VN Ren'Py Abandoned Jessie: Mother's Sins [v0.09 Extended] [Caprice]

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Gemman

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After not seeing or playing this game for a long time was hoping for more along original story line , this update left me totally Disappointed.I believe it actually had lest content and no choice in any route. Sorry but not for me , still good luck to the Dev.
 

deadspin

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This game is so short, anyone asking for a walkthrough has not even started this game. It was looking like a good game but then this update happened. The forced blackmail or even the son's best friend forcing her to clothes shopping was just terrible. Now this is basically the son's best friend laughing as he rapes the mc and shows her son anyways. The end. Jesse was shown she has desires and they even had her opening up to them but again once it was set in stone she HAS to join Paul at the store he chose and even he forced her to let him stay and watch her get changed. It was like watching a wreck happening. I am glad she turned him down first but then for her to reason with herself over whether to do it and all the doubts, she still goes. Then even after he was a total ass to her and she knows he is blackmailing her, she strips and does as asked. The whole game is just 4-5 choices and none of them lead you to separate path.
I will say this if the mc was as prudish and old fashioned as her daugther said and the mom cares so much about her kids (to even being blackmailed and allowed a video of it) then this WHOLE game would have been over when she sees her precious son with some crazy woman she sees with a anal plug and naked at a store.
 
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DA22

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This game is so short, anyone asking for a walkthrough has not even started this game. It was looking like a good game but then this update happened. The forced blackmail or even the son's best friend forcing her to clothes shopping was just terrible. Now this is basically the son's best friend laughing as he rapes the mc and shows her son anyways. The end. Jesse was shown she has desires and they even had her opening up to them but again once it was set in stone she HAS to join Paul at the store he chose and even he forced her to let him stay and watch her get changed. It was like watching a wreck happening. I am glad she turned him down first but then for her to reason with herself over whether to do it and all the doubts, she still goes. Then even after he was a total ass to her and she knows he is blackmailing her, she strips and does as asked. The whole game is just 4-5 choices and none of them lead you to separate path.
I will say this if the mc was as prudish and old fashioned as her daugther said and the mom cares so much about her kids (to even being blackmailed and allowed a video of it) then this WHOLE game would have been over when she sees her precious son with some crazy woman she sees with a anal plug and naked at a store.
Well I understand your disappointment. It looked like we might have had something special here, but dev decided he wanted to make a normal fem protaq game with blackmail, rape and corruption like there are thousands to compete with. Their good right, even if a bloody shame.
 

HV3

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Hehe.
Its funny to see people that assumed this would be purely Mother&son Incest turn around and dislike it after that route was changed.

You guys know Patreon policies right, if the Dev wants to stay on Patreon he needs to abide by the no-Incest rule.

I on the other hand am not really a fan of M&S incest, am a fan of shotacon tho so Woman&youngman, is perfectly fine here.

Good game so far just hurry with the updates man you had a huge period between 05 and 06 that we (the remaining fans) are just a bit let down from the "content" in the revival update. It just doesn't equal the amount of time waited.
 

DA22

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Hehe.
Its funny to see people that assumed this would be purely Mother&son Incest turn around and dislike it after that route was changed.

You guys know Patreon policies right, if the Dev wants to stay on Patreon he needs to abide by the no-Incest rule.

I on the other hand am not really a fan of M&S incest, am a fan of shotacon tho so Woman&youngman, is perfectly fine here.

Good game so far just hurry with the updates man you had a huge period between 05 and 06 that we (the remaining fans) are just a bit let down from the "content" in the revival update. It just doesn't equal the amount of time waited.
Well just a game where the woman had sex because she wanted to and would be in control of with whom she got it cause she seduced them instead of blackmail and rape would have worked, for Patreon there are always patches or other workarounds. :p
 

HV3

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Well just a game where the woman had sex because she wanted to and would be in control of with whom she got it cause she seduced them instead of blackmail and rape would have worked, for Patreon there are always patches or other workarounds. :p
Like the others, I agree that Blackmail is a crappy plot device but cmon, "woman had sex because she wanted to and would be in control of with" sounds sooooo boring.

You need to give the MC a REASON as to why she's doing all these "immoral" acts and progresses the plot forward, other than "oh she just a slutty bitch" I can get those results by typing the word "porn" into google. =D

Sucks that its blackmail but hopefully the entire game isnt about that like Manila.
 

DA22

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Like the others, I agree that Blackmail is a crappy plot device but cmon, "woman had sex because she wanted to and would be in control of with" sounds sooooo boring.

You need to give the MC a REASON as to why she's doing all these "immoral" acts and progresses the plot forward, other than "oh she just a slutty bitch" I can get those results by typing the word "porn" into google. =D

Sucks that its blackmail but hopefully the entire game isnt about that like Manila.
Well why not let the BBC neighbor move in next update then :p and what is slutty about a woman who decides she has sex with a person cause she wants to and not cause she has to and has some self control instead of no control?
 
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Jessie: Mother's Sins [v0.06 Extended] [Caprice]

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abcdz9876

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Hehe.
Its funny to see people that assumed this would be purely Mother&son Incest turn around and dislike it after that route was changed.

