VN Ren'Py Karlsson's Gambit [v0.8.2B Final] [Grym Gudinna Games]

[PickerLewd]

So I have a big problem with this update - the piss tank. Time to unleash my inner autist I guess.

My inner autistic would tell you that looking at the picture it is not 2x2x2. Maybe it is 2 metres high and long but not wide, at least looking at the stairs that part looks like 1 metre or less .

I think the witches fill the tank up to 98% or more with water and the rest with urine, which contaminates everything, it's not all pure .

 

[jadepaladin]

There's way too much piss talk for a VN with asses of this caliber.

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[Sharpshooter890]

My inner autistic would tell you that looking at the picture it is not 2x2x2. Maybe it is 2 metres high and long but not wide, at least looking at the stairs that part looks like 1 metre or less .

I think the witches fill the tank up to 98% or more with water and the rest with urine, which contaminates everything, it's not all pure .

I wanted to write that it's 2x1.5x2.5, but simplified it to 2x2x2 for normal people who are not autists. But yes, you're absolutely right.

Yeah, that's 100% pure unfiltered piss. There's more piss in that tank than in my local gym's swimming pool.

 

[Stan5851]

This is where V falls apart. She is barely human and in her own way, far more cruel and inhumane than even say Jules. V is just pure, raw and unadulterated analytical, logical and efficient.

Cruel...evil...good...do not even really register on her rader...they are not things she even cionsiders, just the most efficient matter of dealing with something, if that ends up being crual and sadistic then so be it, the end result is all that matters.

Mav, that's something you realize I can't agree with. Especially after

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[PickerLewd]

Yeah, that's 100% pure unfiltered piss. There's more piss in that tank than in my local gym's swimming pool.

That yellowish tank disgusts me (thanks Silver ).

As you said yourself, they can't possibly fill it with "pure liquid" . And when you drink a lot of water to produce more, the urine becomes clear and colourless and looks very much like water to the naked eye, which is not the case with this tank.

 

[kinkyshin]

Mav, that's something you realize I can't agree with. Especially after

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Callista agrees with you. "You see what you just did Veronica? Even with all that's happened to you... you're not the Ice Queen. I know better."

Also, Veronica's face when Callista says she's mad at her =(

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Unrelated, but I do wonder who this is about. My immediate thought was actually Veronica lol. Hopefully I'm wrong though because it would be sad.

 

[Silver_Crow117]

Callista agrees with you. "You see what you just did Veronica? Even with all that's happened to you... you're not the Ice Queen. I know better."

Also, Veronica's face when Callista says she's mad at her =(

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Unrelated, but I do wonder who this is about. My immediate thought was actually Veronica lol. Hopefully I'm wrong though because it would be sad.

It’s Elena talking to Kane if he decides not to Noin Olivia’s faction, it’s the less…harsher punishment if you decide to have Olivia allow Elena and Sam to go at him

 

[Stan5851]

Callista agrees with you. "You see what you just did Veronica? Even with all that's happened to you... you're not the Ice Queen. I know better."

Also, Veronica's face when Callista says she's mad at her =(

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Unrelated, but I do wonder who this is about. My immediate thought was actually Veronica lol. Hopefully I'm wrong though because it would be sad.

Well..none of the Karlsson sisters are perfect, except perhaps for the sinless Astrid, and probably our sweet and kind Olivia (on the GoodDom route)..But Tess didn't make it easy for us and endowed each of the Karlsson sisters with different talents and abilities that are sometimes used for both good and evil. But that's what we have to work with..¯\_(ツ)_/¯and I'm not sure it would be better or more interesting if all the sisters were soft and fluffy. It would already be some pink vanilla, not a fascinating post-apocalyptic utopia..

 

[Stan5851]

That yellowish tank disgusts me (thanks Silver ).

As you said yourself, they can't possibly fill it with "pure liquid" . And when you drink a lot of water to produce more, the urine becomes clear and colourless and looks very much like water to the naked eye, which is not the case with this tank.

