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That would be Ending 2 - Monogamy
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I've started on another one right now, but it's still in the early stages. I prefer releasing complete stories so it might be a while, but I will get it uploaded on F95.
This game is absolutely fantastic. This is definitely my favorite chyoa type game. This story is well written and felt like a lot of care went into the motivations of the characters. This was an incredibly immersive experience for me and I cannot wait for more of your work.
Hi Kaskir,
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. Though I think you might be a bit too generous calling it a "literary gem!"
I'm sure I could do a better job with my writing (hell it's all I have, it's not like I can draw erotica). I agree that there are a lot of niggling issues and mistakes in the game text (both in Twine and CHYOA), and a very kind user in CHYOA actually proof read some parts for me. I am planning to fix all of that and redo Ending 1 to some degree in the future. It's just that I had writer's block for a while and I'm finally knee-deep in a new idea and I'm trying not to get side-tracked until it's completed.
I have posted guides to some of the endings in my earlier comments in this thread. But yeah, I should also make a complete walkthrough shouldn't I?
- Jun 1, 2017
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Really enjoyed this one, I found the writing to be very sexy and it really clicked with me more that with most text based games I have played. I would definitely recommend trying this game to everyone who likes text-based erotica :happyblush
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Well, in the other 6 endings, she does become nearly whatever you want. The one thing she won't become is unloved, despised trash that disgusts you, i.e. the bad ending; she'll be monogamous, she'll watch you you bang other women, she'll bang other men to excite you, she'll do almost anything. It really does make perfect sense and I can assure you that there are many women and men like that who exist. It's actually one of the more accurate and well-written pieces of erotica out there. As someone who has been in a swinger marriage, it mostly rings true.
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I think the answer is yes that she can be in a monogamous relationship, she is that much in love. While she certainly enjoyed all the other stuff in her past, and would enjoy doing it now, she enjoys his happiness more than anything. I haven't played the game in a while, but I am pretty certain that up the point where the story begins, she has never cheated, and has been content to letting those things from her past stay as fantasies. She has the photos on her computer, so she might masturbate and fantasize, but it just stays fantasies. My take on Karen is that those desires wouldn't blow up, sure she might fantasize but her relationship is more important than anything.
Of course there are many people that wouldn't be able to do that, but that's what I get from Karen as a character.
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damn, this is really good! To bad chyoa doesn't support different colors as your standalone version does.
Will your new story that you mentioned before follow the same theme?
Will your new story that you mentioned before follow the same theme?
I actually had a serious case of writer's block for a while and have that story on hiatus. I'm working on another one, but it might be quite a while before it comes out (I'm currently only 35,000 words in). I'm still exploring open relationships/multiple partners in this one though.
Thanks for the praise. It feels nice that people are still enjoying the story even after all this time. Mind telling me your favorite ending?
Oh, that's a tricky one.
I liked nr 4 6 and 7 the most, but 4 was probably my favorite if I had to pick one, although i do recall a few "parts" were I was a bit "skeptical" for a lack of a better word. Been a while since I played it so wouldn't be able to pinpoint specific parts.
Hope you get your motivation back!
Its very few stories that holds such a good and steady quality thru the start to finish.
I liked nr 4 6 and 7 the most, but 4 was probably my favorite if I had to pick one, although i do recall a few "parts" were I was a bit "skeptical" for a lack of a better word. Been a while since I played it so wouldn't be able to pinpoint specific parts.
Hope you get your motivation back!
Its very few stories that holds such a good and steady quality thru the start to finish.
I guess this is a necro reply, but I think it helps a lot to have even just a portrait picture of the characters when you meet them to help visualize how they look.
- Jun 11, 2017
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One of the best, if not the best, writing of all HTML games I've tried so far. Maybe CRACK comes close second, mainly due to the graphical explanations, but comes nowhere near as close as good variations of partners like here.
Overall, I say ths game needs some visuals, and would easily trip "The Company" or other lazily written games around.
Edit: just saw the quote above that it would be difficult getting art with the same actors for all variations.
My suggestion would be to try cropping/altering the pics, so they do not feature any facials. If the art is primarily focused on the fucking, especially if its well chosen and SUFFICIENT (not lazy 2-3 pics per scene like most HTML games), even if its not gifs or animations, it would still rock.
Layout I'd chose for displaying the pics would be a to divide the text iframe into 2 columns and pics go on one side, text on the other. If sides switch, it makes it even more graphically interesting.
If I had the time I'd make it, unfortunately I am a lazy, ugly consumer of the i-net and not a contributor, for over 10y.
Overall, I say ths game needs some visuals, and would easily trip "The Company" or other lazily written games around.
Edit: just saw the quote above that it would be difficult getting art with the same actors for all variations.
My suggestion would be to try cropping/altering the pics, so they do not feature any facials. If the art is primarily focused on the fucking, especially if its well chosen and SUFFICIENT (not lazy 2-3 pics per scene like most HTML games), even if its not gifs or animations, it would still rock.
Layout I'd chose for displaying the pics would be a to divide the text iframe into 2 columns and pics go on one side, text on the other. If sides switch, it makes it even more graphically interesting.
If I had the time I'd make it, unfortunately I am a lazy, ugly consumer of the i-net and not a contributor, for over 10y.
- Dec 27, 2017
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Thanks for writing this game it's one of a life lesson for me, when & if the day comes for me that I would be understanding of my future soulmate whoever he/she (prefer women) who has a past of having multiple sexual partners and don't judge her right of the book as long as it was his/her past and he/she wasn't cheating and understand her perspective it would be a bonus for me if he/she asked me of my preferences with my kinky fetish adventures with him/her I'm actually sexually curious but if anyone would ask which ending I stumbled at the end? I chose monogamous ending I still prefer having just one for the future me wherever path I'm heading with my life but I still love having a soulmate that would end up being with with him/her & I only than having a polygamous relationship ending sharing him/her with different partners, goddamusername thank you for making the game without the ntr but when I've read this my mind straighten it to just a monogamy mindset but probably more understanding if one day my husband/wife would be adventurous I'm sexual curious so I'm not biased and would explore different endings for this game.