You guys know Patreon policies right, if the Dev wants to stay on Patreon he needs to abide by the no-Incest rule.

I on the other hand am not really a fan of M&S incest, am a fan of shotacon tho so Woman&youngman, is perfectly fine here.

Good game so far just hurry with the updates man you had a huge period between 05 and 06 that we (the remaining fans) are just a bit let down from the "content" in the revival update. It just doesn't equal the amount of time waited.
So there is no incest content? Should remove the incest tag then. He could have just gone the usual roommate landlady route
 

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About the next update :



Hi! Work on the update is already underway. Now I have more time for development, so version 0.07 will appear in May.
Hopefully more content this time around...
 

Miðgarðsormr

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Like the others, I agree that Blackmail is a crappy plot device but cmon, "woman had sex because she wanted to and would be in control of with" sounds sooooo boring.

You need to give the MC a REASON as to why she's doing all these "immoral" acts and progresses the plot forward, other than "oh she just a slutty bitch" I can get those results by typing the word "porn" into google. =D

Sucks that its blackmail but hopefully the entire game isnt about that like Manila.
Blackmail is the prime example of bad plot device as its lazy writing. There is not one good example of blackmailing in all of fiction. As it only works in movies and games but in reality you either end up in jail or dead. Blackmail someone and its likely the police gets involved. Blackmail the wrong person and you end up dead.

Yes a REASON sounds good. A reason could be lot of things. "Sexual frustration" "Experimental" "afraid of losing her kids as they grow up" "Sexual independence outside of society norms", "Kids who play doctor with each other", "Curiosity" "Teaching sex" and so it goes on and on and on.
The list is endless.

Blackmail = Lazy writing as you simply need 1 asshole and the blackmailing plot to avoid all of that.

Oh trust me on this one. Once blackmail is established the entire game is about that as you write yourself in a corner. Once you have blackmail established you have the following problem.
As the driving force for your entire plot now, the moment you get rid of it one way or another you are stuck. Cause you need a new Reason for certain stuff to happen as the old one is gone.

I was eager for this plot but the moment blackmail was added i was like "Hell no" as i am neither into NTR nor Blackmail stuff. But from a writer point of view this won't end pretty. Trust me.
 

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News about extended version 0.07.
Hi! The next update of the game will be released soon, all the pictures of the basic version are ready, the text is given for translation. Work is underway on an additional scene for the extended version. Once these images are ready, the new version 0.07 will be published.
 

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Blackmail is the prime example of bad plot device as its lazy writing. There is not one good example of blackmailing in all of fiction.
Wow, that's quite the assertion. I disagree. As evidence to refute your position that there is not one good example of blackmailing in all of fiction, I offer this:

"In 1999, the book was voted 96th of 's " ". In 2005, it was included in Time magazine's " "."
 

Miðgarðsormr

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Wow, that's quite the assertion. I disagree. As evidence to refute your position that there is not one good example of blackmailing in all of fiction, I offer this:

"In 1999, the book was voted 96th of 's " ". In 2005, it was included in Time magazine's " "."
Really? The Le Monde's List? A daily newspaper which is in literature circles considered absolute trash. Thats like "The Sun" or "The Guardian" or "Fox News" absolutely horrible.

I give you some of the best ever written on paper no opinions attached.

Johann Wolfang von Goethe "Faust"
F. Scott Fitzgerald "The Great Gatsby" (The book not the movie)
Ralph Ellison "Invisible Man"
Miguel de Servantes "Don Quixote"

Most people can not even read said books and either watch a movie which is like lord of the rings leaving out 80% of the book or they can't understand the book by how it is written.

But that gets way off topic.

So back to topic.

I do not mind blackmailing inside a story if its done right. Neither do i wanna bash the dev for going that route. But its potential that is thrown out the window by going that route.
99% of the time it is written horrible and in terms of the games on this site to force certain characters to do stuff.
Which is so overused to the point of absolutely being meaningless as you will neither care for the characters nor think about it for long. If you repeat a concept over and over it becomes pointless as the reader/player will not care for it anymore.

So i can again guarantee you that the game will 90% of its story reside on the blackmail stuff instead of anything else.
Blackmailing can work well as a side story, a side plot.
If you do it as main story/plot you need alot of experience, viewpoints and most important of all Emotional hooks. Guilt, fear, anxiety, depression, lust, anything goes as people are twisted and complicated and not linear.

Yet i see one game after another with a great potential go down that road and the story is simple. characters are one dimensional and it all goes downhill pretty fast. I liked the game to the point i encounterd blackmailing. I kept on going but could not bear it. Not only because i am not into that stuff but because its so overused and done poorly over and over again.

And before you look for a better Blackmail story.

Fyodor Dostoevsky "Crime and Punishment"

Back in the day it gave you insight to both victims and perpetrator mind and how guilt plays a big role.
But that was over 100 years ago. And no one does it right ever since or comes close.

However if you do like the game play and support it by all means. I just can't do it and won't come her anymore as its kinda pointless to discuss this as the game simply is not for me or the devs way of how he makes is game is not up for me to decide. I shared my opinion and what the dev does with that is his decision.
 
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