PickerLewd, I fixed it. That's how it really was.

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[Stan5851]

Mistress Tess - Today at 1:03PM (from Discord)

I will be releasing just the normal Test Version to the $15 tier shortly. (within the hour from this post) (as I said on Patreon, I really really wanted to get that tier something very very soon.) I have not added the changes I have already done after Test as that seems to be the vote right now and it would take a lot to compile it for new versions, etc. I am almost done with the sub scene and Anais has basically almost finished everything I have asked for and I'm editing and incorporating it on my side. My last big scene as I talked about is a dinner scene which is difficult because it has a lot of nice clothes and likely 10+ characters which even taxes a 4090. So building that scene...I am attaching some random work product from things after the Test Version. Some are just normal scenes, but a few might be from the outro or Anais stuff, etc. Still will try and get everything done ASAP!

I'm just adding I feel for anyone that knows anyone in L.A. that is being impacted by the fires. I have family there near the Brentwood area that are being warned to evacuate, etc. So just sending positive thoughts to anyone else that may know somebody impacted. After the Maui fires (which also impacted family of mine), I'm starting to want to build a future house with this in mind (fire danger) a lot.

Spoiler: Images - Dom, Sub and story.

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[MilesEdgeworth]

Returning to the deafening slave's debate, since Tess has neither confirmed nor denied it, and the truth hasn't come out in writing, all signs would indicate it was true, especially since we've learned that Veronica has lied about nothing else in the game. Sometimes, she might not tell the whole truth, but she has never outright lied.

Well, as she seems to be everyone's favourite of the day (and it's rare we all agree):

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My fave non protag Karlsson sister is not her sir, soz. Cute pic though.

 

[Stan5851]

Returning to the deafening slave's debate, since Tess has neither confirmed nor denied it, and the truth hasn't come out in writing, all signs would indicate it was true, especially since we've learned that Veronica has lied about nothing else in the game. Sometimes, she might not tell the whole truth, but she has never outright lied.

No. If you read not only Tess's post that I quoted, but also the previous pages, it is clear from Tess's responses that Veronica did not do it. However, V had her own motives in pretending that she allegedly did. Tess gives such direct hints that it is impossible to interpret them otherwise.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

No. If you read not only Tess's post that I quoted, but also the previous pages, it is clear from Tess's responses that Veronica did not do it. However, V had her own motives in pretending that she allegedly did. Tess gives such direct hints that it is impossible to interpret them otherwise.

The question still remains: Why would someone who has never lied lie to the one person who has her best interest at heart and Elena, as opposed to sending the slaves away? If she lied, it would be just for the sake of lying. Until Tess outright confirms it, this issue still has wiggle room.

 

[Stan5851]

Until Tess outright confirms it, this issue still has wiggle room.

Well, here's direct confirmation from Tess. So we can consider this matter closed. Veronica didn't deafen the slaves.

#8,034



And Tess's response #8,037

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Well, here's direct confirmation from Tess. So we can consider this matter closed. Veronica didn't deafen the slaves.

#8,034

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And Tess's response #8,037

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So Veronica is lying for the sake of lying, and apparently, the smartest woman in the world doesn't know how tape recorders work. I stand corrected.

 

[Stan5851]

So Veronica is lying for the sake of lying, and apparently, the smartest woman in the world doesn't know how tape recorders work. I stand corrected.

I would venture to guess that Tess hinting at why Veronica deceived her mother might have something to do with Yvette is a key figure in the underground revolutionary movement/organization. But Tess wasn't ready to talk about that at the time, as it would have been a major spoiler.

