VN Ren'Py Onhold Juno's Task [Ch.5.1] [JoJozz]

[Gosamr]

-Another positive point: the MC. In my opinion, it is very, very positive to have an MC who doesn't think all the time about how amazing a girl's boobs are or about putting her cock in her butt.

Do we need a Futa/trans tag? Or rather, Contortionist Futa/Trans to be specific, I think?

 

[Havenless_]

Do we need a Futa/trans tag? Or rather, Contortionist Futa/Trans to be specific, I think?

LOL. I had not noticed. It is already corrected.

 

[Joi_fan]

Love the characters, specially mom and sis.

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[helix223]

Love! that the mom was a pornstar. Please Dev don't let anyone here sway you from your ideas for the characters in your game.

 

[Small-pp-22]

Renders and characters look good, MILF is beautiful, but her daughter could look a little younger, she looks like she's in her late 20s, early 30s in certain lighting, like a young MILF herself, should change that. That's too old to be still living with parents.

This would definitely benefit from an Incest Patch, made available only here (to be patreon safe), they could be step-family or ex-wife. I'd rather take cliched dead father, over Dad's/Mom's friend and landladies.

Definitely need to see Future/Planned Tags under "Genre" tab.

"Aphrodite's Champion" sounds like a better title than "Juno's Task", in my opinion. Greek mythology has more gods than Roman, they are widely known and their roles are more clearly defined. People automatically equate Love, Beauty, Lust and Procreation with Aphrodite, I had to actually look up what Juno was the Goddess of. Or you could make your own Goddess and call the VN, "Hero of Love/Lust", etc.

Regardless, best of luck to the dev, thank you for sharing!

Juno is the Roman name of Hera I believe.

 

[DisabledAccount1110202308]

Juno is the Roman name of Hera I believe.

Greek and Roman pantheon of gods are different, Juno and Hera are not the same. Juno is the Roman equivalent of Hera, they represent similar things, but their mythos is different.

 

[jojozz]

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Bufff... this just keeps getting better and better, I can't wait to see the next update and see how the story continues.

 

[Asaghon]

The renders in the previews look very good, especially the mom. Must give it a try

 

[Alex Lem]

So, MC's mom was a pornstar.What a fucking stupid idea. What's the point to ruin such an important character right from the very beginning of the game and make her completely unlikable?? And she's MC's mother , she is the most important character, for most players. I don't really want to play this, right now this deserves to be ignored. If you at least changed it to just a model for magazines, but a PORN STAR?? This is crazy

 

[jojozz]

Here is a small version update and it's mostly a plot difference.
I understand I won't make everyone happy whether I shape a girl one way, keep a story element the same, change the story element, etc... so all I do when I read these is take out the feedback part and see how I feel about them and how they will change the progression of the story. Not every suggestion will make a change in the VN. For example I stuck with "Mom and sis" combo instead of changing it to "Aunt and cousin".

This update just changes Veronica and Valerie's responses:

1. Veronica's previous occupation now was like a Playboy playmate. This allows you to infer that she had a little promiscuous past with modeling but wasn't getting railed by a ton of guys lol
2. Valerie is more interested in sex but has not done it that often, that is why she wants to experiment with the MC this summer BUT doesn't mean she's in love with him(...yet)

These changes were done mostly for story telling reasons. It is hard to have a plot of wanting various women to fall in love with you if they were already extremely promiscuous to start with. This causes a lot of backtracking like "Well I did mostly lesbian scenes... or I had a lot of sex with guys before but I never really enjoyed it...".
Links:

• Juno's Task v0.12:
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• Special "Patch" update is attached View attachment script.rpy

Sorry for those that don't like this change but it just works best for me.

Side note: I have updated the models for the VN (slight changes to shape, de-aging Valerie...). And I want to at some point re-do some of the scenes in the first version to have those model changes, so that it isn't so jarring when people play the next chapter and they look different. However this is a second priority compared to the main priority of finishing the next official update.

 

[Alex Lem]

Here is a small version update and it's mostly a plot difference.
I understand I won't make everyone happy whether I shape a girl one way, keep a story element the same, change the story element, etc... so all I do when I read these is take out the feedback part and see how I feel about them and how they will change the progression of the story. Not every suggestion will make a change in the VN. For example I stuck with "Mom and sis" combo instead of changing it to "Aunt and cousin".

This update just changes Veronica and Valerie's responses:

1. Veronica's previous occupation now was like a Playboy playmate. This allows you to infer that she had a little promiscuous past with modeling but wasn't getting railed by a ton of guys lol
2. Valerie is more interested in sex but has not done it that often, that is why she wants to experiment with the MC this summer BUT doesn't mean she's in love with him(...yet)

These changes were done mostly for story telling reasons. It is hard to have a plot of wanting various women to fall in love with you if they were already extremely promiscuous to start with. This causes a lot of backtracking like "Well I did mostly lesbian scenes... or I had a lot of sex with guys before but I never really enjoyed it...".
Links:

• Juno's Task v0.12: Mega
• Special "Patch" update is attached View attachment 1401415

Sorry for those that don't like this change but it just works best for me.

Side note: I have updated the models for the VN (slight changes to shape, de-aging Valerie...). And I want to at some point re-do some of the scenes in the first version to have those model changes, so that it isn't so jarring when people play the next chapter and they look different. However this is a second priority compared to the main priority of finishing the next official update.

