I do not like idea often repeated in VNs when MC has got only one male friend and everything is based on him. Often it is just wingman unable to get laid on his own or/and jester. Like you are forced to be his friend but the only good friend I saw so far in VNs was Liam from Acting Lessons (still kinda jester but lets say it was plot-related). On the other side you got Derek from BaDIK, this barman guy in Hillside, Chris from LeapOfFaith, Mike from SummersHeat etc etc. Like why cannot you have two normal male friends?
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Because it will hurt the ego of fragile players
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I like ORS for this reason. You've got three male friends that have different success with women:
- one is a shy neckbeard who sucks as a wingman, it's your job to get him laid
- one is an ex-chad turned NEET, whose failing relationship you can either fix or sabotage
- one is a playa with a black python in his pants, you can either try to keep up with him or agree that bros come before hos and split the playing field