 

[Maviarab]

Mistress Tess - Today at 1:03PM (from Discord)

I will be releasing just the normal Test Version to the $15 tier shortly. (within the hour from this post) (as I said on Patreon, I really really wanted to get that tier something very very soon.) I have not added the changes I have already done after Test as that seems to be the vote right now and it would take a lot to compile it for new versions, etc. I am almost done with the sub scene and Anais has basically almost finished everything I have asked for and I'm editing and incorporating it on my side. My last big scene as I talked about is a dinner scene which is difficult because it has a lot of nice clothes and likely 10+ characters which even taxes a 4090. So building that scene...I am attaching some random work product from things after the Test Version. Some are just normal scenes, but a few might be from the outro or Anais stuff, etc. Still will try and get everything done ASAP!

I'm just adding I feel for anyone that knows anyone in L.A. that is being impacted by the fires. I have family there near the Brentwood area that are being warned to evacuate, etc. So just sending positive thoughts to anyone else that may know somebody impacted. After the Maui fires (which also impacted family of mine), I'm starting to want to build a future house with this in mind (fire danger) a lot.

Spoiler: Images - Dom, Sub and story.

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Thanks Stan.

 

[Don Sucio]

So I have a big problem with this update - the piss tank. Time to unleash my inner autist I guess.

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By my estimations it's roughly equivalent to 2x2x2 meters, that's 8 cubic metres or 8000 litres of piss. Assuming a grown woman can produce 2 litres of piss a day if she drinks enough water, it would take 100 women 40 days to fill up the tank. I don't think we have even 10 women who would do that though, unless they employ nameless slaves in the thousands. Maybe Veronica created a synthesized piss just for this occasion, why not? It would probably taste like Mountain Dew, so us gamers won't even see the difference.

Am I serious with this? Fuck no! It's a shitpost, or pisspost I should say.

Jesus Christ... I don´t mind a little golden shower but that thing... The smell... And all the germs...


I haven´t played the new chapter yet but i have less desire to try it now than before

 

[Stan5851]

Jesus Christ... I don´t mind a little golden shower but that thing... The smell... And all the germs...

I haven´t played the new chapter yet but i have less desire to try it now than before

Don Sucio, I don't know how things are going for the guys playing Sub, but for Doms even the test version of pt2 turned out great..(imo) But it probably makes sense for you to wait a bit until the final version is released and see for yourself.

 

[Maviarab]

Alright ladies and gentlemen: Further to the conversation started here...

So we now have 8 Chapter Screens...6 new masks from the last time this was discussed (though some of those could be a replacement for some lost assets by Tess). We shall see. Some interesting theories going back over the convo when I was on my hiatus...so have been doing more research on this...much more...

So...masks per episode:

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Using my Timeline and taking all the chapter cards into consideration (and their placement):

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Let's see what we can conjure:

Ep.2: Callista, Main overarching central character essential to the plot. (also main game theme image of Tess too). Seth is iontroduced and while not a central character, he seems to be central to the overall plot. Kiyomi (not introduced yet as per Tess' commentary of one mask that partially or in whole represents someone not formally introduced in the game yet), is watching over him.

Ep.3: Placement of the masks does mostly match up with the major events of this episode.

Ep.4: Placement mostly matches....Jules & Dom still apart, Elena over Olivia with Alessa and Veronica either side. Kiyomi watching over Seth with wildcard Katsumi off to their side.

Ep.5: An interesting one. Dom & Jules meet to discuss the threat of Olivia (Masks together)...Red Tips meets with the Gambit Queen, Elena inbetween Olivia and Kane (they both meet Elena privately this episode). Kiyomi again watching over Seth. Jester mask in the eye of the Red Queen though...hmm...just don't see the connection...

Ep.6: Three new masks. We also have the introduction of the DeKcoks, Cole himself and Astrid Karlsson...Olivia central in the Chapter Card with relevent characters around her. Most of this fits or can be made to fit chapter events. Mostly.

