VN Ren'Py Abandoned Jessie: Mother's Sins [v0.09 Extended] [Caprice]

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lancelotdulak

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A Wife and a Mother is pulling in around 10k a month, probably a bit more.

It has over 1k subs and while it has income hidden other games with 1k subs sit at around 10k a month.
120k a year +. Which means you can incorporate and write off a $10,000 render system or farm and do photorealistic renders in 5 minutes... and they manage a 20 image "update" once every few months. i really need to focus on my game more instead of fucking around the standards in this genre are insanely low..
 

Avaron1974

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120k a year +. Which means you can incorporate and write off a $10,000 render system or farm and do photorealistic renders in 5 minutes... and they manage a 20 image "update" once every few months. i really need to focus on my game more instead of fucking around the standards in this genre are insanely low..
All it takes is something that hooks people. As long as you can do a few updates that look good and have the spelling and grammar on point you can start bringing people in.

Not going to start slamming ny devs or games but i've seen some games that, if i'm completely honest, are shit tier yet bring in thousands a month.

A lot of incest games follow the exact same formula of 1 mother, 2 sisters, dead dad, son coming home after being away for a few years. So many games have that exact same element yet some of them earn silly money regardless of quality. Put incest in your game and it's almost sure to bring in players good game or not.

This, and AWAM, both have the bonus of being one of those rare female protag with incest.

This had a ton of potential when it first launched. If choices had mattered and a few paths been opened up this could have, potentially, brought in a fuck ton of money with the players. Sadly it went tits up and the dev gave zero fucks now it's come back and forced corruption with unavoidable blackmail which instantly turns off a lot of people now. Sure people like fem pro corruption games but like Fashion Business, GGGB and JOHN (the Jessica O Neal reporter one) showed, they also like options.
 

lancelotdulak

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I agree with literally everything you said. I think there are a lot of 18yo devs with milf fetishes who seem to want their dads dead as well. and people who think porn sex and women acting/dressing like prostitutes is the norm. The brilliance of AWAM and Jessie a mothers sins is that they were about corruption/seduction/desire. Just like dmd etc. And some folks are brilliant at everything but game design. IT seems like 90% of these games are completely illogical. The player should know HOW to work toward his goal. And not be expected to be in the bathroom at 2am on the 19th tuesday with a bottle of wine or miss half the game/renders... I especially agree about fetishes. Dont make a romance game and put rape in it. It literally makes me want to find the dev and hurt him. Or some game about hot 20yos then force you to click through 1000000 renders of the mc fucking a 65yo 300 pound black woman with chronic acne.
I honestly think the reason most of the good games get abandoned is that these folks have a lot of talent.. have a fetish they work out building the game.. and then get bored to TEARS by it (ive experienced this).

AWAM could have been the best game ever posted here including dmd, big brother and lewd island but the dev lost his focus and just decided to just make generic sex game. Damned shame.
 

Xen86

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This is really disappointing. I was totally on board with this game up until the needlessly unavoidable blackmail. The MC isn't stupid, but she still somehow goes along with it, despite the acknowledged lack of evidence. It doesn't fit with the rest of the game, and frankly isn't needed for the further "corruption" of the MC.
 

Blockout

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lol what corruption?
She's basically ready to jump on her sons 12yo dick after a few screens.
 

lancelotdulak

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This is really disappointing. I was totally on board with this game up until the needlessly unavoidable blackmail. The MC isn't stupid, but she still somehow goes along with it, despite the acknowledged lack of evidence. It doesn't fit with the rest of the game, and frankly isn't needed for the further "corruption" of the MC.
This game will die sadly. I can tell you what happened. The dev had a fetish... wrote it out brilliantly..and got over it.. got bored with it and went a totally new direction. That's .. not entirely criticism i get it. Trust me you spend 4 hours building a scene then come here or to reddit to kill time while it renders for 2 hours its hard to maintain focus :p Im to the point i do test renders then store the scene for mass render later. Then go back through every scene finding the flaws. TLDR this becomes like fun work where youre waiting on things a LOT and it's hard to maintain that focus
 

Krugger

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Well, literally the developer doesn't have to "kill" his game, he can go back and start writing the script / story where it was good. I was really enjoying the game at one point, I started to think about how I was being wronged, but when we got to Paul's part when he takes Jessie to the mall, then everything went bad and non sense and then the story got worse, the blackmail was too forced and there was no point in it. There is still time to correct, of course it will take a long time, or else continue and even reach a point of wanting to abandon. I think it's much better that developers try to run after it than abandon it, because the game has potential, but your biggest enemy will be creativity, because honestly I think it a little difficult to create a game with a female protagonist that looks good in a story to play. Of course, it's not something impossible.
 

Rythan25

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Well, literally the developer doesn't have to "kill" his game, he can go back and start writing the script / story where it was good. I was really enjoying the game at one point, I started to think about how I was being wronged, but when we got to Paul's part when he takes Jessie to the mall, then everything went bad and non sense and then the story got worse, the blackmail was too forced and there was no point in it. There is still time to correct, of course it will take a long time, or else continue and even reach a point of wanting to abandon. I think it's much better that developers try to run after it than abandon it, because the game has potential, but your biggest enemy will be creativity, because honestly I think it a little difficult to create a game with a female protagonist that looks good in a story to play. Of course, it's not something impossible.
I disagree with a lot of what you said... the fact that its a Female Protagonist in an INCEST game, gives it near infinite potential !! The scene in the mall with Paul was HOT !!

Remember this isnt NTR, as the player your seeing things from Jessie's view... This is no different than say... the attractive kid from Milfy City banging those two ugly twins, instead of Linda or Caroline...do you consider that NTR ? Probably not, so Jessie getting licked by Paul was fine too !

What most of us are complaining about, is that its going the predictable way of "blackmail, and forced" trash that is prevalent in almost EVERY SINGLE Fem-protag game. When Jessie could have just acted like a male MC, and go around the town banging who SHE WANTED... She had so many options, starting with her son and daughter, Paul who she admitted she liked before he did a 180 and became blackmailing garbage, and her daughter's boyfriend.

The dev could have added more people to, that most of us wouldnt have minded... her boss at work could have been a NICE GUY, an attractive male model (instead of fat, old, stereotypical black, etc)... and Jessie being the sexually frustrated gal that she is, could have flirted, slowly worked her way into the boss's pants... Again so many opportunities... that young recently graduated doctor who is giving her a check-up ? Yes please ! The Lifeguard at the country club pool ? Yes please ! The salesperson at her favorite clothing boutique ? Yes please ! And they could be any gender, male or female !! Again near infinite potential !
 
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dx_boost

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All these complaints could have been avoided with a simple choice in the mall with Paul.
One goes down the blackmail path for those that like that and the other where she tells him to fuck off.

I don't mind there being a blackmail path as it's a common thing in these games, as was already said, but give us a way to avoid it.
 
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ComixFan

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I went to the AWAM Patreon page but I don't see anything about $10K a month or how many donors they have. Can someone post a link to those stats? Thx
 

goobdoob

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I went to the AWAM Patreon page but I don't see anything about $10K a month or how many donors they have. Can someone post a link to those stats? Thx
Right up top it says 1,147 patrons.
His shows he had $7800/month when he had about 1000 patrons.
 

maisbordeldemerde

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Damn I like the art on this one & the female MC tag but kinda doutbful where it's going to.
Still nice to see the game is back on the track tho
 

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Jessie: Mother's Sins [Caprice]

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