As for MC, here some people call him a midget, although he is taller than his mom and sister, compared to the goddess he certainly looks too small, but I would not call him a midget or shota. But it would be better if he was more athletic, mom and sister are in great shape (they both have abs!), and he is an ordinary guy who has neeever attended a gym, he does not look very much like a man with a harem, it would be nice if you give him a little more muscle to make him look more convincing, or he can build some muscle in the future, and it would be logical for the story, but it would have been better if he had been a jock from the very beginning. And it's strange that they didn't even hug him at the beginning, even though they hadn't seen him for so many years, the reunion passed as if he had always lived with them and just returned from the store, write as you want, but that just was too unrealistic

 

[jojozz]

As for MC, here some people call him a midget, although he is taller than his mom and sister, compared to the goddess he certainly looks too small, but I would not call him a midget or shota. But it would be better if he was more athletic, mom and sister are in great shape (they both have abs!), and he is an ordinary guy who has neeever attended a gym, he does not look very much like a man with a harem, it would be nice if you give him a little more muscle to make him look more convincing, or he can build some muscle in the future, and it would be logical for the story, but it would have been better if he had been a jock from the very beginning. And it's strange that they didn't even hug him at the beginning, even though they hadn't seen him for so many years, the reunion passed as if he had always lived with them and just returned from the store, write as you want, but that just was too unrealistic

My plan for his physique was as he trained more with Lia and Natalya he would get more toned but not "buff" per say. Also the idea why he originally isn't in the best shape is that he has been living with his dad, who as you could see, isn't in the best shape either. I like the story telling of a person who develops from something less into something more rather than him being a stud from the beginning. Height was adjusted somewhat as part of the model changes I made. The renders for the reunion were written initially with the "non-incest" narrative which is him meeting these women for the first time so that's why it will look odd with the "incest patch" and why they aren't hugging and stuff.

 

[Alex Lem]

My plan for his physique was as he trained more with Lia and Natalya he would get more toned but not "buff" per say. Also the idea why he originally isn't in the best shape is that he has been living with his dad, who as you could see, isn't in the best shape either. I like the story telling of a person who develops from something less into something more rather than him being a stud from the beginning. Height was adjusted somewhat as part of the model changes I made. The renders for the reunion were written initially with the "non-incest" narrative which is him meeting these women for the first time so that's why it will look odd with the "incest patch" and why they aren't hugging and stuff.

The reason is clear, but now everyone is using an incest patch for this game, and it looks strange for them. It would be easier at the beginning of the game to let the player choose who these girls are to you, this way you will not need to constantly fix the patch, like in "light of my life", and in this way it would be easier to make small additional scenes for the versions with and without incest

 

[BABaracus]

Here is a small version update and it's mostly a plot difference.
I understand I won't make everyone happy whether I shape a girl one way, keep a story element the same, change the story element, etc... so all I do when I read these is take out the feedback part and see how I feel about them and how they will change the progression of the story. Not every suggestion will make a change in the VN. For example I stuck with "Mom and sis" combo instead of changing it to "Aunt and cousin".

This update just changes Veronica and Valerie's responses:

1. Veronica's previous occupation now was like a Playboy playmate. This allows you to infer that she had a little promiscuous past with modeling but wasn't getting railed by a ton of guys lol
2. Valerie is more interested in sex but has not done it that often, that is why she wants to experiment with the MC this summer BUT doesn't mean she's in love with him(...yet)

These changes were done mostly for story telling reasons. It is hard to have a plot of wanting various women to fall in love with you if they were already extremely promiscuous to start with. This causes a lot of backtracking like "Well I did mostly lesbian scenes... or I had a lot of sex with guys before but I never really enjoyed it...".
Links:

• Juno's Task v0.12: Mega
• Special "Patch" update is attached View attachment 1401415

Sorry for those that don't like this change but it just works best for me.

Side note: I have updated the models for the VN (slight changes to shape, de-aging Valerie...). And I want to at some point re-do some of the scenes in the first version to have those model changes, so that it isn't so jarring when people play the next chapter and they look different. However this is a second priority compared to the main priority of finishing the next official update.

Thanks for the small update, the changes do make sense.
So the updated models are arriving with the next update?

 

[jojozz]

Thanks for the small update, the changes do make sense.
So the updated models are arriving with the next update?

If I get everything else done, then I will try to release it simultaneously or a little after as a small update. From my weekly game updates on my patreon, the models used there are the new ones, so you will get an idea of how they will look like when I go back to v0.1.
I will say though I made the mistake of saving over scenes when I first started, so some will be hard to do because I will have to re-create the scene rather than importing the model shapes into a scene I already have saved.

 

["CJ"]

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[Queen Daenerys]

The thigh gaps in this game, christ I can park a Buick in between them.

 

[punisher2099]

Excellent first release making Veronica a former Playboy model was a great idea and I love her blond bush.

 

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Mother's Milk

Hello everyone, this is just a shameless "patreon promotion post". I did this as a commission for a patron at the $10 tier. I don't know for how long I will do commissions in this tier but I am enjoying it so far. For just $1 you can see other commissions and game updates that I am working on.
P.S Maybe you won't support me until after the next update or ever, but I just wanted to show you some of what is being offered there.
Cheers,
jojozz

nice, this is great, I love this; can't wait til it's in the game with the MC!!