And hopefully you keep it this way
- Thread starter stoper
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- Feb 13, 2018
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You do you! Loving your work. The story is engrossing and the little tidbit overheard by the pool only ranks up the intrigue factor.
- Sep 4, 2018
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Writers block isn't always the inability to think of what comes next. Sometimes a writer knows exactly what he/she wants to write but isn't in the right frame of mind to write that scene. The writer needs to be able to get into the mind of the character and it is especially hard when it is a character who has a foreign mind set from the writers. Writing a scene with the good guy, modeled say after the writer and a bad guy murderer requires the writer be able to be in the head of two people at one time. He know the scene will end it the death of a side character or whatever but just isn't isn't he right head space to write the dialog around the bad guy to make it consistent and feel visceral.
- Sep 4, 2018
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I love Old on Young. I love the reality of it all. I love that the games shows power and how people use it to get what they want. Jess using her sexual power to get tips. Powerful rich old men using their money and connections to get what they want, sex. It is real. You are looking for romanticized fantasy and that is fine but that's not this game. I suggest WVM if you want messiah porn.
- May 4, 2017
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loved the update stoper and thank you. there’s no question you have quite possibly the most gorgeous renders. i just hate that we may have to wait another 5-6 months for more of the story.
- Jul 17, 2019
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I for one really enjoyed this update. So much so that I can't decide which ending I like the best. I won't spoil it for anyone, but there are two options depending on if you focus on career or hubby. I don't mind the small update, and looking forward to future updates.
I do think there was a missed opportunity for Jessica to flash her panties to Tommy. Other than that, outstanding job.
I do think there was a missed opportunity for Jessica to flash her panties to Tommy. Other than that, outstanding job.
- Dec 12, 2018
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Thanks bud. I'll skip this version even though I am a patron. Renders are pretty sweet though.
You know, I'm all for a slow burn but Ive gotten a blowjob faster than it takes for this girl to give one.
- Mar 25, 2019
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- Jun 21, 2017
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Slightly disappointed.
Good update but it would have been a great update if it was the mayor instead of Connor.
The only way to tolerate Connor is to make him a playable character alongside Jessica and let us bang other characters with him.
On a side note, Connor is definitely the vigilante.
I also thing he is the one......but lets wait...for further updatesOn a side note, Connor is definitely the vigilante.
Will we ever be able to totally get rid of Connor?
One of the best looking games out there if not the best, not a ton of content but I guess that's the trade off
- Jun 11, 2020
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Loved it Stoper, keep it up your one of the best, curious what we missed in the tommy scene, really want to see him get further with Jessica. Also would love to see Rosa get some action too. She is smoking hot milf
- Jun 5, 2017
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Have you tried storyboarding your scenes with rough drawings or peg images before starting with scene building? It might minimize you ending up with something you have to scrap and redo.
I used to love writing by the seat of my pants as an amateur, but the screenwriting process studios go through has taught me how much faster writing could be if I already had an outline and sequence treatment before I wrote my first scene. Also, having that level of preparation has been the best defense I've ever had against writer's block. If you could see beforehand which would work and which wouldn't before committing your time and resources, your process might get faster.
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I can see why people feel the update is "short", but also why this would take a while to make. If you place all these events in a line, it would probably feel closer to what people expected. It is the branching nature of the story, where some events are cut off by player choice, that makes the update feel small. Although I do find it funny that this seems to be one of the few instances stoper didn't end the update at the end, or near the end, of Jessica's day.
I do like the story progress though, and the erotic bits were well done even if there are complaints that there should be more of them. I do wonder though if...
I do like the story progress though, and the erotic bits were well done even if there are complaints that there should be more of them. I do wonder though if...
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