Ep.7: Two new masks this time, the three new from Ep.6 also return. 16 masks on this Chapter card. For the first time, Veronica and Alessa are split, Kane and Olivia either side of Veronica. Jules & Dom are next to Olivia and Alessa splits Seth/Kiyomi for their fist time being split also (makes sense). Elena is once again between Olivia and Callista with a new mask now between Kane and Callista (Cynthia perhaps) and a new mask below and off to the right of Veronica near Olivia. Could this be Astrid's mask???

Which leaves us here:

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Now:

For Ep.2:

If Seth is the 'not formally introduced Character'...then Orange shadows can't be Kiyomi....

If Red Queen is the not formally introuduced character...that still throws doubt on Orange Shadow...

Or...if Kiyomi is the not formally introduced character...is Red Queen just there as 1. Main game image and/or 2. Callista being the over-arching central main character of the story? (Seth is introduced in Ep.2)

Other thoughts:

• Katsumi as Jester/Joker often fits...but Ep.5 Chapter card makes zero sense....or does it?
• New mask for Ep.7 between Kane and Callista....phantom & Feathers mask off to the left of this new mask..between Kane and Callista with butterfly from Ep.6 far to the left instead of near Olivia
• Ep.6: New faces, Cole, DeKock family members & Otto
• Ep.7: New faces are Pod W2 and Astrid & Cole confirmed Kanes father

Both Nadia & Cole could fit a few of these....

• Feathers: Symbolizes trust, honor, strength, wisdom, power, and freedom. It is an object that is deeply revered and a sign of high honor
• Butterfly: In some cultures, butterflies symbolise rebirth.
• Phantom Mask: Symbolizes his vulnerability and the injustice he suffers from (from Phantom Opera)
• Bird Mask: A symbol of death and disease… However, they were misunderstood; they were harbingers of new beginnings

Sooo....thoughts on Cole, Cynthia...Otto maybe? Is Delilah going to be a significant enough character to warrant a mask? Coming back around to Ep.5 Chapter card...possible Katsumi mask behind/in the eyes of Callista, the game show is referenced first in Chapter 5 here:

p "Nice to meet you Hyori, and good luck with your application."
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    hyori "Thank you! I'm applying to help out with entertainment planning for a game show here, so I'm really hoping I can get the job!"
    p "(Game show?) Good luck to you."

Now, as Tess stated: 3) A mask (or more than one mask on screen) is not always an exact 1 to 1 representation of a character (mostly it makes sense it would be though), perhaps it could represent something broader than one specific character.. could this perhaps be a reference to something broader, something largely out of Callista's hands and something she would not originally have known about...like the game show..??

Provisional in case Chapter card changes:

If it doesn't...well well well...more to unpack....expecially with the location of the masks. Once again (for the third time now), what I assume are Alessa's and V's masks are split...even furrther away than they have ever been before. Dom and Jules as always, still next to each other (their alliance still in place perhaps?). As usual, Elena close to Olivia (I personally think one of the new masks previously was due to Tess losing them, as you can see, she has not lost them 'again' now I have returned them to her,,,again lol).

Small mask I put down as Astrid making it's first appearance in 7, is back for 8.2 and in the vortex space whirlpool. I am taking this as the introduction of Anais' own game and that we know catagorically Astrid is in it. I think that nails down that mask and is reflected in my sheet (And I think also confirms Veronica's mask too given placement).

Three masks that made a first appearance in 8.1 return for 8.2. One of these must be Cole's for my money. Tentatively marked which one I think. The new Jester mask comes back, still lost on this one, however, clues clues clues people...think beyond what you see..between Olivia and Kane???. Callista is now completely seperated (as she has been in the past) but joined with three masks. I never thought before about peripheral characters having a mask but maybe...one has to be Cole...what we assumed was Kiyomi's is on it's own....hmmmm...one for Otto perhaps or Nadia, and think I have Cynthia's nailed down now too but...?

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All that aside, my Timeline and Character and Save Sheets are now completely done. Just waiting to see exactly where the new scenes fit into everything before I can complete my Timeline. Hopefully should be able to have them up very shortly after 0.8.2 Final hits.