DKArthas

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Pretty damned good. The writing was top tier by the standard of this sort of games. The 7 endings took care of most of the main fetishes. The only thing missing was the lack of art. Even without art, this is likely my favorite game in HTML format.

Though, I felt that Karen was a bit unrealistic but than maybe it's just me who can't imagine someone being so damn deeply in love. Still, because of that I enjoyed all the ending, even those which had fetishes I usually don't like.
 
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thelandcruzer

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Understandably. Don't worry though, your text is very good and doubly so, considering the large ammount needed to make for different paths. Good work overall. If I'd been more talented myself I would even offer to do at least character pictures for it, as I really enjoyed it. Alas I am only good in drawing architecure and tech. But who knows, maybe someone else turns up with such an offer.

Other than that, it is not that bad to simply rely on the good old gpu in your head for "character renders" from time to time...keeps the imagination engine from rusting. I must admit that the quick and easy tittilation of abundant visuals is not always a good thing in my opinion.

Anyway, thanks for a good game and good luck with any new projects you might set your sights on!

Most people tend to forget that good sex begins in the imagination not really with the physical. The physical is only the true starting point. A good story can be better any graphically picture could ever be. And yes I know some of you would argue the other way. But when your looking at photographs " what is going on in your mind!????".
Also one of the largest book markets is the romance novel. (Go figure!)
So yes I like some good text adventures.
"The mind is the strongest sex organ in the body."
 

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I don't really believe Karen actually did loved him. I just got ending 1 from messing around.
Generally speaking in the vasty majority of cases, when a person is extremely attached and bond to another and lose this special person, the natural reaction would be to move away from anywhere near from that known location.
If she stayed in the same city, she would remember him, when she did go to the mall, when she did go to the same restaurant, when the passed by any previously any place where they dated, any previously street they've walked and had some sort of romatic interaction or conversation. Even her workplace could've remembered him, since he could've picked her there for a surprise, texted her, send a special gift...
But she did not only stayed in the same city, but also choose his best friend to date... Aside from this guy not being his friend at all, he would be a living memory trigger from her lost soul mate.
I know why you choosen him, to make it more impacful, painful and sad, but it also made Karen a really cold person as well.
Oh also let's not forget that she was dumped by him. While I do believe Karen was the strongest member of the relation, being dumped doesn't really help.

Another thing, once he did realize he missed her so much and wanted to be with her again, tried to contact her friends and somehow didn't made a convicing speech about how sorry he was... Then eventually he found out that she was going to date with Robert, why didn't he just waited there to talk to her, at the entrace door?
"Karen we need to talk" "Look, I did messed up, and I am really sorry for it. We were in a relatioship for over 8 months and I was so in love with you, I trusted you with all my heart. When I discovered your past, I felt betrayed that you couldn't have told me, I though we had a honest relationship without secrets. I just couldn't haddle, I didn't knew what to do, I just lost it... All we've lived together, the bonds we've made, it just felt like it wasn't real, because you weren't honest with me."
"However all this time apart from you made me realize how much I still care and think about you, I can't take you from my mind, doesn't matter how hard I try, I just keep thinking about the time we shared together. Do you remember our first date? Even not knowing each other, it felt like we're together for years, I remember the way you smiled that day, the way your checks moved, the way you looked to me, and then later... Oh boy the sex was amazing, how good it felt to be deep inside your tight pussy, your face while you moaned and screamed, your smell of sex, I even remember your uneven hair on the day after at morning. All of this just made me realize how much I want to have you by my side, I don't want to lose you. "
"Still I can not promise we'll be the same couple as we used, nor I'll be the same guy you felt in love with, I will need some time to digest all that happened, because I was raised with different sexual values, nor I did have the same sexual experience as you had. So please bear in mind I will need some time, if you ever loved me, be patient with me."
"Did you knew I was going to propose you?"

Instead he choose stalking and crying with his arms on his knees route. Which by the way, that was a very ninja move to know exactly where they would date and time. He wasn't Robert's 'friend' anymore, didn't had any contant with Karen's friends and obviously no contant with herself. Yet somehow he did knew exactly the place and time of each dating. Either it was a tracker implanted on his car or maybe a severe watching Robert's house, which lead to believe he was uneployed?

The choices... Well, if I am being asked the same question over, it kinda lose it's impact.
I guess if I choose something, then a reaction happened and then a new story was formed and then I would've to deal with the consequences of the choice, would be more appealing, although it would add much more text and thinking.
Lastly, it would be nice to have the cuckqueen ending, without having to share her with Jacob.
Overall it was a good game.
True the way she is instantly goes to Robert when you break up she never loved the MC she just wanted a simp and Robert is a real shitty friend the guy can go die in a ditch he is pure scum.
 
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NotYourBiznes

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I'm so glad I got the Cuckqean ending on my first try. I didn't even know about it, I tried to equally fuck Sarah and let Karen be fucked by Sarah's husband.
 
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Amansas

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must admit i love text and hentai games where the girl(s) are very perverted or quick to become it so a game like this where you actually get to choose that you want to be just as weird as her is something i love :p

cant find many of those for me there are just too many where the girl is either not perverted at all and you are the one that runs around having fun or she is and your protag dont like it
hey! so i am assuming that you at least know of a few other such games, where they both are perverted?? could you share some names? you see, i love those kind of games too!
 
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fantasianme

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hey! so i am assuming that you at least know of a few other such games, where they both are perverted?? could you share some names? you see, i love those kind of games too!
im very sorry but i have a really horrible memory so not at the moment but i will reply back should i come against some games that fit this or if i remember any :)
 

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hey! so i am assuming that you at least know of a few other such games, where they both are perverted?? could you share some names? you see, i love those kind of games too!
Iirc "My Wife's a Star" is somewhat similar, though a lot more drama and slower paced (I personally don't like those kinds of VN since if I wanted all the drama and such I'd read a book). That's the only one I can think of off the top of my head because the swinging tag isn't really used. If you want more suggestions I'd suggest making a forum post about it.
 
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gffgg

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Have to say that this is the best writing I've ever read from a game on here. Really fucking excellently written with believable characters and dialogue.

Also, I'm not sure why people overwhelmingly prefer image based games over text based. For me, the VN / CYOA adult games are much better with no visuals, as it opens up the developer from having to make a bunch of art and to be more creative / it immerses you further into the story as it's your brain imagining things, not the pictures.

Like, I understand that a lot of the pictures in other games are hot, but if I wanted to watch porn or look at lewd photos I can do a quick image search.

Most games on here have cringy unbelievable writing and it makes me wonder how the hell people like them.

Overall, I wish there were a few more choices and that the game explored Sean and their relationship more, but really fucking well done.
 
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AgriasQuarto

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Also, I'm not sure why people overwhelmingly prefer image based games over text based. For me, the VN / CYOA adult games are much better with no visuals, as it opens up the developer from having to make a bunch of art and to be more creative / it immerses you further into the story as it's your brain imagining things, not the pictures.
Most games on here have cringy unbelievable writing and it makes me wonder how the hell people like them.
You kinda answered your own question there, without the custom 3d poses/commisioned 2d CG art, the writing would take much more weight in determining the quality of the game, and 99% of the content here would be reduced to little more than cringy fanfics.
 
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