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i love a good story, but there should be a path where it is dragged by circumstances and not thrown on them
You're right. I get a comment yesterday about this bug and uploaded an upgrade atI couldn't get the kiss, I had to change this:
to this:
It would make sense, I was tempting so it should continue and not jump to SC24.
Download version 1.0.2.Walkthrough please? How do I get the sex scene?
Actually I think the game is bugged. I followed the walkthrough on page 3 and the game still abruptly ends in the car when Natasha says "I'm sure you will".
It all makes sense. However, as I have written elsewhere, this game was not intended from the start to be complex and elaborate, but technically coherent and short. I know this may seem frustrating to you, but this game is not going to be more than what it is.This game is good so far.
You missed two jumps, one for the first kiss in the separee, the second jump for the ride home with Thomas and what occurs there.
The general pace and writing of the story are good, also the choices, they seem to be natural and genuine. But, as was already mentioned, the dialogues are often identical for all choices, so instead of only having one or two sentences per choice before merging back into the "main storyline", it'd be nice to have some more dialogues that revolve around / explore the answer given, or that just lead to different lines of dialogue.
Graphics are good and not too dark.
Maybe some thoughts about the general mechanics:
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And some thoughts about the story itself, those are however subjective and just mirror my personal preferences:
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https://f95zone.to/threads/universal-renpy-mod-1-5-1-mod-any-renpy-game-yourself.48025/Hi Guys /...
Do we have a MOD walkthrough for this game ?
Who is the main character of both your stories - a guy or a girl?I have two other much longer stories in the pipeline.
I hope it's NOT a multiple protagonist...
Wait and see. And play...I hope it's NOT a multiple protagonist...
Not fixed, same problem still happensDownload version 1.0.2.You must be registered to see the links
I just download the version 1.0.2 and followed the WT. After the last answer (I'm sure you will) it shows the screen "End of part 1".Not fixed, same problem still happens
I don't see a screen with "end of part 1" after "I'm sure you will". It just directly goes to the main menu. Also I extracted the assets and saw sex scenes in the apartment, so I assumed they are part of the game? Or did you not implement them yet?I just download the version 1.0.2 and followed the WT. After the last answer (I'm sure you will) it shows the screen "End of part 1".
What can I do more?
IMO you clicked too fast and skip the final screen. Anyway that's not important... Part 2 is coming very soon, with all the scenes you already saw (it was a mistake to include them in the first distrib), but integrated into the complete story. Have fun!I don't see a screen with "end of part 1" after "I'm sure you will". It just directly goes to the main menu. Also I extracted the assets and saw sex scenes in the apartment, so I assumed they are part of the game? Or did you not implement them yet?
You mean the scene in the secluded living room, I guess.
I just checked once again and... you're right. It's a stupid programming error !
As you may see, I'm a real newbie... I fix that and upload a new version.
I just still have to learn how to manage versions...
Many thx !